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What they all say ^ ^ - a
Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020
What they all say ^ ^ - a fine piece of writing, but I hope you go and spend some time with the lemurs and kittens of facebook now. You know it makes sense xx
Read full commentPosted in Just Put Me In The Fridge
This has more twists than a
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2020
This has more twists than a whole series of Dallas, Luigi - I am expecting Joan Collins to come swishing through the door any minute now.
Read full commentPosted in Who Do You Think You Are
reading your comment, there's
Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2019
reading your comment, there's a real sense of it in the second verse. Suicide is brutal to those it leaves behind
Read full commentPosted in The Worst
coming over here, making all
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019
coming over here, making all that noise...
They are lovely to watch aren...
Read full commentPosted in Geese
I really like all the detail
Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019
I really like all the detail in this and also think the two main characters are shaping up nicely
A couple of suggestions:
The dialogue as they walk around the town - it's a bit block of text followed by block of text and I'm not...
Read full commentPosted in Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1)
nicely written - I prefer
Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019
nicely written - I prefer this piece to the one you posted yesterday - perhaps because the writing is a bit more relaxed?
Read full commentPosted in The Tar Pit (1 of 9)
Di, from experience with one
Posted on Sat, 29 Sep 2018
Di, from experience with one of my sons, a diagnosis is really important - and it can take ages to arrange unless you get it done privately which can cost a fortune. A diagnosis of dyspraxia meant my son was given extra time in GCSEs (whatever...
Read full commentPosted in A Martian in the Closet
No sense in talking about the
Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018
No sense in talking about the cracks.
Blokes don’t need help,
just a good night’s sleep
a shower
a shit
a shave and
a shag
my father said
my mates said
my brother said
that makes me so...
Read full commentPosted in The Iceberg
I really like the meticulous
Posted on Sun, 26 Nov 2017
I really like the meticulous detail in this piece - the timetable of the woman's day works well as a frame for the narrative, and the small events come across as very authentic, as does the relationship between the couple.
Suggestions: In...
Read full commentPosted in May you live all the days of your life
Hi - what a fascinating peice
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014
Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...
Read full commentPosted in 7 days in Tehran
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