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Ash Trees

I did post this last Saturday for the Inspiration Point, but then took it down after about ten minutes as I felt uncomfortable with some of it. So I have chopped some parts and extended others.

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177 of my comments have received 187 Great Feedback votes

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Your poems are always so

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019

Your poems are always so sensory. 

'a dashing sky scatter

of black stars swirl' 

'rain-sound wings'

Very lovely. :)

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Posted in starlings

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Great observations and

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019

Great observations and cleverly written with humour and pathos. Black leather waistcoat, oof, no. Enjoyed reading. :)

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Posted in With a Blue Jug in Her Hand

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Another lovely

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019

Another lovely autobiographical piece to read. I love how you sequentially share all the important details that gently reveal the twists and turns of what happened both in terms of events and how you felt, it makes these so interesting and...

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Posted in The Last Man in my Life

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This is brilliant. 

Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019

This is brilliant. 

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Posted in Birthday Song

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I'm having such a bad day

Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019

I'm having such a bad day hence my maudlin offering (which has reminded me of the perils of impulsive posting on the internet), however, it has made me smile that you have posted a much more succinct poem about uncertainty which cleverly leaves a...

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Posted in Uncertainties

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This was so good, I went back

Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019

This was so good, I went back to read all the preceding ones. Completely riveting. I think it's the detail and honesty in them. Thank you for sharing them, they make great reading. :)

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Posted in Al in Minneapolis

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Beautiful, Di, full of

Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2019

Beautiful, Di, full of richness and colour. :)

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Posted in appeal

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This is unsettling to me and

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019

This is unsettling to me and comforting at the same time. So well captured. 

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Posted in Strange Light

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Amazing poem. :)

Posted on Thu, 03 Oct 2019

Amazing poem. :)

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Posted in American Diaspora

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So beautiful. I love this. '

Posted on Tue, 24 Sep 2019

So beautiful. I love this. ' swollen seconds full of sun.' and ' joined dots, clotting to a mass of dark.' Inspired lines. Very clever idea too of them as full stops. 

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