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Agree with insert - the

Posted on Mon, 01 Mar 2021

Agree with insert - the contrast with your son makes it all the more poignant. 

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Posted in Hand Washing, Glasgow Central

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Lovely slice of magic Jenny,

Posted on Thu, 25 Feb 2021

Lovely slice of magic Jenny, you always do that so well. :)

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Posted in Timely Leisure Spent With You

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So beautiful Di, packed with

Posted on Wed, 24 Feb 2021

So beautiful Di, packed with wonderful imagery - and all of my favourite things. A poem that fills you with joy.  :)

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Posted in Getting Ready

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Beautiful, Paul. 'Carrion

Posted on Wed, 24 Feb 2021

Beautiful, Paul. 'Carrion crows blink milk-lid eyes' - I love the contrast of the beauty of night and its shadows of crows. The 'ocean of our making'  - a line to swoon over. The last stanza and line is so powerful set against the description of...

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Posted in Forgotten Souls

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Ah thanks Paul. Yes, I love

Posted on Wed, 24 Feb 2021

Ah thanks Paul. Yes, I love bees. I have planted almost every plant in my garden to attract them and in the summer I lie out there on a bean bag and listen to them buzzing busily around me. I have sat out there with the odd bee or damselfly...

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Posted in The Hive

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Continues to be completely

Posted on Mon, 22 Feb 2021

Continues to be completely fascinating and moving. Apart from anything, too, it is such a precious record of firsthand experience - it reminds you of what would be lost if you weren't keeping this record. I'm so glad you are. Rachel.

 

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Posted in My New Nemesis

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Gorgeous, Di. Love moss

Posted on Sun, 21 Feb 2021

Gorgeous, Di. Love moss swelling, lichen rigged and still deer. I think your nouns and verbs are beautifully threaded. :)

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Posted in deer

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These slices of personal

Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2021

These slices of personal history are mesmerising and moving. This is our Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter. 

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Posted in 276 Portobello Road

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The perils of living on an

Posted on Tue, 09 Feb 2021

The perils of living on an island, especially Neville's. This brilliantly written and deeply wry story is our Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter.

 

(Ross - I hope the image is ok. Feel free to change if not. It's from...

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Posted in Take it Back

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This has such a wistful

Posted on Tue, 09 Feb 2021

This has such a wistful sadness to it. 

'a brook bird song

hardly audible

beneath perpetual

flowing river'

Lovely lines. 
 

Rachel :)

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Posted in Silent Lament

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