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‘That’s no what you’re friend

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

‘That’s no what you’re friend Kimmie says. She says you were partying and she went into the room with one of his friends and she came into the living room after hearing a whaling noise '

your friend Kimmie. a wailing noise. Also I don't...

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Posted in Angel (change and charges)

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The way in which you show the

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

The way in which you show the different reactions build up a very believable picture - so sad.

You've put the correct rating on this piece, however the preview needs to be U rated as it appears on the front page of the site. Could you...

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Posted in Matthew

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Perhaps you'll finish it now

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

Perhaps you'll finish it now and let us see the result? I enjoyed this, although if you're looking for suggestions I'd say it begins to meander a little once you start talking about the various experts

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Posted in PCT Beginning

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I love seeing that someone's

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

I love seeing that someone's been inspired by another person's work on here, and this is the second time in as many days (see Jenny's piece inspired by celticman). This is short but says everything needed - thank you for posting it Di

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Posted in driverless

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Wonderful writing - I didn't

Posted on Sun, 10 Feb 2019

Wonderful writing - I didn't read this part the first time around (or perhaps you didn't post it?)

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Posted in Christmas With Debbie

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yes, it did become clear once

Posted on Sat, 09 Feb 2019

yes, it did become clear once I'd read on (not before I'd wondered whether it was a typo and you'd meant snacks perhaps), but it was a shame it interrupted the flow of reading. I wonder if you could change it for something else? Clicking maybe?...

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Posted in Above Clun

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I think it's also a diuretic

Posted on Fri, 08 Feb 2019

I think it's also a diuretic so don't have Ed's drink and go on a long car journey!

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Posted in Dandelions

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Coming along nicely

Posted on Tue, 05 Feb 2019

Coming along nicely

You have some rogue apostrophes here:

'Each one of them held a hundred-dollars in one’s, five’s, and ten’s, '

'many of them tips, singles,  five’s, and a few Dusty Hamilton’s here and there.'

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Posted in The Tar Pit (3 of 9)

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I wish you'd post these more

Posted on Tue, 05 Feb 2019

I wish you'd post these more often - I love them!

One small typo here: 'Chanel stayed long enough to get through the Ors d’hoevres' 

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Posted in A MOVEABLE FEAST (from Ribbentrop's Chair)

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Brilliant! A wonderful little

Posted on Mon, 28 Jan 2019

Brilliant! A wonderful little slice of magic - you have placed everything just right - not too much of the magic and not too much of the present, and the dialogue was perfect too. Well done.

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Posted in Walk In The Park With Snow (Part 2 of 2)

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