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Teeth Tales - Decline and Fall

By luigi_pagano on Wed, 04 Mar 2026

A second bite at the Teeth Tales challenge.

Humour

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Teeth Tales - Grandfather's Choppers

By luigi_pagano on Sun, 01 Mar 2026

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Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

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Skeleton

By luigi_pagano on Sun, 01 Mar 2026

Imge: CC0 1.0 Universal Public Domain Dedication. Creative Commons

Surreal

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AI and I

By luigi_pagano on Mon, 23 Feb 2026

Image from Wikipedia - Creative Commons Attribution 2.0 Generic license. Author: https://www.vpnsrus.com/

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352 of my comments have received 369 Great Feedback votes

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Your kind words are greatly

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2026

Your kind words are greatly appreciated, Alex Alexander. Glad you emjoyed the piece.

Best wishes, Luigi

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That's true, Jack, so many

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2026

That's true, Jack, so many loose threads impossible to tie up neatly. In my narative I transformed the Sheriff froman an inept person that people took for a buffoon to a clever undercover agent able to gather clues surreptitiously.

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The story had so many threads

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2026

The story had so many threads that it was easy to latch on to one to reach a satisfactory conclusion. I hope my interpretation of the finale is acceptable to the challenger.

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Happy to have taken part,

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2026

Happy to have taken part, Claudine, it was fun.

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Yes, Kat, I agree that all

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026

Yes, Kat, I agree that all the chapters so far have been well written and entertaining and it has been fun reading the various interpretations. My only concern was that with four parts remaining, with a limit of 8,000 words in total, the next...

Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 6

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It doesn't look likely that

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026

I am sorry to be a dissenting voice, Paul. You have written a fluent sequence for Penny's story, but I feel that, with only four parts to go, the narrative ought to be tightening, not expanding with extra characters and situations if we want to...

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Excellent poem, Scharlie, and

Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2026

Excellent poem, Scharlie, and very romantic. You must excuse me for being a little bit pedantic. Not every reader is a polymath and the phrase Sin ti ought to be emphasised, for the illiterates like me, either by italics or as a note...

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Greatly appreciated, randy

Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2026

Greatly appreciated, randy-johnson, thank you.

Best wishes, Luigi