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I like the idea of this. I

Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020

I like the idea of this. I like the repetition and I like the stark lines. :) 

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Posted in I've forgotten

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Oh god. Imagine the

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

Oh god. Imagine the disappointment. Just a poem. Not a boob in sight. 

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Posted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven

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So sad, sorry for you and

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

So sad, sorry for you and Frankie. It's a very precious thing, the love between us and our pets. 

 

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Posted in To my Best Friend...(Frankie)

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You're right, now I'm

Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2020

You're right, now I'm imagining Boris trying to explain Pluto and Charon to Trump through role play:
 

'But it's my turn to be Pluto, Boris.' 

'Just ferry the dead souls to me, Donald',

Just goes to show too how...

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Posted in Pluto’s ode to Charon

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Ha. Oh dear. I feel like I

Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2020

Ha. Oh dear. I feel like I made you work for it. Pluto is pretty special in its own icy way, isn't it, poor unplaneted thing that it is. I think we should definitely send T and B - Team TB as explorers in a Wallace and Gromit style rocket. Who...

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Posted in Pluto’s ode to Charon

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Thank goodness for miracles

Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2020

Thank goodness for miracles and despite the infinity of pain, the surprise of goodness - such loveliness to discover. Loved the eel queue and Octo-Steve and all the fishy friends. And it has made my day that there are mudskippers eying up the...

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Posted in The Aquarium. Part 5. I Can’t Make You Love Me.

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I'd like to say I'd had none,

Posted on Mon, 17 Feb 2020

I'd like to say I'd had none, being a lady, just a vivid imagination, so that's all I will say. :) In a way, mudskippers are so charming that it seems insulting to have cast them in a poem about one night stands, but they're not very romantic,...

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Posted in One Night Stand

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Brilliant and bizarre. What's

Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2020

Brilliant and bizarre. What's especially clever I think is that no matter how surreal it gets you never lose your empathy with the humanity of the characters. Well, they're more human because of it actually. Maybe that's an obvious thing to say,...

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Posted in The Aquarium. Part 2. Exposition Coloniale Internationale

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Love the nursed fireflies and

Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2020

Love the nursed fireflies and that they are just yours. Very comforting piece. :)

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Posted in Jar of Lights

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Yes, this is great. Books are

Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2020

Yes, this is great. Books are insulation and love the other things you have woven in: conversations as prayers for example, and the equality of a library. Lovely. :)

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Posted in Refuge

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