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I really enjoyed this - would
Posted on Wed, 31 Oct 2018
I really enjoyed this - would definitely like to read more. If you're looking for suggestions, I was a little confused during the dialogue as to who was speaking. Hope you post more soon!
Read full commentPosted in Project 7
Very funny. Nice to see you
Posted on Wed, 31 Oct 2018
Very funny. Nice to see you back again!
Read full commentPosted in For Those In Peril On The Sea
What a lovely tribute this is
Posted on Tue, 30 Oct 2018
What a lovely tribute this is. Well done Forest
Read full commentPosted in Making Amends
Mark's right - this is a
Posted on Sun, 28 Oct 2018
Mark's right - this is a great standalone piece. Wonderful way to end on a rainbow!
Read full commentPosted in Gift: A Son's Story (short extract 3)
For the sticky tapes try the
Posted on Sat, 27 Oct 2018
For the sticky tapes try the very cheap shops - the pound ones. Or I bet Ebay or Amazon have them. I wouldn't go looking for bodies in the attic either (even bird bodies!). Good luck anyway - I hope you get some peace soon
edit: Amazon...
Read full commentPosted in The Swarm
Hilary, you poor thing! You
Posted on Sat, 27 Oct 2018
Hilary, you poor thing! You have really brought to life the horror of fly infestations. It happened to me once and it was absolutely horrible - actually had me in tears. We tried everything - all those electronic devices, swats - I wouldn't use...
Read full commentPosted in The Swarm
Nice to see you back writing
Posted on Thu, 25 Oct 2018
Nice to see you back writing again Penny. I like this IP response - especially the little details like not knowing what a scrunchie is called (not sure if you use the same word as here?)
Read full commentPosted in "Would she notice?"
clever! I like the strut.
Posted on Tue, 16 Oct 2018
clever! I like the strut. When you do the next draft, this bit reads a little too much like a wikipedia entry:
“Nigeria is a vast country and made up of several provinces. There has always been conflict between Christians and Muslims...
Read full commentPosted in Monroe (5)
I recognise that cat from her
Posted on Sat, 06 Oct 2018
I recognise that cat from her many photos on Facebook Harry! Very glad to read this story of consequences-with-a-happy-ending
Read full commentPosted in How writing (and a cat called Daisy) may have saved my life...
A very thoughtful and well
Posted on Sat, 29 Sep 2018
A very thoughtful and well considered account Harry. I've just left a link to this on Di_Hard's piece and suggested she read it. It seems both of you are at seperate ends of the same decision:
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Read full commentPosted in A Martian in the Closet
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