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A Crocodile Can’t Be Loved

A little late night insomniac nonsense, but it gave me something to do...
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Hoopoe

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Midnight Ocean

Late night poeming.

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512 of my comments have received 558 Great Feedback votes

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Very well told, great

Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022

Very well told, great contrast of description of real life and the gathering rise of unease into the sharp tug at the end. We will wait for Part 2! In the meantime, this is our Pick of the Day! Do share on Facebook and Twitter. 

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Posted in Charmed (Part One of Two)

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Deceptively simple and very

Posted on Mon, 08 Aug 2022

Deceptively simple and very lovely indeed, it's our Pick of the Day. Do share on social media. 

Painting is from here: ...

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Posted in Glorious Moments

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This is our Pick of the Day -

Posted on Wed, 13 Jul 2022

This is our Pick of the Day - an astounding piece. Written with piercing beauty of the two characters at the tragedy's heart. Do share on Facebook and Twitter. (Painting is here: ...

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Posted in (This Life) Part 9: Forever Pure

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This is our Poem of the Week!

Posted on Sat, 02 Jul 2022

This is our Poem of the Week! Congratulations! 

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Posted in On Oddicombe Beach

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Excellent, really looking

Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022

Excellent, really looking forward to Part 2!

(Since you asked for feedback, the only thing I would say is that just every now and then some of the description jars with me, that could be entirely personal though! But for example, '...

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Posted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part One of Three)

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Very lovely. :)

Posted on Sat, 02 Jul 2022

Very lovely. :)

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Posted in Harvest Mouse

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A childhood memory we can all

Posted on Mon, 20 Jun 2022

A childhood memory we can all tap into and reimagine the exhilaration of. Lovely, and I especially enjoyed the idea of the grandchildren as lightning bolts. It's our Pick of the Day. Do share on social media. (The painting is a Winslow Homer from...

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Posted in Orderly Re-Union

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This is our Poem of the Week!

Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022

This is our Poem of the Week! Congratulations! 

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Posted in Eves' Tears

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This gorgeous poem is our

Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022

This gorgeous poem is our Pick of the Day. So lovely, lenchenelf. Love the idea of puritanical bees. And all especially appropriate since it is World Bee Day. And I'm going to use 'industry' as this week's Inspiration Point. Hope the painting I'...

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Posted in Eves' Tears

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Fantastic to hear he's

Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022

Fantastic to hear he's finally home. Think you have so neatly interwoven thoughts about current and recent events with the personal. :)

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Posted in A Final Message From Moscow

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