Ewan
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Story | Bigger Brother | Ewan | 0 | 3 years 8 months ago |
Story | Feelin the Squeeze | Peter Bennett | 5 | 3 years 8 months ago |
Story | Dyin Embers | Peter Bennett | 8 | 3 years 8 months ago |
Story | Rude Awakenings (Part two of two) | Peter Bennett | 7 | 3 years 8 months ago |
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Story | WebWorld (3.2) | rosaliekempthorne | 5 | 3 years 9 months ago |
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Story | WebWorld (3.1) | rosaliekempthorne | 1 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | Another Night On a Bare Mountain | marandina | 32 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | What happens near Rome | Cooper King | 9 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | There Will Be Dust (A Wedding Feast) | Ewan | 3 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | Sanctuary | Elegantfowl | 17 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | WebWorld (2.4) | rosaliekempthorne | 4 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | AND YET... | griffonner | 4 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | The Vampire Walk- Continued | mark p | 2 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | Adam Maxwell -Farquhar (Tale 2) | mark p | 3 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | The Myth of Olympians | Ewan | 3 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | WebWorld (2.1) | rosaliekempthorne | 2 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | Sammy's Story | Kilb50 | 6 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | The Universal Backlot Wedding | Ewan | 4 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | Faces | Ewan | 1 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | Naming Names | Ewan | 3 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | Disenchantment 34 | Hades502 | 9 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | make up | like_a_daisy_girl | 2 | 3 years 9 months ago |
Story | Monday Morning in the Rain | ralph | 1 | 3 years 9 months ago |
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Posted on Tue, 09 Feb 2016
All the best science fiction, this is our own present and reality viewed in a fun-house mirror. I'm going to read part two now. This is a great beginning. The voice is believable and distinctive. As it's 1st person POV you can get away with a...
Read full commentPosted in The Net Caster (Part One)
Not a word misplaced, not a
Posted on Tue, 14 May 2013
Not a word misplaced, not a superfluous line.
Marvellous.
regards
Ewan
Read full commentPosted in The sadness of tulips
There's
Posted on Wed, 06 Jan 2016
nothing wrong with a long sentence, provided it's completely clear and you don't lose the reader on the way. Dickens was pretty good at sentences which sometimes seemed like Latin periods, but he was a dab hand with a semi and full colon. Unlike...
Read full commentPosted in the hungry earth (2 of 2)
I
Posted on Sun, 05 Oct 2014
...agree there's some nice description.
You need to avoid a tendency to tell. 'He had been able to avoid... etc.'
I'm not sure I believe the internal monologue in the paragraph beginning. 'He looked past the end...' You say the boy...
Read full commentPosted in K Ward - part 1 (Out of Sight)
That's
Posted on Thu, 02 Oct 2014
the very word, uncanny. Fascinating etymology it has too.
Nice to hear from you. I've been away a while, I know
Ewan
Read full commentPosted in By the Light of a Gibbous Moon
Confused
Posted on Fri, 13 Jun 2014
Hey Jack, great pieces on an interesting day.
Just one thing:
"I offered Ewan a cheese sandwich, but he said his
Read full commentfriend had made him an old-fashioned bacon buttie. They’d been in the
army together. I went to sit on the...
Posted in Unbounders Away
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