To your own self be true, the truth shall set you free A lie which is half a truth is ever the wicked of lies Be vigilant! A lie begets a lie Truths...
Once I saw a rose of absolutely stunning beauty Rhiannon, I found it in my room the night before my grand-dad (oupa) passed on, in a glass, I don't know how it got there, and as in your poem the next night it was faded...
separating
Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2026
Very interesting, life long mating I've never thought of it this way – the uncoupling – separation permanence. Sad, tragic.
Beautiful poetry! Tom
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beautiful description
Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2026
What a beautiful description of a night thunderstorm.
Fantastic! Tom
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You are a born teacher
Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2026
You are a born teacher and definitely a granny and a very Fun one!
Well done! Tom
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you are only improving
Posted on Mon, 15 Jun 2026
Your writing is only improving, as if you are finally realising that yes indeed, you are a good writer!
My best colour is Brown Of course! Brunette!
She is warm Love x Tom
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I like your poem!
Posted on Thu, 11 Jun 2026
I like your poem a lot Rhiannon, to me it proves you are still open-minded, indeed, and bound by logic! Adventurous and playful, imaginative.
At (y/our) age hey?
Very Good! Tom
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Once I saw a rose
Posted on Fri, 05 Jun 2026
Once I saw a rose
Once I saw a rose of absolutely stunning beauty Rhiannon, I found it in my room the night before my grand-dad (oupa) passed on, in a glass, I don't know how it got there, and as in your poem the next night it was faded...
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Unbelievable!
Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026
Planting trees by the hundreds of thousands and by the million is probably our best defence against global warming, and how pleasant!
Machines of nature capturing and removing CO2 back into into carbon (fuels) and free oxygen gas, the...
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classical style
Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2025
Brilliant, classical style Jenny! You've blown new life into this! The right thing at the right time?
In South Africa we are much more liberal and humane, services of traditional healers, witchdoctors (sangoma's) can be covered by medical...
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sense of wonder
Posted on Tue, 05 May 2026
Lovely piece, brings back a sense of wonder.
See you! Tom
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Beautiful!
Posted on Sun, 03 May 2026
Beautiful story! It sounds very much like when Aslan founded the Land of Narnia in the Chronicles!
The Gospel of John begins with,
"In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God".
All the best...
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