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Very well told, great
Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022
Very well told, great contrast of description of real life and the gathering rise of unease into the sharp tug at the end. We will wait for Part 2! In the meantime, this is our Pick of the Day! Do share on Facebook and Twitter.
This is our Pick of the Day - an astounding piece. Written with piercing beauty of the two characters at the tragedy's heart. Do share on Facebook and Twitter. (Painting is here: ...
(Since you asked for feedback, the only thing I would say is that just every now and then some of the description jars with me, that could be entirely personal though! But for example, '...
A childhood memory we can all tap into and reimagine the exhilaration of. Lovely, and I especially enjoyed the idea of the grandchildren as lightning bolts. It's our Pick of the Day. Do share on social media. (The painting is a Winslow Homer from...
This gorgeous poem is our Pick of the Day. So lovely, lenchenelf. Love the idea of puritanical bees. And all especially appropriate since it is World Bee Day. And I'm going to use 'industry' as this week's Inspiration Point. Hope the painting I'...
Very well told, great
Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022
Very well told, great contrast of description of real life and the gathering rise of unease into the sharp tug at the end. We will wait for Part 2! In the meantime, this is our Pick of the Day! Do share on Facebook and Twitter.
Read full commentPosted in Charmed (Part One of Two)
Deceptively simple and very
Posted on Mon, 08 Aug 2022
Deceptively simple and very lovely indeed, it's our Pick of the Day. Do share on social media.
Painting is from here: ...
Read full commentPosted in Glorious Moments
This is our Pick of the Day -
Posted on Wed, 13 Jul 2022
This is our Pick of the Day - an astounding piece. Written with piercing beauty of the two characters at the tragedy's heart. Do share on Facebook and Twitter. (Painting is here: ...
Read full commentPosted in (This Life) Part 9: Forever Pure
This is our Poem of the Week!
Posted on Sat, 02 Jul 2022
This is our Poem of the Week! Congratulations!
Read full commentPosted in On Oddicombe Beach
Excellent, really looking
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
Excellent, really looking forward to Part 2!
(Since you asked for feedback, the only thing I would say is that just every now and then some of the description jars with me, that could be entirely personal though! But for example, '...
Read full commentPosted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part One of Three)
Very lovely. :)
Posted on Sat, 02 Jul 2022
Very lovely. :)
Read full commentPosted in Harvest Mouse
A childhood memory we can all
Posted on Mon, 20 Jun 2022
A childhood memory we can all tap into and reimagine the exhilaration of. Lovely, and I especially enjoyed the idea of the grandchildren as lightning bolts. It's our Pick of the Day. Do share on social media. (The painting is a Winslow Homer from...
Read full commentPosted in Orderly Re-Union
This is our Poem of the Week!
Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022
This is our Poem of the Week! Congratulations!
Read full commentPosted in Eves' Tears
This gorgeous poem is our
Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022
This gorgeous poem is our Pick of the Day. So lovely, lenchenelf. Love the idea of puritanical bees. And all especially appropriate since it is World Bee Day. And I'm going to use 'industry' as this week's Inspiration Point. Hope the painting I'...
Read full commentPosted in Eves' Tears
Fantastic to hear he's
Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022
Fantastic to hear he's finally home. Think you have so neatly interwoven thoughts about current and recent events with the personal. :)
Read full commentPosted in A Final Message From Moscow
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