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How To Be Authentic
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The Promise of Sunlight
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Hi Jenny, thank you! Atlantic
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019
Hi Jenny, thank you! Atlantic salmon sometimes return to their nascent rivers 2-3 times, I think Pacific salmon are the salmon that only make one return if I remember correctly. Nevertheless, being a salmon is a short, tiring and risky business...
Read full commentPosted in Ecstasy
I like that you have included
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019
I like that you have included that we don't require them to have permits and welcome them. If only we could apply this to all migrants. I love birds so enjoyed your visiting geese. :)
Read full commentPosted in Geese
Your poems are always so
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019
Your poems are always so sensory.
'a dashing sky scatter
of black stars swirl'
'rain-sound wings'
Very lovely. :)
Read full commentPosted in starlings
Great observations and
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019
Great observations and cleverly written with humour and pathos. Black leather waistcoat, oof, no. Enjoyed reading. :)
Read full commentPosted in With a Blue Jug in Her Hand
Another lovely
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019
Another lovely autobiographical piece to read. I love how you sequentially share all the important details that gently reveal the twists and turns of what happened both in terms of events and how you felt, it makes these so interesting and...
Read full commentPosted in The Last Man in my Life
This is brilliant.
Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019
This is brilliant.
Read full commentPosted in Birthday Song
I'm having such a bad day
Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019
I'm having such a bad day hence my maudlin offering (which has reminded me of the perils of impulsive posting on the internet), however, it has made me smile that you have posted a much more succinct poem about uncertainty which cleverly leaves a...
Read full commentPosted in Uncertainties
This was so good, I went back
Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019
This was so good, I went back to read all the preceding ones. Completely riveting. I think it's the detail and honesty in them. Thank you for sharing them, they make great reading. :)
Read full commentPosted in Al in Minneapolis
Beautiful, Di, full of
Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2019
Beautiful, Di, full of richness and colour. :)
Read full commentPosted in appeal
This is unsettling to me and
Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019
This is unsettling to me and comforting at the same time. So well captured.
Read full commentPosted in Strange Light
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