Ewan
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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Story | Mad Dogs and Englishmen | Ewan | 0 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | What did Jesus do? 2 | celticman | 4 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | What did Jesus do? 3 | celticman | 4 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | A Hauf an a Hauf | Peter Bennett | 25 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Four Stanzas in Search of a Poem | Ewan | 0 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | From Rochdale to the Stars | Ewan | 1 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Bad Objects | Ewan | 0 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Naples: balcony overlooking Via Firenza | stevepoet | 12 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Writing Wrongs | Ewan | 1 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Strictly For The Birds | Ewan | 1 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | The Picture Ranch 27 | Ewan | 0 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | The Picture Ranch 42 | Ewan | 1 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Sooz 11 | celticman | 12 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | In the Kush | Ewan | 2 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Another Day | Ewan | 2 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Struthio | Ewan | 2 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | A Street Called Hoffnung | Ewan | 0 | 4 years 12 months ago |
| Story | Invisible | marandina | 11 | 4 years 12 months ago |
| Story | Gladiators | Ewan | 2 | 4 years 12 months ago |
| Story | Dreizehn | Ewan | 2 | 4 years 12 months ago |
| Story | How Roger Came to Spend Lockdown on the Sofa in His Underpants | Kilb50 | 9 | 4 years 12 months ago |
| Story | Bigger Brother | Ewan | 0 | 4 years 12 months ago |
| Story | Feelin the Squeeze | Peter Bennett | 5 | 5 years 8 hours ago |
| Story | Dyin Embers | Peter Bennett | 8 | 5 years 8 hours ago |
| Story | Rude Awakenings (Part two of two) | Peter Bennett | 7 | 5 years 8 hours ago |








There's
Posted on Wed, 06 Jan 2016
nothing wrong with a long sentence, provided it's completely clear and you don't lose the reader on the way. Dickens was pretty good at sentences which sometimes seemed like Latin periods, but he was a dab hand with a semi and full colon. Unlike...
Read full commentPosted in the hungry earth (2 of 2)
I
Posted on Sun, 05 Oct 2014
...agree there's some nice description.
You need to avoid a tendency to tell. 'He had been able to avoid... etc.'
I'm not sure I believe the internal monologue in the paragraph beginning. 'He looked past the end...' You say the boy...
Read full commentPosted in K Ward - part 1 (Out of Sight)
That's
Posted on Thu, 02 Oct 2014
the very word, uncanny. Fascinating etymology it has too.
Nice to hear from you. I've been away a while, I know
Ewan
Read full commentPosted in By the Light of a Gibbous Moon
Confused
Posted on Fri, 13 Jun 2014
Hey Jack, great pieces on an interesting day.
Just one thing:
"I offered Ewan a cheese sandwich, but he said his
Read full commentfriend had made him an old-fashioned bacon buttie. They’d been in the
army together. I went to sit on the...
Posted in Unbounders Away
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