Peter Bennett

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I have 38 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 9271 times and 42 of my stories have been cherry picked.
9 of my 103 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 9 votes

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Pawns (Part Two)

* * * Two Weeks Earlier The street’s quiet when we arrive ootside ma bit, just a delivery driver drappin aff rolls ootside the coarner shoap further...
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Pawns (Part One)

Ah think ah’ve goat everythin. Two boatles ay ginger: wan, Irn-Bru , wan, Garvie’s Orange ; three packets ay biscuits: Toffeepops, an two ay mint...
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Ghosts (Part Two)

The room’s went quiet, aw eyes trained in oan us, it seems, an ah feel like a fuckin actor in a play ah’ve no read the script tae; ignorant,...
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Ghosts (Part One)

A woolly sunlight creeps acroass the rain sodden tarmac ootside the East chapel ay the crematorium, breakin through the clouds above, increasin in...
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Troubles

The wee light oan the answer machine’s flashin when ah get back in fae the shoaps. Bloody pathetic, ah know, but it gies me a wee tinge ay excitement...
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9 of my comments have received 9 Great Feedback votes

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This was great Mark. Quirky

Posted on Fri, 03 Sep 2021

This was great Mark. Quirky concept. I reckon you should sub this to a few places. Incidentally, with the whisky, I'm sure the distinction is: if it's Scottish, it's whisky. If it's American (bourbon) or Irish, it's whiskey.

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Posted in Pie Chart Man

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'Eyes Right' is an inspired

Posted on Thu, 02 Sep 2021

'Eyes Right' is an inspired name for a Scottish opticians. I'm going to start a chain! ;)

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Posted in The Long and Spectacular Life of Agnes Magnusdottir

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Frequently funny, yet

Posted on Fri, 04 Jun 2021

Frequently funny, yet poignant. Enjoyed this, Mark.

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Posted in The Grizzling

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Enjoyed this Jack. These

Posted on Sun, 25 Apr 2021

Enjoyed this Jack. These types of tales are seldom told. Reminded me of a Kelman short story.

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Posted in Sooz 4

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I'm very much enjoying this

Posted on Wed, 30 Dec 2020

I'm very much enjoying this style you're employing with these stories Sean. Something of Beckett about them. Well deserved POTD.

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Posted in Snake In The Grass

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Reading

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020

Hi mate, I've signed up to the next reading event at the end of the month so you'll be able to hear it then if you're going to get involved. You're right, as far as I'm concerned, he has to have that voice. To moderate and sanitise it...

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Posted in Good Intentions

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I enjoyed that. A visceral

Posted on Sun, 22 Nov 2020

I Enjoyed that. A visceral narrative that grabs you by the hair and takes you with it.

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Posted in Pigeon Variations - Ch 1 - Control

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Thank you very much. No, it's

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020

Thank you very much. No, it's not part of a bigger piece. I am however, currently editing a novel written predominantly in the same style, in the Glaswegian demotic and first person (present) POV. There could be some scope for these characters to...

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Posted in Good Intentions