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Story59. After Midnight Ewan05 months 1 week ago
Story58. Get Smart Ewan15 months 2 weeks ago
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Story56. Little Italy Ewan05 months 2 weeks ago
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Story54. Money, Honey Ewan05 months 2 weeks ago
StoryTaking my liberty Parson Thru85 months 2 weeks ago
Story53. Goodbye, Earl Ewan05 months 2 weeks ago
Story52. Saturday Night's Alright For Fighting Ewan05 months 3 weeks ago
StoryThe Stranger In The Pub jolono185 months 3 weeks ago
Story51. What's The Use of Getting Sober? Ewan05 months 3 weeks ago
StoryI Tell Myself This When I Am Afraid onemorething145 months 3 weeks ago
Story50. 50-50 Ewan05 months 3 weeks ago
StoryPrelude to a Storm JamesF35 months 3 weeks ago
Story49. Moonlight Drive Ewan05 months 3 weeks ago
StoryFoundling Ewan25 months 3 weeks ago
Story48. Two's Company Ewan05 months 3 weeks ago
Story47. Georgia On My Mind Ewan05 months 3 weeks ago
StoryMy Father's Diaries Ewan25 months 3 weeks ago
StoryListen Amavisti145 months 3 weeks ago
Story46. Sugar, Sugar Ewan65 months 3 weeks ago
Story44. God Shuffled His Feet Ewan05 months 4 weeks ago
Story45. Greased Lightnin' Ewan05 months 4 weeks ago

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"The Only Honest Answer" Mr Martínez Nine

Ok I promise something will happen or be revealed soon, but hey, we're only 8000 words in. What if I wanted to get to 80,000? Image stolen from Bar Poligono 's facebook page, I don't even know where it is! Anyway, I expect the link to their facebook page will drive hundreds of customers to their business.
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"The Zhuzh Sound" Mr Martínez 8

What is the 'zhuzh' sound? If you know, you know. Image source is https://www.curbsideclassic.com/automotive-histories/automotive-history-... No known copyright issues.
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"The Ocarina Playing Snatches" Martinez Seven

sssssssssssssssss.... Image is from Wikipedia Commons.
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"Not Even God" Mr Martínez Five

Not quite fizzled... yet. Image author's own.

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95 of my comments have received 98 Great Feedback votes

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There are always

Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017

at least two poems on the page: the one the writer wrote and the one the reader understands (or not). Poetry truly is the infinite art, since its meaning is open to infinite interpretations. I know many people who do not enjoy this nebulous...

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Posted in time travelling

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2nd

Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017

person narration is notoriously difficult to pull off, but you've managed it well. What I like so much about what you do is the vast swathes of subtext, the gaps between the lines that are so tempting to fill and that we are unlikely to get wrong...

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Posted in The Oil Refinery

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You

Posted on Thu, 14 Sep 2017

missed the "Flight" from Flight Lieutenant: No Lieutenants since the RFC became the RAF in 1918,

Best, Ewan, (former Flight Sergeant, No. 51 Sqn)

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Posted in The Second World War: PART 4 - Andrew MacDonald - Sagan (1943)

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This

Posted on Tue, 14 May 2013

is poetry. This is life.
This is sharp and it cuts like a knife.

Lovely, lovely poetry. Hope we hear more from Shoe sometime soon.

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Posted in Viscosity

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I

Posted on Sat, 26 Aug 2017

like to think I am capable of separating the art from the artist.

Years and years ago I did A101 Arts Foundation course with the OU (it would have been about '83). At summer school in Hounslow (!) we trashed a whole afternoon with the...

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Posted in Evening Walk in a Seaside Town

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Yes,

Posted on Tue, 22 Aug 2017

not obvious, certainly layered  - and thought provoking. Good use of the opposites in conjunction and the occasional alliteration, all the while making it look effortless.

Very good indeed.

 

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Posted in Inheritance

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What

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017

a pleasure it was to have known a little about your father's father in your father's own words. There is so little to connect us goyim with the terrible things done in those dark days. Every time a survivor goes, another thread is severed....

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Posted in Shlamek

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I read quite a few

Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2017

eye-witness accounts of the evacuation. One of them had this:
"the angry hornet noise of dive bombers." So I do not take all the credit for that turn of phrase.
Many of these eye-witness reports were full of such observations, very...

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Posted in No Armada

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Most enjoyable.

Posted on Mon, 17 Jul 2017

Very descriptive, some nice alliteration and imagery. I particularly liked your neologism, 'coolcurled'.

You have a typo, lizard has one 'Z'.

Do you really need to put 'ivy' at the end? A suitable accompanying...

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Posted in a sort of green

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Ah, see, classic imposter

Posted on Sun, 16 Jul 2017

Ah, see, classic imposter syndrome behaviour, denying one's achievements!
;-)

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Posted in Another one of those

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