Ewan
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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | The Spiral Tightens | Ewan | 0 | 5 months 1 week ago |
| Story | There Is | Ewan | 0 | 5 months 1 week ago |
| Story | We Are Making Plans | Ewan | 1 | 5 months 1 week ago |
| Story | Icarus Calling | jennifer | 3 | 5 months 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Outside In | Ewan | 4 | 5 months 2 weeks ago |
| Story | The Haddock Who Was a Pillock | pepsoid | 2 | 5 months 2 weeks ago |
| Story | A to B | Terrence Oblong | 8 | 5 months 2 weeks ago |
| Story | The Picture Ranch 6 | Ewan | 4 | 5 months 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Thumbs Up on Sunday | ice rivers | 12 | 5 months 3 weeks ago |
| Story | Two for You | ice rivers | 8 | 5 months 3 weeks ago |
| Story | Doin' The Dean | ice rivers | 2 | 5 months 3 weeks ago |
| Story | I Prefer Thaddeus | Ewan | 0 | 5 months 3 weeks ago |
| Story | Half a Tangerine (Part 2) | fatboy74 | 12 | 5 months 3 weeks ago |
| Story | Half a Tangerine (Part 1) | fatboy74 | 14 | 5 months 4 weeks ago |
| Story | Late September In The Park, Feeling Old | Kilb50 | 4 | 5 months 4 weeks ago |
| Blog entry | Story, Poem of the Week and Inspiration Point. | Ewan | 0 | 5 months 4 weeks ago |
| Story | Which accounts for the hump on the camel... | philwhiteland | 2 | 5 months 4 weeks ago |
| Story | love and laundry | sylviec | 5 | 5 months 4 weeks ago |
| Story | A Friday Morning Rally Poem for the Dream I Never Had | poetjude | 2 | 6 months 6 days ago |
| Story | Monroe ( 10) | jolono | 7 | 6 months 1 week ago |
| Blog entry | "Last Night I Met John Adcock" A Review | Ewan | 0 | 6 months 1 week ago |
| Story | Waiting for George | Ewan | 0 | 6 months 1 week ago |
| Story | Natural Religion | Noo | 6 | 6 months 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Empty Bedrooms | maudsy | 7 | 6 months 2 weeks ago |
| Story | The Patients of Job | Ewan | 1 | 6 months 3 weeks ago |
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Ink
If you can't write, write about not writing... (How self-absorbed is that..? No, don't answer that...)
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The Instrumentalist
You'll probably work it out... image is out of copyright, to the best of my knowledge.
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Hob
This is an old one. I think I took it off to publish it with the now defunct Ether Books, where about 2 people read it. Image is in Public Domain and does not require attribution.
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you'll have to read it to find out then, won't you? Image is from pixabay, no attribution required
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The Best Thing About Leaving
not about much... Photo by Edgar Pereira on Unsplash used by permission of the photographer
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2nd
Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017
person narration is notoriously difficult to pull off, but you've managed it well. What I like so much about what you do is the vast swathes of subtext, the gaps between the lines that are so tempting to fill and that we are unlikely to get wrong...
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You
Posted on Thu, 14 Sep 2017
missed the "Flight" from Flight Lieutenant: No Lieutenants since the RFC became the RAF in 1918,
Best, Ewan, (former Flight Sergeant, No. 51 Sqn)
Read full commentPosted in The Second World War: PART 4 - Andrew MacDonald - Sagan (1943)
This
Posted on Tue, 14 May 2013
is poetry. This is life.
This is sharp and it cuts like a knife.
Lovely, lovely poetry. Hope we hear more from Shoe sometime soon.
Read full commentPosted in Viscosity
I
Posted on Sat, 26 Aug 2017
like to think I am capable of separating the art from the artist.
Years and years ago I did A101 Arts Foundation course with the OU (it would have been about '83). At summer school in Hounslow (!) we trashed a whole afternoon with the...
Read full commentPosted in Evening Walk in a Seaside Town
Yes,
Posted on Tue, 22 Aug 2017
not obvious, certainly layered - and thought provoking. Good use of the opposites in conjunction and the occasional alliteration, all the while making it look effortless.
Very good indeed.
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What
Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017
a pleasure it was to have known a little about your father's father in your father's own words. There is so little to connect us goyim with the terrible things done in those dark days. Every time a survivor goes, another thread is severed....
Read full commentPosted in Shlamek
I read quite a few
Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2017
eye-witness accounts of the evacuation. One of them had this:
Read full comment"the angry hornet noise of dive bombers." So I do not take all the credit for that turn of phrase.
Many of these eye-witness reports were full of such observations, very...
Posted in No Armada
Most enjoyable.
Posted on Mon, 17 Jul 2017
Very descriptive, some nice alliteration and imagery. I particularly liked your neologism, 'coolcurled'.
You have a typo, lizard has one 'Z'.
Do you really need to put 'ivy' at the end? A suitable accompanying...
Read full commentPosted in a sort of green
Ah, see, classic imposter
Posted on Sun, 16 Jul 2017
Ah, see, classic imposter syndrome behaviour, denying one's achievements!
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Posted in Another one of those
Really liked this.
Posted on Thu, 13 Jul 2017
You might want to think about the "I"'s lining the page like telegraph poles. It often happens with a first person narrator, I've done it myself. Once it's pointed out you always see it.
Utterly, utterly believable. I hope it's fiction,...
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