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47˚ East 18˚ South 4

By Insertponceyfrenchnamehere on Thu, 01 Jan 1970

in a village

47˚ East 18˚ South 3

By Insertponceyfrenchnamehere on Thu, 01 Jan 1970

a continuation of something I started ages ago

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47˚ East 18˚ South 2

By Insertponceyfrenchnamehere on Thu, 01 Jan 1970

I have no idea what's going to happen next

47˚ East 18˚ South

By Insertponceyfrenchnamehere on Thu, 01 Jan 1970

This might be the beginning of something. Could you please say if it makes you want to read more?

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You are lucky to have NHS

Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2023

You are lucky to have NHS dentists where you live Maxine. There are none at all here!

Posted in The Dentist.

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the first (and possibly only!

Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023

the first (and possibly only!) time I ever tasted proper Turkish coffee was from a little tent at a free festival in 1975. Generally England in the seventies was the land that taste forgot as you know, so it was a very delicious revelation! I don...

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When my youngest son was

Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2023

When my youngest son was little, during a heatwave, I dug a very big hole in the garden and filled it with the hose. he still says The Mud Pit was the best thing ever - I had to hose him down before I let him back into the house though!

Posted in Mud fondue!

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Please pass the cherry above

Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023

Please pass the cherry above onto your daughter - she deserves it! It's not easy speaking up in a hospital, and it doesn't always bring results as I know from bitter experience but I'm pleased she was successful. I hope you don't mind me saying...

Posted in Bitty Barby Boob RIP part 2

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Happy Valentine's day Gayle!

Posted on Tue, 14 Feb 2023

Happy Valentine's day Gayle!

Posted in Love me, love me not: some alternative Valentine’s Day thoughts

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A very big well done from me

Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2022

A very big well done from me for this series. Your writing has developed in leaps and bounds since your first pieces. I look forward to your next story!

Posted in Runaway Mother Epilogue

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Some nice scene setting in

Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2022

Some nice scene setting in this first part.

A couple of things:

twelve year’s old.

also, there's quite a lot of repeating of stuff, and it would read much better if you had a good edit. For example:

The first lesson...

Posted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part One of Two)

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Loved this account and the

Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2022

Loved this account and the pics. You have such beautiful walks nearby Rhiannon, thank you for sharing them here

Posted in Above Old Downton Lodge

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‘I personally don’t like

Posted on Sun, 11 Sep 2022

‘I personally don’t like horrors, but it’s the only genre where you get to be free and kill the monstrous bastards from your nightmares in any way imaginable.’

A killer line! and a well deserved cherry mono

Posted in the forgotten stranger

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You deserve a medal of some

Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022

You deserve a medal of some kind for overcoming all those hurdles Rhiannon! Glad you didn't meet any angry farmers along the way! (isn't it illegal to fence in public footways?)