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The Inner Gaze

By onemorething on Sat, 03 Oct 2020

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Hamerkop

By onemorething on Thu, 01 Oct 2020

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Deus Ex Machina

By onemorething on Wed, 30 Sep 2020

A conclusion ought to be logical, make sense of a narrative; there is no lowered god to resolve an end for me. I should have been born in Ancient...

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Afterglow

By onemorething on Thu, 24 Sep 2020

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193 of my comments have received 204 Great Feedback votes

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I like this Penny, and I

Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2020

I like this Penny, and I think that is so true that we are each viewing the world through our own prisms of experience. Prisms is such a good way of framing it. I like the way too that you take this from the individual to all the billions of us...

Posted in "Perception"

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I find this very moving

Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020

I find this very moving Trevor, as if one realises one's own existence in knowing another - and that the another might be a nostalgic sense of a former self. That's if I have grasped your meaning, and if not, that's what I took from it anyway! It...

Posted in Someone I Know Well

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I like the idea of marmalade,

Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020

I like the idea of marmalade, buttered toast and sunlight. I'm sure the willow is speaking in code too - trees talk to each other regularly. It's a pity we can't hear them. The willow as a veil / grieving is a lovely image too. Very nice thoughts...

Posted in Time Was

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Thanks ld, glad you thought

Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020

Thanks ld, glad you thought so. Triboelectrical is not a word I made up, it is the word for static electricity which is shared, in this case, between bees and flowers. The bees build static in flight which leaves them positively charged, they are...

Posted in Electric Bees

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Well, I have only David

Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020

Well, I have only David Attenborough to thank for this one. I saw a segment about bees and electrical signals and then looked it up and read a bit about it. Yes, you're right about smell. I wonder what chemical signals we miss as a result of...

Posted in Electric Bees

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Lovely memories, Ed, full of

Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020

Lovely memories, Ed, full of sunshine. Love the tile too.

Posted in Cherry Dreamin'

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This is great. You have a

Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020

This is great. You have a brilliant way of writing something so that it makes you smile as well as see the depth of it. I probably haven't explained that very well, but I know what I meant and it is a good thing. Also I'm going to memorise that...

Posted in Minnesota Fats

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Thanks littleditty, am glad

Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020

Thanks littleditty, am glad you like my raptor pondering. Yes, just recycling. The buzzards / grouse situation is grotesque, so distressing. Yeah, humans indeed, all the mindlessly cruel stuff that we do is just inexcusable. Thanks for reading it...

Posted in The Diplomacy of Vultures

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It's a very beautiful poem

Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020

It's a very beautiful poem and you've captured the sense of the impermanence of things; summer, life. The worm/ blackbird reference is clever. Interesting to read again with the context you've given. Sorry to hear that you lost your brother....

Posted in Boys From An Ancient Wood

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This perfectly evokes the

Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2020

This perfectly evokes the imagination vs reality of these kinds of encounters. Gave me a smile. I told someone the other day about a cyclist and I who wave to one another every morning. I got told I should get out more! Something romantic about...