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There's some nice observation
Posted on Sat, 16 Jun 2018
There's some nice observation in this, and the dialogue is well spaced out and believable. I really wish I could say that the plot so far is rubbish, and that no adult would behave in such a way - but instead I just felt very angry after reading...
Read full commentPosted in Choose One Cake Only
The passing on of things - it
Posted on Thu, 07 Jun 2018
The passing on of things - it's a rite of passage, and simply and beautifully expressed here.
Read full commentPosted in Here Are Things
I have never heard of wind
Posted on Mon, 28 May 2018
I have never heard of wind turbines (?) referred to as rumplestiltskins before. They look so graceful and other-worldly for a distance, don't they? Some wonderful imagery in this poem Di
Read full commentPosted in renewable
Nicely done drew
Posted on Fri, 25 May 2018
Nicely done drew
Read full commentPosted in In the Next Breath
made my head spin by the end!
Posted on Thu, 17 May 2018
Very clever. Made my head spin by the end!
Read full commentPosted in Anachronistic Harry
I hope there's more of this
Posted on Wed, 16 May 2018
I hope there's more of this to come!
ps: you have two 'come over all unnecessary's in a very short space of time - perhaps one needs changing?
Read full commentPosted in Crazu the Brave
You drove me to google as I
Posted on Sun, 13 May 2018
You drove me to google as I hadn't heard of this before and I 'kind of' got the gist before reading the wiki page, but it was much clearer afterwards, so I'm going to leave the link here in case anyone else is as ignorant as me: ...
Read full commentPosted in Surasawa Pond
This one packs a punch London
Posted on Wed, 09 May 2018
This one packs a punch London - some great imagery, it really emphasises the futility of artificial borders. Well done
One thing - are you sure it's calloused to? It's very clear what you're saying, it just sounds a bit odd to me (might...
Read full commentPosted in Calloused to Birdsong
Love this little moment in
Posted on Thu, 03 May 2018
Love this little moment in time. It reminds me of that strange glow colour photos used to have in the sixites and seventies.
One small suggestion - I think it's 'puts paid to' instead of 'pay'
Read full commentPosted in Romance Killer
echoing airyfairy here, both
Posted on Thu, 26 Apr 2018
echoing airyfairy here, both parts such a good read, perfectly paced with believable characters and dialogue. Quite disappointed to hear you don't have plans to continue this - is there anything we can do to twist your arm? (I want to know what...
Read full commentPosted in Something Hard Inside Him (Part 2)
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