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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | Rude Awakenings (Part two of two) | Peter Bennett | 7 | 2 years 8 months ago |
| Story | WebWorld (3.3) | rosaliekempthorne | 1 | 2 years 8 months ago |
| Story | WebWorld (3.2) | rosaliekempthorne | 5 | 2 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Focus on the lips | Ross_Lowe | 12 | 2 years 8 months ago |
| Story | WebWorld (3.1) | rosaliekempthorne | 1 | 2 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Another Night On a Bare Mountain | marandina | 32 | 2 years 8 months ago |
| Story | What happens near Rome | Cooper King | 9 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | There Will Be Dust (A Wedding Feast) | Ewan | 3 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | Sanctuary | Elegantfowl | 17 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | WebWorld (2.4) | rosaliekempthorne | 4 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | AND YET... | griffonner | 4 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | The Vampire Walk- Continued | mark p | 2 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | Adam Maxwell -Farquhar (Tale 2) | mark p | 3 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | The Myth of Olympians | Ewan | 3 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | WebWorld (2.1) | rosaliekempthorne | 2 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | Sammy's Story | Kilb50 | 6 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | The Universal Backlot Wedding | Ewan | 4 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | Faces | Ewan | 1 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | Naming Names | Ewan | 3 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | Disenchantment 34 | Hades502 | 9 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | make up | like_a_daisy_girl | 2 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | Monday Morning in the Rain | ralph | 1 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | WebWorld (1.10) | rosaliekempthorne | 1 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | WebWorld (1.9) | rosaliekempthorne | 1 | 2 years 9 months ago |
| Story | Tzara-ist Manifesto | Ewan | 1 | 2 years 9 months ago |
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Smokescreen Chapter 6
Chapter Six... DI Murray is an alcoholic, you get that, right? Base image by Mark Ahsmann CC-SA 3.0 Licence, source wikipedia commons.
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Smokescreen Chapter 5
Bored yet? Really? Oh, well, there's time yet. Image by Tiia Monto CC-SA 3.0 licence source, wikipedia commons.
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Smokescreen Chapter 4
A quiet drink in The Number 6 Image licence CCA-SA 4.0 Int. image creator Lorelei Gomez
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The Kings that Sleep
No, need to loiter here, just another one of those poems. Image authors own from PD elephants. Made at Canva.
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Smokescreen Chapter 3
An encounter with Elvis... not that one. Picture is just an illustration of a random pop-culture reference that no-one will get. Image source is wikipedia. Image included for educational purposes.
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This is really good.
Posted on Fri, 30 Jun 2017
The voice as has been mentioned is really good. I like how much subtext there is. How much we're left to fill in for ourselves about your narrator.
Read full commentA couple of tiny things. Plural of taxi is taxis, there is an archaic form taxies, but it's...
Posted in Earth. Live. Neutral.
This rich
Posted on Sun, 18 Jun 2017
and textured riot of colour and blooms reminded me of Christina Rossetti's work. It is a deserved Facebook/Twitter Pick of the Day. Why not share or retweet if you like it too_
Read full commentPosted in The Ghost Queen.
terrific stuff...
Posted on Thu, 08 Jun 2017
As good on the ins and outs of the Basketball dream as Harlan Coben (it's a compliment)
best
Ewan
Read full commentPosted in Hello Walls (Chapter Four)
Two
Posted on Wed, 07 Jun 2017
Typos, it's Gauguin!
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Did
Posted on Sat, 27 May 2017
I tell you how much I like this? There is satire, menace, allegory, myth and fable, also some tight writing anyone would be proud to have written. It takes genuine talent to get all that stuff in a piece of writing without bashing people over the...
Read full commentPosted in Boatman's dream 22
Yes,
Posted on Tue, 09 May 2017
you could actually start from "The sun blazed". All the expository back story is a dense amount of telling about the characters. You could show a little all the way through.
"Most of the time he wore a light grey...
Read full commentPosted in Caiman's bazaar
For me...
Posted on Wed, 03 May 2017
and how I write (I know, we're all different) I'd keep banging these out and then edit when you've completed a narrative (arc or spiral, who cares?) This is all sufficiently intriguing for me to persevere. If Tim needs to go, get rid of him later...
Read full commentPosted in Boatman's dream 10
I do
Posted on Thu, 07 Jul 2016
agree with Jack that the ending seems a little rushed. I'm not sure I want to see (much) more backstory or a substantially longer piece, though. Have you thought about making the story arc more circular... start from just before where it...
Read full commentPosted in Flowers (Part Two of Two) (IP)
Splendid...
Posted on Thu, 07 Jul 2016
the welter of detail contrasts with the things you leave out. The combination of observation of the mundane and the barest of allusions to horrific deeds makes it all the more chilling. Fine stuff.
Read full commentPosted in Flowers (Part Two of Two) (IP)
A long time ago...
Posted on Mon, 28 Mar 2016
When I was first posting on ABCTales (I think) BJD was around too. I know he was when I was an editor. He must have gone away for a while. Any comments, though very insightful and worth following, were sometimes really, well, not fluffy. I know...
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