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I have 7 stories published in 0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1992 times and 7 of my stories have been cherry picked.
3 of my 16 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 3 votes

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Pete Langman

Mildly disillusioned pensman. Author of Killing Beauties

My stories

A Place for Everything

‘Good morning, Sir, may I be of some assistance?’ The voice was clear, and yet weighty, as if it had been doing little else but accreting gravitas...
Cherry

A Fairy Tale Ending part 2

‘And so the old woman waited all day for her son to come back from the market, wondering what marvellous clothes he would be wearing, and the very...
Cherry

A Fairy Tale Ending Part 1

Hamish gave up trying to count his coins and handed the taxi driver a ten pound note. He waved away the change, slid out of the taxi and slammed the...

Going For the One

Going for the one is the original version of 'Sanctuary'. Interested to hear your thoughts ... Karen was in her customary place, squeezed into a...
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Sanctuary

I'd like some opinions, if you would. This is the short version, in first person, of a story I wrote a while ago, on a rather serious subject. I'm...
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3 of my comments have received 3 Great Feedback votes

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Judging ...

Posted on Sat, 03 Jul 2021

From all the comments above, the situation is worse than I thought. I expect a class action suit to be pressed at the ECHR within days.

Keep up the good work!

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Posted in You

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I like

Posted on Fri, 25 Jun 2021

the pace to your writing, Ewan. And the questions it almost asks and thus never knowingly answers.

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Posted in The Thief at the Café De Bs. As.

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Apologies ...

Posted on Fri, 18 Jun 2021

Apparently I silently commented. Not sure how I did that, or whether it has any cosmic relevance, but I did enjoy the poem!

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Posted in A Feast of Bells