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Rewrite of something I was happy with then suddenly very unhappy with. I think now this means I'm just confused.
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This is a great poem, so many
Posted on Wed, 21 Aug 2019
This is a great poem, so many brilliant lines, loved, ‘vertigo gives fear to stumble’ amongst pretty much all the rest. :)
Read full commentPosted in Sweet Thing
This is really good. I think
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
This is really good. I think it encapsulates the issues / dilemmas of antidepressants really well for those who take them. I like how you’ve managed to include the routine submission to taking them too. It’s a sad poem, but an experience that is...
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I like the ideas, the use of
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
I like the ideas, the use of speech and the effort of your rhymes. You hint at the father being difficult, ‘taunting’, but don’t reveal enough perhaps here for me? I guess I think you could base it more on this? What are you trying to tell / say...
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These are very sweet and nice
Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2019
These are very sweet and nice to hear you reading them. You have captured childish states well with these, I think. :)
Read full commentPosted in KidsSpeak
Oh I didn’t know about the
Posted on Fri, 16 Aug 2019
Oh I didn’t know about the invasion. That definitely sounds a bit scary. They can gather in numbers can’t they. A plot of jellyfish. Glad you enjoyed, thanks for your comment. :)
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This is a lovely, delicate
Posted on Thu, 15 Aug 2019
This is a lovely, delicate poem. Like a leaf of a poem actually with its hint of darkness too. I loved, ‘breathe leaf breath’ and the threatening wind.
Read full commentPosted in airmail from the amazon (august 2018)
This is very lovely. I like
Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2019
This is very lovely. I like your use of emphasis, but all wonderful.
Read full commentPosted in prairie river flowing
Rhiannon, these are so good.
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
Rhiannon, these are so good. I have been popping back to read them in turn. Though I enjoyed hearing your Welsh accent too - which is poetic in itself, I think. April and December are my favourites - perhaps for what they describe as much as your...
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Such an interesting piece of
Posted on Tue, 13 Aug 2019
Such an interesting piece of writing about memory. Enjoyed it very much. Made me think of synapses as light or stars. Lovely.
Read full commentPosted in Remembering
So beautiful. I enjoyed every
Posted on Fri, 02 Aug 2019
So beautiful. I enjoyed every bit of this poem, but the opening lines alone are wonderful. And you know what’s so lasting about poems like this, for me, is the next time I come across kelp I will remember this.
Read full commentPosted in Kelp
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