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A Roof Over Their Head

By luigi_pagano on Mon, 27 Jul 2026

We all fervently hope

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Metamorphosis - Resubmitted

By luigi_pagano on Sat, 18 Jul 2026

One from my archive

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Consequence

By luigi_pagano on Thu, 16 Jul 2026

Ouch.

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The waywe heard: " Puppet on a String" 1967

By luigi_pagano on Tue, 14 Jul 2026

Giuseppe 'Joe' Bertolini's ice cream parlour was at its busiest in April 1967 as a popular hangout for teenagers buying milkshakes, sodas and his...

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As Jenny said, you are

Posted on Thu, 09 May 2019

As Jenny said, you are definitely on a roll. Your description of the fascination that those walks around the Pembrokeshire coast engender clearly reveals your love of nature.
Congratulations on the cherries.

Luigi x

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A dysfunctional family and

Posted on Thu, 23 Oct 2014

A dysfunctional family and calamitous consequences. A blunt and revealing message of an awful situation.

Luigi xxx

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Honoured by the Cherry Pick.

Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2026

Honoured by the Cherry Pick. Thank you, ABCTaes editors.

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I think we may be talking at

Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2026

I think we may be talking at cross purposes here, Di. In my previous comment to Gloskat, I pointed out that the poem wasn't autobiographical but was based on what happened to a group of my friends in Italy many years ago.
They attended a...

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Hi Kat. Thanks for sharing

Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2026

Hi Kat. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
I too underwent a transition from Catholicism to agnosticism, but not as traumatic as my poem seems to suggest. I have used artistic licence to describe a situation that was prevalent during my...

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A whimsical, creative poem

Posted on Mon, 21 Sep 2026

A whimsical, creative poem about an ordinary routine (a shower), triggering meandering thoughts and ingeniously juxtaposing them. An enjoyable read.

Posted in Everything shower

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Variation on a thrme,

Posted on Sat, 18 Jul 2026

Variation on a thrme, Rhiannon,

Best, Luigi x

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Your kind words are greatly

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2026

Your kind words are greatly appreciated, Alex Alexander. Glad you emjoyed the piece.

Best wishes, Luigi

Posted in Penny Pass the Story - Part 10

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That's true, Jack, so many

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2026

That's true, Jack, so many loose threads impossible to tie up neatly. In my narative I transformed the Sheriff froman an inept person that people took for a buffoon to a clever undercover agent able to gather clues surreptitiously.

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The story had so many threads

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2026

The story had so many threads that it was easy to latch on to one to reach a satisfactory conclusion. I hope my interpretation of the finale is acceptable to the challenger.