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I'm Afraid of AI
Well I am. Image made at Canva.com
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Tracks
It's bad stuff. No known copyright issue for image.
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Cheers
Another gone. Per Ardua Ad Astra, Blue skies.
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Los Danis
Found this in an old notebook today...
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Tight structure
Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2022
and the rhyme scheme is transparent, as all the best ones are.
Loved this.
E x
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I agree with
Posted on Fri, 15 Apr 2022
the above.
Very smartly done, indeed.
E x
Read full commentPosted in two men
Sweet,
Posted on Fri, 15 Apr 2022
but not too saccharine, in the tradition of Pam Ayres perhaps.
Very good.
Ewan
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I do like
Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2022
things which seem to be about nothing, but aren't.
Worth the reading for
"anecdotes which develop arms and legs with the passage of time."
alone. Very meta too, something else in its favour,...
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"Top
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022
of the world,Ma!"
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This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022
Atmospheric, beautiful and serious poetry. That's why it's our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day.
Please share and retweet, dear readers, if you like it too.
Read full commentPosted in The Wanderer or The Exile’s Lament
Excellent
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022
and serious poetry.
I wonder if 'god' should be capitalized? Or if you might insert 'any' before the lower-cased god?
Marvellous work.
Ewan
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I really enjoyed this.
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022
It had nice rhythm and some good internal rhyme.
I wonder if you really need the final stanza? What does it add? It does jerk the/this reader right out of the atmosphere you have so skilfully created. \\\\
best
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Posted in Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel)
This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day
Posted on Thu, 24 Mar 2022
Some may say it feels like Groundhog Day as one of these acerbic satires is POD again. Perhaps it is, but they are very funny, and goodness knows we need some laughter especially in the dark days.
Please share and retweet if you like it...
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Outstanding.
Posted on Tue, 22 Mar 2022
I can see, hear, smell and taste it all.
Read full commentVery well done.
E x
Posted in Don't Look at the Sheikh
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