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My stories have been read 522173 times
and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2377 of my 15,215 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2429 votes
Beautifully done, and a
Posted on Wed, 22 Apr 2020
Beautifully done, and a perfect daily pick. Swan stalking obsession eh? I wonder if there's a helpline for that. Seriously though, I once had the privilege of having a swans' nest at the bottom of my garden, and watching them build, then guard...
Read full commentPosted in I Want To Tell You Things
What they all say ^ ^ - a
Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020
What they all say ^ ^ - a fine piece of writing, but I hope you go and spend some time with the lemurs and kittens of facebook now. You know it makes sense xx
Read full commentPosted in Just Put Me In The Fridge
reading your comment, there's
Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2019
reading your comment, there's a real sense of it in the second verse. Suicide is brutal to those it leaves behind
Read full commentPosted in The Worst
coming over here, making all
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019
coming over here, making all that noise...
They are lovely to watch aren...
Read full commentPosted in Geese
You're right - and while, of
Posted on Sat, 10 Aug 2019
You're right - and while, of course, once you've written something it stops being your personal property with your interpretation and becomes whatever the reader reads it as being, I think these readings add a really interesting dimension to the...
Read full commentPosted in In perpetuity
I really like all the detail
Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019
I really like all the detail in this and also think the two main characters are shaping up nicely
A couple of suggestions:
The dialogue as they walk around the town - it's a bit block of text followed by block of text and I'm not...
Read full commentPosted in Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1)
nicely written - I prefer
Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019
nicely written - I prefer this piece to the one you posted yesterday - perhaps because the writing is a bit more relaxed?
Read full commentPosted in The Tar Pit (1 of 9)
Di, from experience with one
Posted on Sat, 29 Sep 2018
Di, from experience with one of my sons, a diagnosis is really important - and it can take ages to arrange unless you get it done privately which can cost a fortune. A diagnosis of dyspraxia meant my son was given extra time in GCSEs (whatever...
Read full commentPosted in A Martian in the Closet
Hahahaha - thanks for the
Posted on Wed, 11 Jul 2018
Hahahaha - thanks for the translation London/parson - I know it's petty but Tony was very strict about that so I guess we should be too
Read full commentPosted in The meeting - good friends
No sense in talking about the
Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018
No sense in talking about the cracks.
Blokes don’t need help,
just a good night’s sleep
a shower
a shit
a shave and
a shag
my father said
my mates said
my brother said
that makes me so...
Read full commentPosted in The Iceberg
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