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StoryEmbracing the Change luigi_pagano144 months 1 week ago
StoryStars Richard L. Prov...74 months 1 week ago
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Story"Anna's Blanket" Penny4athought174 months 1 week ago
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Storybreezy Di_Hard104 months 2 weeks ago
StoryOn Woodland Lake skinner_jennifer64 months 2 weeks ago
Story"Do you have CRS....(can't remember stuff)?" Penny4athought44 months 2 weeks ago
Story10th july grasshopper Di_Hard194 months 2 weeks ago
StoryGLORY Hunter - Part 3 colin.b84 months 2 weeks ago
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StoryMeredith's Sweet-Aired Eden Gothicman104 months 3 weeks ago
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StoryWork Lunchbreak Flash, Alfresco at The Colonial Cafe littleditty64 months 3 weeks ago
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StoryDylan's Grove -Lockdown Kosh Groove littleditty44 months 3 weeks ago
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This is very lovely indeed. 

Posted on Sat, 25 Jul 2020

This is very lovely indeed. 

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Posted in Stars

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I was going to say that it

Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020

I was going to say that it would be good to see the tattoo, but took it from the arm reference in the poem that it might be difficult, the soft arm twist part of the poem was really good too. 

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I like the idea of sea walls

Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020

I like the idea of sea walls and shaping the tides connected to the moment, and the anxiety of who knows what the future will hold.

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Posted in The Moment

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This made my chest ache in

Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2020

This made my chest ache in recognition. The ache of sadness or guilt for me that I have felt before has something to do with the acceptance part of it, somehow, or acceptance because of a sense of the inescapable, don't know if that makes sense....

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Posted in Recital

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I like this - wondering where

Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2020

I like this - wondering where the breeze has been, what it brings, I like how it encompasses a lot in few words. 

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Posted in breezy

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What a lovely thing and a

Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2020

What a lovely thing and a lovely poem about it. :)

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Posted in "Anna's Blanket"

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I like this. Poor tadpole.

Posted on Thu, 16 Jul 2020

I like this. Poor tadpole. One gulp and you're gone. 

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Posted in Yikes

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Love the sipping of Western

Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2020

Love the sipping of Western civilisation and the crosshairs of the afternoon. Nicely written exchange before the bell. 

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Posted in Work Lunchbreak Flash, Alfresco at The Colonial Cafe

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Some gorgeous lines in this,

Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2020

Some gorgeous lines in this, lovely imagery, very sensory, much enjoyed.

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Posted in Meredith's Sweet-Aired Eden

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Beautiful, Di. Lovely imagery

Posted on Fri, 10 Jul 2020

Beautiful, Di. Lovely imagery and loved the ant punctuation and lovelorn grasshoppers too. 

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