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The Inner Gaze

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Deus Ex Machina

A conclusion ought to be logical, make sense of a narrative; there is no lowered god to resolve an end for me. I should have been born in Ancient...

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488 of my comments have received 525 Great Feedback votes

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Lovely sibilance, perfect

Posted on Thu, 28 Oct 2021

Lovely sibilance, perfect reading for me as the rain patters against the window. Great poem, great last line. x

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Posted in Before Rhythm of Hours Change the Beat

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Yes, wondering what happens

Posted on Wed, 27 Oct 2021

Yes, wondering what happens and where next...you never know with a crow. 

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Posted in The Black Crow of Purgatory (Part 1 of 3)

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Hi insert, I'm glad you liked

Posted on Sun, 10 Oct 2021

Hi insert, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!  No, it's not a typo - 'raddled, ruddled, reddled' are all words used for the reddening using ochre. I used reddled because it appealed to me sound-wise. I did worry that people would assume that it...

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Posted in My Body Belongs to the Earth

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This lovely poem of velvet

Posted on Thu, 30 Sep 2021

This lovely poem of velvet darkness and whiskery barbels is Pick of the Day. Some gorgeously evocative lines. I love the thought of their 'cool-eyed glances'. (I hope you don't mind, Jenny, I changed the image as the one you used had watermarks....

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Posted in Stone Loach

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Wonderful, love all the cold

Posted on Thu, 30 Sep 2021

Wonderful, love all the cold and dark and coiling. 

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Posted in Stone Loach

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Well, this is full of river

Posted on Sun, 26 Sep 2021

Well, this is full of river life. What a lovely collection of creatures. 

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Posted in River Of Awareness

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Just lovely. :)

Posted on Fri, 24 Sep 2021

Just lovely. :)

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Posted in Autumn's Delight

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A fabulous Autumn poem, I

Posted on Sun, 19 Sep 2021

A fabulous Autumn poem, I loved it. Rachel :)

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Posted in Autumn

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Such lovely imagery.

Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021

Such lovely imagery. Beautifully transporting. Rachel :)

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Posted in The Wind in the Willows

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Love this - the tragedy is

Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021

Love this - the tragedy is heightened by the magic you bring to the poem. :)

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Posted in Out in the Fields

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