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To the belly of an osprey
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You can’t cling to something once it has gone.
The photo is of a splendid fairy wren. I was doing a bit of reading about them and then read all the updates for this morning about the bushfires and found the koala videos very upsetting.
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Wood Mouse
Not very festive at all.
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The bare bones of trees
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This has so many sublime
Posted on Wed, 03 Jul 2019
This has so many sublime lines, imagery and metaphor. Such an excellent piece of writing.
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Clever and very well done.
Posted on Tue, 02 Jul 2019
Clever and very well done.
Read full commentPosted in The Waits Land
It is a stunning poem. Have
Posted on Sat, 29 Jun 2019
It is a stunning poem. Have come back to read it several times.
Read full commentPosted in Everyone remembers everything eventually
I liked this, could picture
Posted on Mon, 21 Jul 2008
I liked this, could picture it. It had a surreal quality that I appreciated. Re getting them off, ho ho ...I have received instruction in this twice so should remember and you need to "/cite" except "" should be <> to close italics and same...Read full commentPosted in The Universal Backlot Wedding
Which is why I say
Posted on Wed, 28 May 2008
Which is why I say personally. I am reluctant at times to make criticisms as it seems so subjective. I'm not very good at criticising anyway as I have no idea about the technical side of things or the language to use to articulate what I want to...Read full commentPosted in Abstract
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