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Bronte's Inferno XVIII (I Was Thirsty)

More of this? Afraid so. Image source flicker.com : licence CC BY-NC-SA 2.0
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Bronte's Inferno XVII (Probably In His Underpants)

More of this? Afraid so. Image is free to use from clipart library.
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Bronte's Inferno XVI (All The Terrible Books)

Remember this? Hoping to get a novella out of it. Image made by me at canva.com. People component from clipart.com, free for non-commercial use.
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Tom's Swiss Cure

No clues, I'm afraid, except the image. If you do figure it out, you might say to yourself "how dare he?" And I would not argue with that. Image from Wiki commons.
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Victoria Mills, West Vale, Elland

It's a real place. Part of It's where they shoot that daytime TV programme with Nigel Havers and the antique experts. Image - author's own.
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Posted on Tue, 09 Feb 2016

All the best science fiction, this is our own present and reality viewed in a fun-house mirror. I'm going to read part two now. This is a great beginning. The voice is believable and distinctive. As it's 1st person POV you can get away with a...

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Posted in The Net Caster (Part One)

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Not a word misplaced, not a

Posted on Tue, 14 May 2013

Not a word misplaced, not a superfluous line.

Marvellous.

regards

Ewan

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Posted in The sadness of tulips

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There's

Posted on Wed, 06 Jan 2016

nothing wrong with a long sentence, provided it's completely clear and you don't lose the reader on the way. Dickens was pretty good at sentences which sometimes seemed like Latin periods, but he was a dab hand with a semi and full colon. Unlike...

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Posted in the hungry earth (2 of 2)

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I

Posted on Sun, 05 Oct 2014

...agree there's some nice description.

You need to avoid a tendency to tell. 'He had been able to avoid... etc.'

I'm not sure I believe the internal monologue in the paragraph beginning. 'He looked past the end...' You say the boy...

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Posted in K Ward - part 1 (Out of Sight)

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That's

Posted on Thu, 02 Oct 2014

the very word, uncanny. Fascinating etymology it has too.

Nice to hear from you. I've been away a while, I know

Ewan

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Posted in By the Light of a Gibbous Moon

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Confused

Posted on Fri, 13 Jun 2014

Hey Jack, great pieces on an interesting day.

Just one thing:

"I offered Ewan a cheese sandwich, but he said his
friend had made him an old-fashioned bacon buttie. They’d been in the
army together. I went to sit on the...

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Posted in Unbounders Away

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