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My stories have been read 587233 times
and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2600 of my 15,618 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2674 votes
hahaha - brilliant! You've
Posted on Sat, 06 Dec 2014
hahaha - brilliant! You've taken ALL the songs now though Tina! What's everyone else going to use?
Read full commentPosted in Can't Stop the Music
beautiful Sam. Reminds me of
Posted on Fri, 07 Nov 2014
beautiful Sam. Reminds me of a poem about Addlestrop (no idea how it was spelt)
Read full commentPosted in Train stop
quite spectacularly good -
Posted on Wed, 29 Oct 2014
quite spectacularly good - even by your standards!
Read full commentPosted in She had not aged well
missed this Bee. Glad i found
Posted on Mon, 20 Oct 2014
missed this Bee. Glad i found it now though - there's a kind of poetic rhythm to this prose - the ebb and flow of all the pasts. Wonderful
Read full commentPosted in All the Ghosts of Us
I found this very readable -
Posted on Thu, 23 Oct 2014
I found this very readable - liked the gentle humour, the main character. Although it kept my attention to the end, it could really do with being a bit less ponderous, and - i don't know if this is to be continued - would definitely enjoy...
Read full commentPosted in Early Life Crisis
A very enjoyable read - I
Posted on Sat, 04 Oct 2014
A very enjoyable read - I look forward to more of this. Welcome to ABC!
Read full commentPosted in The Diary of an Aspiring Hitman - Chapter 1
Splendidly surreal! (either
Posted on Sat, 04 Oct 2014
Splendidly surreal! (either that or you've taken a LOT of drugs recently)
Read full commentPosted in Dabavan III
I enjoyed this very much -
Posted on Sat, 27 Sep 2014
I enjoyed this very much - you have created a strong narrative voice. A couple of suggestions: you could possibly quicken the pace a little, also the ending is a bit weak and finally in the second paragraph I think you need to switch high and low...
Read full commentPosted in THE ISLAND
I really like this too - you
Posted on Sat, 13 Sep 2014
I really like this too - you've really brought the characters to life - hopefully not so much as they'd notice!
Read full commentPosted in I have no sympathy
Another compelling piece -
Posted on Mon, 08 Sep 2014
Another compelling piece - again I think you could have done a bit more with the ending. Do keep going.
Although this is rated 18, which is fine, the title appears on the home page so must be a U rating. It needs to be either changed, or...
Read full commentPosted in F**k Tuesdays
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