I liked the marching. Although I'm not a fan of the monarchy. I do not relish the prospect of an elected head of state, we all know who would be first to throw their name in the hat. The coronation is the very epitome of "spaffing money against the wall". Other opinions are available. Image created by me at canva.com
'So you don't know anything about what happened?' Eleanor G blew some smoke into the air. The sky was turning as red as her lipstick. 'No more n'you...
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This episode,
Posted on Fri, 16 Jul 2021
chapter, or part is significantly tighter than some of the others for me. As usual the dialogue is really punchy. Sometimes, not here, but in the next part for example, you have a tendency to use a received phrase (this is what we used to call a...
I like that it's coming in big chunks that need to be digested slowly. There's just the right hint of the fey in it, and it's a neat trick to have the everyday seem a little sinister.
and none of the rhymes seem forced. An insistent rhythm that serves the subject well. A little unconvinced by one or two of the images. "severed souls impaled upon a pike" - for example - although I appreciate you may well be using soul as person...
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This episode,
Posted on Fri, 16 Jul 2021
chapter, or part is significantly tighter than some of the others for me. As usual the dialogue is really punchy. Sometimes, not here, but in the next part for example, you have a tendency to use a received phrase (this is what we used to call a...
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This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day
Posted on Tue, 06 Jul 2021
a fabulous biece of SFF that promises much, I can't wait for the next instalment. Why not share and/or retweet if you like it too, Readers?
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Splendid.
Posted on Thu, 17 Jun 2021
I like that it's coming in big chunks that need to be digested slowly. There's just the right hint of the fey in it, and it's a neat trick to have the everyday seem a little sinister.
Keep going.
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Woody wouldn't
Posted on Wed, 02 Jun 2021
mind if you asked him, I suspect he'd laugh if I did though.
Wonderful poetry, full of depth and meaning.
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Thanks Ross,
Posted on Tue, 25 May 2021
it's best to get these memories down before they go.
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Marvellous
Posted on Mon, 10 May 2021
tough tenderness, moving and true-to-life. Well done.
Read full commentE x
Posted in Dyin Embers
Marvellous
Posted on Thu, 29 Apr 2021
and ends particularly well.
Posted in The Hierophant
Scans well,
Posted on Wed, 21 Apr 2021
and none of the rhymes seem forced. An insistent rhythm that serves the subject well. A little unconvinced by one or two of the images. "severed souls impaled upon a pike" - for example - although I appreciate you may well be using soul as person...
Read full commentPosted in Penetration Privileges
As funny as
Posted on Wed, 21 Apr 2021
part one. I can think of no finer accolade. Well done on the pick.
Read full commentPosted in Most Vial
This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day
Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021
Moving and elegaic, this is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day. Do please share and/or retweet, tell your friends or attach a message to a balloon to help spread the word as it really does deserve a wider audience.
Posted in Setting Sons
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