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This is excellent. A perfect
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020
This is excellent. A perfect poem for the picture. Love the use of rot and rancid and putrid, really conjured up the stink of it all. And the picture is amazing too. :)
Read full commentPosted in September 15th 2008
Oh yes, I think it's a good
Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020
Oh yes, I think it's a good thing though. You are exploring some interesting themes. You definitely have successfully roused sympathy for Lottie. Rachel x
Read full commentPosted in Repentance and Redemption
I like the idea of this. I
Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020
I like the idea of this. I like the repetition and I like the stark lines. :)
Read full commentPosted in I've forgotten
Oh god. Imagine the
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020
Oh god. Imagine the disappointment. Just a poem. Not a boob in sight.
Read full commentPosted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven
So sad, sorry for you and
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020
So sad, sorry for you and Frankie. It's a very precious thing, the love between us and our pets.
Read full commentPosted in To my Best Friend...(Frankie)
You're right, now I'm
Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2020
You're right, now I'm imagining Boris trying to explain Pluto and Charon to Trump through role play:
'But it's my turn to be Pluto, Boris.'
'Just ferry the dead souls to me, Donald',
Just goes to show too how...
Read full commentPosted in Pluto’s ode to Charon
Ha. Oh dear. I feel like I
Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2020
Ha. Oh dear. I feel like I made you work for it. Pluto is pretty special in its own icy way, isn't it, poor unplaneted thing that it is. I think we should definitely send T and B - Team TB as explorers in a Wallace and Gromit style rocket. Who...
Read full commentPosted in Pluto’s ode to Charon
I'd like to say I'd had none,
Posted on Mon, 17 Feb 2020
I'd like to say I'd had none, being a lady, just a vivid imagination, so that's all I will say. :) In a way, mudskippers are so charming that it seems insulting to have cast them in a poem about one night stands, but they're not very romantic,...
Read full commentPosted in One Night Stand
Love the nursed fireflies and
Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2020
Love the nursed fireflies and that they are just yours. Very comforting piece. :)
Read full commentPosted in Jar of Lights
Blimey. As insert said above:
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2020
Blimey. As insert said above: shoulder pads and Dallas theme tune needed to play this one out. Still enjoying this increasingly torrid tale. Rachel x
Read full commentPosted in Who Do You Think You Are
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