Bet you've given up on this! [I almost did, too]. But I'm going to KDP it when it's done - and I've pulled the loopholes tight and rescued the dangling threads. Image source is Pinterest, but the image is PD... and yes, that is Buster in drag.
No, you'll have to work it out yourselves. image credit Dagmar Hollmann, CC BY-SA 4.0 < https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0> , via Wikimedia Commons
and none of the rhymes seem forced. An insistent rhythm that serves the subject well. A little unconvinced by one or two of the images. "severed souls impaled upon a pike" - for example - although I appreciate you may well be using soul as person...
Moving and elegaic, this is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day. Do please share and/or retweet, tell your friends or attach a message to a balloon to help spread the word as it really does deserve a wider audience.
Marvellous
Posted on Mon, 10 May 2021
tough tenderness, moving and true-to-life. Well done.
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Marvellous
Posted on Thu, 29 Apr 2021
and ends particularly well.
Posted in The Hierophant
Scans well,
Posted on Wed, 21 Apr 2021
and none of the rhymes seem forced. An insistent rhythm that serves the subject well. A little unconvinced by one or two of the images. "severed souls impaled upon a pike" - for example - although I appreciate you may well be using soul as person...
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As funny as
Posted on Wed, 21 Apr 2021
part one. I can think of no finer accolade. Well done on the pick.
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This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day
Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021
Moving and elegaic, this is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day. Do please share and/or retweet, tell your friends or attach a message to a balloon to help spread the word as it really does deserve a wider audience.
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This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day
Posted on Thu, 08 Apr 2021
Please share or retweet this splendid re-working of an old nursery rhyme as an allegory for our times, much as many were when originally written.
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A very
Posted on Fri, 09 Apr 2021
good Friday.
Delightful.
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Very good.
Posted on Thu, 29 Sep 2011
Glad I got a chance to drop by.
I think you have a typo at line one. Do you need "a price at which" vice "a price in which"?
Gripping, cynical and grim. I loved it.
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This is today's Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day.
Posted on Thu, 04 Mar 2021
A marvellous and moving poem. Do please share and retweet if you like it too.
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Very fine writing,
Posted on Thu, 04 Mar 2021
full of meaning and feeling.
I believe you have a typo at line 16 "breath" vice "breathe".
Powerful writing.
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