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StoryEclipsed Makis231 month 2 weeks ago
StoryEgo Maximus Mundi Makis31 month 3 weeks ago
StoryAn Afternoon With Perperuna Turlough241 month 3 weeks ago
StoryMarking The Turn Makis61 month 3 weeks ago
StoryI Have Other Books Ewan71 month 3 weeks ago
StoryYears Falling As Rain Makis41 month 4 weeks ago
Storyyou cry, you die. chapter 1 straycat6572 months 19 hours ago
StoryThe Moment You Step Outside cliffordben50262 months 1 day ago
StorySojourn In Palestine (Welcome To Palestine!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 4 David Kirtley92 months 4 days ago
StoryMoney for the Circus 14 Ewan32 months 5 days ago
StoryThat'll Be the Day Turlough342 months 1 week ago
StoryAll Quiet on the Eastern Front marandina122 months 1 week ago
StoryEarly Birds and Earworms Makis42 months 1 week ago
StoryWhen ‘on time’ is late! Rhiannonw112 months 2 weeks ago
StoryA Fear Of Porridge Makis82 months 2 weeks ago
StoryA Better World marandina242 months 3 weeks ago
StoryThe Way We Heard: Wannabe (1996) airyfairy122 months 3 weeks ago
StoryPractice Night Makis62 months 3 weeks ago
StoryThe Tea Break Makis112 months 3 weeks ago
StoryChrysalis Makis33 months 2 days ago
StoryListen to the mad man Itane Vero73 months 3 days ago
StoryComing Home Makis93 months 2 weeks ago
StorySomewhere Chapter 3 (Pt 2) airyfairy113 months 2 weeks ago
StoryThe Shell That They Called Home Lore23 months 2 weeks ago
StoryRhapsody in G Minor marandina193 months 2 weeks ago

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Cherry

Churn Milk Peg

A children's story about a Yorkshire legend coming true..
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Cherry

Frankenplot: Aeolian

A small boy, a bungalow and an alien encounter...
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Cherry

The Lucky Jumper

A child's faith in his lucky jumper was absolute..
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85 of my comments have received 93 Great Feedback votes

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Hello Di. I'm pleased you

Posted on Tue, 22 Sep 2026

Hello Di. I'm pleased you enjoyed the story as it did actually happen. I would have been about seven I think ( it's a long, long time ago) and I remember being scared by it, mostly I think, because I had never encountered such thing before and...

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Many thanks, SoulFire, I'm

Posted on Tue, 22 Sep 2026

Many thanks, SoulFire, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I read some Ray Bradbury some years ago, but Farenheit 451 is the only one I can recall. I'll look that one out and add it to my bedside collection.

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Thank you marandina. The

Posted on Tue, 22 Sep 2026

Thank you marandina. The story was based on an actual boyhood experience and garnished a little.

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You dare, and you can add

Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2026

You dare, and you can add obscenely expensive, overcrowded and characterless.

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Posted in The Lucky Jumper

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This writing lark is a lonely

Posted on Tue, 08 Sep 2026

This writing lark is a lonely job and the more companions we meet along the way, the better.

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Some great imagery in this

Posted on Tue, 08 Sep 2026

Some great imagery in this piece Ewan, and I love the absurdity. One suggestion I would make is that the weirdness is its strength, and there are places where your prose sometimes explains the weirdness rather than just letting it be weird...if...

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Oh dear. I thought Lidl was a

Posted on Fri, 04 Sep 2026

Oh dear. I thought Lidl was a specialist clinic. No wonder they looked puzzled.

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Thanks Turlough, I offered it

Posted on Tue, 01 Sep 2026

Thanks Turlough, I offered it to their travel editor, but he turned it down. He said commissioning weekly reports on our trip around the Greek islands might lay them open to being sued by me if the kids ever discovered our whereabouts. He had a...

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Posted in Marking The Turn

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Wonderfully exotic Turlough,

Posted on Fri, 28 Aug 2026

Wonderfully exotic Turlough, and I particularly liked your reference to Brassens' L'Orage. We had our long awaited thunderstorm here yesterday, but unfortunately I wasn't sheltering from it in close confines with a sensuous lady, as George was...

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Thank you Frances, I hope all

Posted on Wed, 26 Aug 2026

Thank you Frances, I hope all is well with you down at the other end of the world. I've just enjoyed your poem Tanka, which I've now discovered is a Japanese poetry form of saying much in few words, as good poetry should. You have inspired me to...

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