Ewan
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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | Busmar Astral | mitzi44 | 7 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Imagine | Ewan | 2 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Frequent Electric Trams | Terrence Oblong | 13 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Too Old to Rock and Roll, Too Young to Die | Ewan | 3 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Punters | marandina | 17 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | The Tra Lee | Ewan | 4 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Think of a Number [Cadae] | Ewan | 0 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | these are the lines | Ewan | 1 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Move Away, Jimmy Blue | Ewan | 6 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | With or Without You | marandina | 31 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Blog entry | Story and Poem of the Week and Inspiration Point 17 September 2021 | Ewan | 0 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Anniversary Rhyme | Ewan | 3 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | And... | Ewan | 1 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Don Diego | Ewan | 1 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Being Careful What You Wish For | Ed Crane | 21 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Sunday Morning, 3 a.m. | Ewan | 1 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | The Long and Spectacular Life of Agnes Magnusdottir 4 | drew_gummerson | 8 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Ticking | Ewan | 8 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Mostly Stalinist Conditions | Ewan | 6 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Gentlemen and Players | Ewan | 4 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Corona Log Entry - August 20, 2021 | jxmartin | 6 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | A Home Coming | Ewan | 2 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | WebWorld (4.4) | rosaliekempthorne | 2 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Mad Dogs and Englishmen | Ewan | 0 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | What did Jesus do? 2 | celticman | 4 | 4 years 3 months ago |








This rich
Posted on Sun, 18 Jun 2017
and textured riot of colour and blooms reminded me of Christina Rossetti's work. It is a deserved Facebook/Twitter Pick of the Day. Why not share or retweet if you like it too_
Read full commentPosted in The Ghost Queen.
terrific stuff...
Posted on Thu, 08 Jun 2017
As good on the ins and outs of the Basketball dream as Harlan Coben (it's a compliment)
best
Ewan
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Two
Posted on Wed, 07 Jun 2017
Typos, it's Gauguin!
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Did
Posted on Sat, 27 May 2017
I tell you how much I like this? There is satire, menace, allegory, myth and fable, also some tight writing anyone would be proud to have written. It takes genuine talent to get all that stuff in a piece of writing without bashing people over the...
Read full commentPosted in Boatman's dream 22
Yes,
Posted on Tue, 09 May 2017
you could actually start from "The sun blazed". All the expository back story is a dense amount of telling about the characters. You could show a little all the way through.
"Most of the time he wore a light grey...
Read full commentPosted in Caiman's bazaar
For me...
Posted on Wed, 03 May 2017
and how I write (I know, we're all different) I'd keep banging these out and then edit when you've completed a narrative (arc or spiral, who cares?) This is all sufficiently intriguing for me to persevere. If Tim needs to go, get rid of him later...
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I do
Posted on Thu, 07 Jul 2016
agree with Jack that the ending seems a little rushed. I'm not sure I want to see (much) more backstory or a substantially longer piece, though. Have you thought about making the story arc more circular... start from just before where it...
Read full commentPosted in Flowers (Part Two of Two) (IP)
Splendid...
Posted on Thu, 07 Jul 2016
the welter of detail contrasts with the things you leave out. The combination of observation of the mundane and the barest of allusions to horrific deeds makes it all the more chilling. Fine stuff.
Read full commentPosted in Flowers (Part Two of Two) (IP)
A long time ago...
Posted on Mon, 28 Mar 2016
When I was first posting on ABCTales (I think) BJD was around too. I know he was when I was an editor. He must have gone away for a while. Any comments, though very insightful and worth following, were sometimes really, well, not fluffy. I know...
Read full commentPosted in COSMIC ARBORETUM
Hmm...
Posted on Fri, 18 Mar 2016
Almost everything you do has me thinking of gothic cathedrals and mediaeval buildings. Perhaps it's the ring o' roses I hear. Nice nod to the grumpy Librarian, too.
Yep, the no-win situation of low-self esteem. "I can't be any good because...
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