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"At Least I Didn't Whistle" [Mr Martinez Part Twenty Six]
Short and bitter (like me)... Image author's own terrible photography.
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"Somewhere Full of Guiris" [Mr Martínez Twenty Five]
The Wild Rover Irish Pub in Barcelona is a much better place than I've made it sound, or at least it was when I was last there around 10 years ago. Image is a detail from a blog post illustration and has no copyright issues: source is https://www.barcrawlbarcelona.com/top-10-pubs-in-barcelona/
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"You Can Keep The Scissors"[Mister Martínez part twenty-four]
Like Martínez, I'm still moving, so I'm still living. Image source Google Maps 2015. Think we're ok. No Coke-fiends at the Cafe as far as I know.
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"He's Written a Book, He'll Want The Whole World to Know"[Mister Martínez Twenty Three]
Sweep? How is this image connected to the story? (Think laterally...) I bet you love a puzzle. Image source is dlpng.com and free for non-commercial use.
"Besides, I Don't Like Them Much" [Mister Martínez Twenty Two]
No more Mr Nice Guy... image source https://www.juxtapoz.com/news/street-art/q-flexibilidad-laboral-q-by-escif/ CC4.0
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Hi Ed,
Posted on Tue, 04 Aug 2020
loved this. Any reason for "night-lite" vice "night-light"? You have "nite-lite" at the end. Should "swats" in "swats-for-mocks" be swots (like I was)?
Well done.
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Thanks for sticking
Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020
with them Stephen, and for spotting the typo. I'm not sure where it's going yet, but it's not going anywhere before next week as I've a few things to do until Friday.
I think violence generally is sudden and shocking. The threat of...
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No, I just
Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2020
thought it was a pseudonym and he was really called J.R.Hartley. Thanks for the good wishes, I'll need them!
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Have
Posted on Tue, 26 May 2020
an egg, could be a osprey's. It would go well with a couple of cherries.
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Moving
Posted on Wed, 13 May 2020
heartfelt poetry.
You have a typo in the last line. 'Liaison' looks funny, but is the correct spelling.
I enjoyed this.
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Wish
Posted on Wed, 15 Apr 2020
I'd seen this yesterday. A bit of a sideways look itself, as I'm sure you intended.
You have a typo in para 6
"Her acquaintances or “friends” tend to have somewhat needy themselves,"
I cannot tell you...
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Builds well.
Posted on Tue, 14 Apr 2020
I wonder if you could have strung (ho,ho) the reader along a little longer. Not reveal that there are no strings quite yet. No matter. I'd be interested to read part II. Some might protest that your piece is a little over-written, but I think,...
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I'm supposed
Posted on Wed, 01 Apr 2020
to be working on Moffat III, but changes at Unbound mean that it probably won't be accepted for publication, so I've kind of lost enthusiasm for it. Moffat II No Good Deed is on the final straight before publishing in September, Covid-19...
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This is
Posted on Wed, 26 Feb 2020
particularly good.
You have a typo, doubtless caused by your "spool chukka", in para beginning 'In 1969...'
"The bus took us too and from the junior school." You need 'to' here.
An excellent exploration of what...
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Laughter
Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2020
in the dark, I know, but it's still laughter. Thanks for making me laugh out loud.
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