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To my imaginary child
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The Diplomacy of Vultures
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Sometimes I am so excited
Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020
Sometimes I am so excited that you have put up a new part that I save it for when I think I'll need it, but it couldn't wait. Or maybe I just needed to read it now. I love your Saltburn. I loved all of it, but clever how Stanley disappears into...
Read full commentPosted in Sven Goes to War. Part 6. Dress You Up
This is excellent and amusing
Posted on Wed, 18 Mar 2020
This is excellent and amusing . I think we need as much amusement as we can get at the moment. Rachel x
Read full commentPosted in Blood Relations
Brilliantly written and very
Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2020
Brilliantly written and very funny. I love all of it, but most especially the fishermen (I have written a very serious poem today about fishermen, and not at all the kind of fishermen that buy copies of Nude Women in Combat), the recorder, the...
Read full commentPosted in Sven Goes to War. Part 3. I Want to Break Free
If Delicious Gifts existed I
Posted on Sun, 15 Mar 2020
If Delicious Gifts existed I would be a regular customer. I would also call 0800-GUMSHOE. I am also planning a holiday in Saltburn on Sea and it better be like visiting one of your stories. I have some serious worries about his future too. :)
Read full commentPosted in Sven Goes to War. Part 2. Private Life.
Thank you. Am very happy that
Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2020
Thank you. Am very happy that you liked it. No, you haven't, but you appear to be giving that a try now and I have buckled, so here you go. I find this mildly terrifying so I might hastily delete and retreat, and am not sure my dulcet tones are...
Read full commentPosted in Meditation
I think you should get on
Posted on Thu, 12 Mar 2020
I think you should get on with it then seeing as there are members of the paying public waiting. Ok. We're not paying, but we are waiting and I'm sure that counts for something. :)
Read full commentPosted in Sven Goes to War. Part 1. Warriors of the Wasteland
I think this is wonderful. :)
Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2020
I think this is wonderful. :)
Read full commentPosted in Imagine if we Didn't Feel Pain
I like the fact that it's
Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020
I like the fact that it's clear that it is you doing all the watching by the end of the poem.
Read full commentPosted in A very scary character
I like the vulnerability that
Posted on Mon, 02 Mar 2020
I like the vulnerability that weaves through this. It's a really neatly written piece of nostalgia because it works its way back from a present trigger. A good reminder of why we should all #be kind. Is it wrong too that I especially like the...
Read full commentPosted in On the Spectrum
I like how sparse this is, it
Posted on Sun, 23 Feb 2020
I like how sparse this is, it gives the feeling of nightmare and fear well and benefits from a little freedom from rhyme. :)
Read full commentPosted in Nightmares
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