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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 557273 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Cherry

47˚ East 18˚ South 3

a continuation of something I started ages ago
Cherry

47˚ East 18˚ South 2

I have no idea what's going to happen next
Cherry

47˚ East 18˚ South

This might be the beginning of something. Could you please say if it makes you want to read more?

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2507 of my comments have received 2561 Great Feedback votes

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It's such a shame to hear so

Posted on Mon, 23 Oct 2023

It's such a shame to hear so many of us didn't enjoy those years - some teachers shine out in my memory but they were few and far between. Why are we so rubbish at education?

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Posted in Come to the Sports Hall

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This is so beautiful onemore

Posted on Thu, 17 Aug 2023

This is so beautiful onemore - thought-provoking too. I must admit I was on the other birds' side until I read this - now I feel sadness for both. Thank you so much for posting it and congratulations on the very well deserved golden cherries. You...

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Posted in The Loneliness of a Cuckoo

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You are lucky to have NHS

Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2023

You are lucky to have NHS dentists where you live Maxine. There are none at all here!

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Posted in The Dentist.

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the first (and possibly only!

Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023

the first (and possibly only!) time I ever tasted proper Turkish coffee was from a little tent at a free festival in 1975. Generally England in the seventies was the land that taste forgot as you know, so it was a very delicious revelation! I don...

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Posted in Scorn Not His Djezve

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When my youngest son was

Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2023

When my youngest son was little, during a heatwave, I dug a very big hole in the garden and filled it with the hose. he still says The Mud Pit was the best thing ever - I had to hose him down before I let him back into the house though!

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Posted in Mud fondue!

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Please pass the cherry above

Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023

Please pass the cherry above onto your daughter - she deserves it! It's not easy speaking up in a hospital, and it doesn't always bring results as I know from bitter experience but I'm pleased she was successful. I hope you don't mind me saying...

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Posted in Bitty Barby Boob RIP part 2

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Happy Valentine's day Gayle! 

Posted on Tue, 14 Feb 2023

Happy Valentine's day Gayle! 

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Posted in Love me, love me not: some alternative Valentine’s Day thoughts

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A very big well done from me

Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2022

A very big well done from me for this series. Your writing has developed in leaps and bounds since your first pieces. I look forward to your next story!

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Posted in Runaway Mother Epilogue

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Some nice scene setting in

Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2022

Some nice scene setting in this first part. 

A couple of things:

twelve year’s old.

also, there's quite a lot of repeating of stuff, and it would read much better if you had a good edit. For example:

The first lesson...

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Posted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part One of Two)

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Loved this account and the

Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2022

Loved this account and the pics. You have such beautiful walks nearby Rhiannon, thank you for sharing them here

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Posted in Above Old Downton Lodge

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