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You can’t cling to something once it has gone.

The photo is of a splendid fairy wren. I was doing a bit of reading about them and then read all the updates for this morning about the bushfires and found the koala videos very upsetting.
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Not very festive at all.

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326 of my comments have received 342 Great Feedback votes

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This has so many sublime

Posted on Wed, 03 Jul 2019

This has so many sublime lines, imagery and metaphor. Such an excellent piece of writing. 

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Posted in A Man Riding the Tube Train

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Clever and very well done. 

Posted on Tue, 02 Jul 2019

Clever and very well done. 

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Posted in The Waits Land

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It is a stunning poem. Have

Posted on Sat, 29 Jun 2019

It is a stunning poem. Have come back to read it several times. 

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Posted in Everyone remembers everything eventually

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I liked this, could picture

Posted on Mon, 21 Jul 2008

I liked this, could picture it. It had a surreal quality that I appreciated. Re getting them off, ho ho ...I have received instruction in this twice so should remember and you need to "/cite" except "" should be <> to close italics and same...Read full comment

Posted in The Universal Backlot Wedding

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Which is why I say

Posted on Wed, 28 May 2008

Which is why I say personally. I am reluctant at times to make criticisms as it seems so subjective. I'm not very good at criticising anyway as I have no idea about the technical side of things or the language to use to articulate what I want to...Read full comment

Posted in Abstract

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