onemorething
Primary tabs
I have 196 stories published in
0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 110169 times
and 256 of my stories have been cherry picked.
198 of my 1,702 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 210 votes
My stories
The Exhaustion of the Hunt
- Read more about The Exhaustion of the Hunt
- 14 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 795 reads
So beautiful. I love this. '
Posted on Tue, 24 Sep 2019
So beautiful. I love this. ' swollen seconds full of sun.' and ' joined dots, clotting to a mass of dark.' Inspired lines. Very clever idea too of them as full stops.
Read full commentPosted in recipe
Breath-taking imagery. Quite
Posted on Sun, 15 Sep 2019
Breath-taking imagery. Quite stunning. :)
Read full commentPosted in wings, late summer
Lovely, really like the
Posted on Thu, 29 Aug 2019
Lovely, really like the cyclical element to this. Owls are magnificent. :)
Read full commentPosted in With Obsidian Eyes
It is very beautiful indeed.
Posted on Mon, 26 Aug 2019
It is very beautiful indeed. :)
Read full commentPosted in Harpocrates
Jenny, I love your jellyfish
Posted on Thu, 22 Aug 2019
Jenny, I love your jellyfish - terrifying! Your description of it is beautifully done ‘ghostly, Seraph angel’ and works well with the story. They are such alien creatures. I guess we can both thank the jellyfish for being such weird and wonderful...
Read full commentPosted in Strange Happenings
This is a great poem, so many
Posted on Wed, 21 Aug 2019
This is a great poem, so many brilliant lines, loved, ‘vertigo gives fear to stumble’ amongst pretty much all the rest. :)
Read full commentPosted in Sweet Thing
This is really good. I think
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
This is really good. I think it encapsulates the issues / dilemmas of antidepressants really well for those who take them. I like how you’ve managed to include the routine submission to taking them too. It’s a sad poem, but an experience that is...
Read full commentPosted in anti depressants
I like the ideas, the use of
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
I like the ideas, the use of speech and the effort of your rhymes. You hint at the father being difficult, ‘taunting’, but don’t reveal enough perhaps here for me? I guess I think you could base it more on this? What are you trying to tell / say...
Read full commentPosted in the zoo
These are very sweet and nice
Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2019
These are very sweet and nice to hear you reading them. You have captured childish states well with these, I think. :)
Read full commentPosted in KidsSpeak
Oh I didn’t know about the
Posted on Fri, 16 Aug 2019
Oh I didn’t know about the invasion. That definitely sounds a bit scary. They can gather in numbers can’t they. A plot of jellyfish. Glad you enjoyed, thanks for your comment. :)
Read full commentPosted in Jellyfish
Pages