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I like this Penny, and I
Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2020
I like this Penny, and I think that is so true that we are each viewing the world through our own prisms of experience. Prisms is such a good way of framing it. I like the way too that you take this from the individual to all the billions of us...
I like the idea of marmalade, buttered toast and sunlight. I'm sure the willow is speaking in code too - trees talk to each other regularly. It's a pity we can't hear them. The willow as a veil / grieving is a lovely image too. Very nice thoughts...
Thanks ld, glad you thought so. Triboelectrical is not a word I made up, it is the word for static electricity which is shared, in this case, between bees and flowers. The bees build static in flight which leaves them positively charged, they are...
Well, I have only David Attenborough to thank for this one. I saw a segment about bees and electrical signals and then looked it up and read a bit about it. Yes, you're right about smell. I wonder what chemical signals we miss as a result of...
This is great. You have a brilliant way of writing something so that it makes you smile as well as see the depth of it. I probably haven't explained that very well, but I know what I meant and it is a good thing. Also I'm going to memorise that...
Thanks littleditty, am glad you like my raptor pondering. Yes, just recycling. The buzzards / grouse situation is grotesque, so distressing. Yeah, humans indeed, all the mindlessly cruel stuff that we do is just inexcusable. Thanks for reading it...
I was going to say that it would be good to see the tattoo, but took it from the arm reference in the poem that it might be difficult, the soft arm twist part of the poem was really good too.
I like this Penny, and I
Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2020
I like this Penny, and I think that is so true that we are each viewing the world through our own prisms of experience. Prisms is such a good way of framing it. I like the way too that you take this from the individual to all the billions of us...
Read full commentPosted in "Perception"
I like the idea of marmalade,
Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020
I like the idea of marmalade, buttered toast and sunlight. I'm sure the willow is speaking in code too - trees talk to each other regularly. It's a pity we can't hear them. The willow as a veil / grieving is a lovely image too. Very nice thoughts...
Read full commentPosted in Time Was
Thanks ld, glad you thought
Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020
Thanks ld, glad you thought so. Triboelectrical is not a word I made up, it is the word for static electricity which is shared, in this case, between bees and flowers. The bees build static in flight which leaves them positively charged, they are...
Read full commentPosted in Electric Bees
Well, I have only David
Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020
Well, I have only David Attenborough to thank for this one. I saw a segment about bees and electrical signals and then looked it up and read a bit about it. Yes, you're right about smell. I wonder what chemical signals we miss as a result of...
Read full commentPosted in Electric Bees
Lovely memories, Ed, full of
Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020
Lovely memories, Ed, full of sunshine. Love the tile too.
Read full commentPosted in Cherry Dreamin'
This is great. You have a
Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020
This is great. You have a brilliant way of writing something so that it makes you smile as well as see the depth of it. I probably haven't explained that very well, but I know what I meant and it is a good thing. Also I'm going to memorise that...
Read full commentPosted in Minnesota Fats
Thanks littleditty, am glad
Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020
Thanks littleditty, am glad you like my raptor pondering. Yes, just recycling. The buzzards / grouse situation is grotesque, so distressing. Yeah, humans indeed, all the mindlessly cruel stuff that we do is just inexcusable. Thanks for reading it...
Read full commentPosted in The Diplomacy of Vultures
This is very lovely indeed.
Posted on Sat, 25 Jul 2020
This is very lovely indeed.
Read full commentPosted in Stars
I was going to say that it
Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020
I was going to say that it would be good to see the tattoo, but took it from the arm reference in the poem that it might be difficult, the soft arm twist part of the poem was really good too.
Read full commentPosted in Soft water, sweet
I like the idea of sea walls
Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020
I like the idea of sea walls and shaping the tides connected to the moment, and the anxiety of who knows what the future will hold.
Read full commentPosted in The Moment
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