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Ahhhh. The vetting process. I
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2020
Ahhhh. The vetting process. I wonder what this involves, looking at the suitability of her silhouette in a bedroom window so far. I like that she has noticed this. Have no doubt either than it's less glamorous than it appears. Enjoyed as usual....
Thanks Luigi. The article I was reading was also discussing the negative views of brood parasites, but pointed out that it's very complex behaviour and has admirable aspects. I thought it was interesting too to look at it from the aspect of the...
Oh thanks for the link, hadn't read it, this is a great poem, love 'men manufacture both machine and soul' and yes, moving towards, those last few lines. Maybe even in the absence of absolutes we should all have a rest. Made me think of lockdown...
Ha. Oh dear! Not very lucrative afterall. It definitely is skillful to tell a story in just a few words, especially only 50. I would never manage, for one thing, I use far too many words to say anything at all and I'm a word hoarder too, I'd...
Hi Rhiannon, thank you for reading it. I'm glad you liked my wooded description which I take as a compliment as you write very lovely poems about the natural world. I see what you mean from your perspective about God, but of course, that is your...
Mmmmm. Yeah, I'd stick to writing if I was you, I don't think you're going to be headhunted for advertising the armed forces any time soon, unless you significantly change your ways. :)
Ahhhh. The vetting process. I
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2020
Ahhhh. The vetting process. I wonder what this involves, looking at the suitability of her silhouette in a bedroom window so far. I like that she has noticed this. Have no doubt either than it's less glamorous than it appears. Enjoyed as usual....
Read full commentPosted in My Name Is Gideon
Very pretty picture painted,
Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2020
Very pretty picture painted, Jenny. Love the breath rising from mossy beds, makes me want to lie down and have a rest on one. :)
Read full commentPosted in Easter Thoughts
Thanks Luigi. The article I
Posted on Thu, 09 Apr 2020
Thanks Luigi. The article I was reading was also discussing the negative views of brood parasites, but pointed out that it's very complex behaviour and has admirable aspects. I thought it was interesting too to look at it from the aspect of the...
Read full commentPosted in Learning How To Be Human
Amazing. However you do it, I
Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2020
Amazing. However you do it, I don't know, but I'm all for it. Also excited that there is at least one other Saltburn story connected to this one...
Read full commentPosted in Sven Goes to War. Part 14. Happy House
Oh thanks for the link, hadn
Posted on Mon, 06 Apr 2020
Oh thanks for the link, hadn't read it, this is a great poem, love 'men manufacture both machine and soul' and yes, moving towards, those last few lines. Maybe even in the absence of absolutes we should all have a rest. Made me think of lockdown...
Read full commentPosted in Walking Away
Thanks Drew, congratulations
Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020
Thanks Drew, congratulations to you too, very well deserved for your fantastic story. :)
Read full commentPosted in Deimos
Wonderful Di, I love how this
Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2020
Wonderful Di, I love how this ripples and rumbles to your hope at the end. Love the fanfares of dock leaves from dark mud, love all of it. :)
Read full commentPosted in virus
Ha. Oh dear! Not very
Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020
Ha. Oh dear! Not very lucrative afterall. It definitely is skillful to tell a story in just a few words, especially only 50. I would never manage, for one thing, I use far too many words to say anything at all and I'm a word hoarder too, I'd...
Read full commentPosted in Three is a Crowd
Hi Rhiannon, thank you for
Posted on Thu, 26 Mar 2020
Hi Rhiannon, thank you for reading it. I'm glad you liked my wooded description which I take as a compliment as you write very lovely poems about the natural world. I see what you mean from your perspective about God, but of course, that is your...
Read full commentPosted in Pool in the Woods
Mmmmm. Yeah, I'd stick to
Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2020
Mmmmm. Yeah, I'd stick to writing if I was you, I don't think you're going to be headhunted for advertising the armed forces any time soon, unless you significantly change your ways. :)
Read full commentPosted in Sven Goes to War. Part 7. Pictures of You.
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