Ewan
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| Story | "A Man Needs Favours At Times Like These" [Mr Martínez Two] | Ewan | 1 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | The Ministry of Wellness | Canonette | 6 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Teashop Trip | drkevin | 10 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Acrobats at Rest | Ewan | 0 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | I Will Ride | Ewan | 0 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Testing Testing Testing | Ewan | 9 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Another Country | Ewan | 0 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Listen to the Music | Ewan | 0 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Angelus Novus | onemorething | 12 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Letters in the attic | Andy Hollyhead | 9 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Weeping Willow | JuliaB | 9 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | K Cider - September 1988 | Andy Hollyhead | 8 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Ugly Puggly 14 | celticman | 12 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Forum topic | List of entities accepting FREE submissions. | Ewan | 2 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Wounds | Wiilbur | 1 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | if no one were someone | Ewan | 2 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Hope | hoalarg1 | 2 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | The Past, Passed | drkevin | 5 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | I am testing and testy | nosferatu2 | 2 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Secret Lemonade Drinker | Andy Hollyhead | 5 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | two men | Di_Hard | 25 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | These Hands | Ewan | 18 | 3 years 12 months ago |
| Story | In the Dark | rosaliekempthorne | 8 | 3 years 12 months ago |
| Story | Blossom | Rhiannonw | 23 | 3 years 12 months ago |
| Story | Listening | rosaliekempthorne | 8 | 3 years 12 months ago |
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The Picture Ranch 70
70 up. Reckon I know where I'm going... Does Fisher? Image created by me at canva.com
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The Picture Ranch 69
Bet you've given up on this! [I almost did, too]. But I'm going to KDP it when it's done - and I've pulled the loopholes tight and rescued the dangling threads. Image source is Pinterest, but the image is PD... and yes, that is Buster in drag.
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Pick A City
I dare you. image created at canva.com by me.
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Iconoclasts
image from pixabay
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Over The Bones
No, you'll have to work it out yourselves. image credit Dagmar Hollmann, CC BY-SA 4.0 < https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0> , via Wikimedia Commons
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No,
Posted on Mon, 07 Dec 2020
I don't feel there's too much dialogue at all. Exposition can be achieved through dialogue or narrative and you should definitely mix it up whether you're writing a short story, novella or a novel.
If I have doubts about which to use in a...
Read full commentPosted in Rude Awakenings (Part two of two)
One theory
Posted on Thu, 26 Nov 2020
is that Ashurbanipal was Sardanapalus (and transliteration can do funny things, especially from cuneiform into Greek and later Latin script) BUT Ashurbanipal is everywhere else but in Cteisis's version - which itself is only known through...
Read full commentPosted in Historiography
Perhaps your
Posted on Wed, 25 Nov 2020
next collection could contain a whole aviary? Another fine poem.
Read full commentE x
Posted in Hoopoe
Hahaha
Posted on Sun, 15 Nov 2020
If only it weren't all so nearly true!
Read full commentWell done.
Posted in Invisible
Your poem
Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020
reminded me of a visit to the Jurong Bird Park in Singapore one day, over 40 years ago.
Monsoon season, I remember it well. Half the broadsheet back page of the Straits Times would be dedicated to forecasts attempting to predict at what...
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Some
Posted on Mon, 09 Nov 2020
striking imagery here.
Do you mean "algæ-d" at line 8?
Your poem finishes very strongly with these lines.
"the sun’s departure
under the horizon’s guillotine,
...
Read full commentPosted in Retirement options for tube trains, #7, Foulness Island
I think
Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2020
this has touches of MR James about it: something off, glimpsed out of the corner of your eye. Bags of atmosphere, you have a sure touch when generating a sense of place.
Sound.
Ewan x
Read full commentPosted in Of An Outhouse In Autumn (2)
If
Posted on Tue, 20 Oct 2020
books COULD talk 'though, eh?
I loved this Sean. It made me laugh and when it's dark those who make us laugh loudest are the best writers of all.
Ewan
Read full commentPosted in Wesley Tickle's 20th Century Bookstore
Weird
Posted on Mon, 19 Oct 2020
is good. And that's all I have to say.
E x
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Atmospheric
Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2020
eerie, too. I love the idea of a mourning fog and what it might be mourning.
Ewan x
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