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Ahhhh. The vetting process. I

Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2020

Ahhhh. The vetting process. I wonder what this involves, looking at the suitability of her silhouette in a bedroom window so far. I like that she has noticed this. Have no doubt either than it's less glamorous than it appears. Enjoyed as usual....

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Posted in My Name Is Gideon

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Very pretty picture painted,

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2020

Very pretty picture painted, Jenny. Love the breath rising from mossy beds, makes me want to lie down and have a rest on one. :)

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Posted in Easter Thoughts

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Thanks Luigi. The article I

Posted on Thu, 09 Apr 2020

Thanks Luigi. The article I was reading was also discussing the negative views of brood parasites, but pointed out that it's very complex behaviour and has admirable aspects. I thought it was interesting too to look at it from the aspect of the...

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Posted in Learning How To Be Human

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Amazing. However you do it, I

Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2020

Amazing. However you do it, I don't know, but I'm all for it. Also excited that there is at least one other Saltburn story connected to this one... 

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Posted in Sven Goes to War. Part 14. Happy House

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Oh thanks for the link, hadn

Posted on Mon, 06 Apr 2020

Oh thanks for the link, hadn't read it, this is a great poem, love 'men manufacture both machine and soul' and yes, moving towards, those last few lines. Maybe even in the absence of absolutes we should all have a rest. Made me think of lockdown...

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Posted in Walking Away

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Thanks Drew, congratulations

Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020

Thanks Drew, congratulations to you too, very well deserved for your fantastic story. :)

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Posted in Deimos

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Wonderful Di, I love how this

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2020

Wonderful Di, I love how this ripples and rumbles to your hope at the end. Love the fanfares of dock leaves from dark mud, love all of it. :) 

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Posted in virus

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Ha. Oh dear! Not very

Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020

Ha. Oh dear! Not very lucrative afterall. It definitely is skillful to tell a story in just a few words, especially only 50. I would never manage, for one thing, I use far too many words to say anything at all and I'm a word hoarder too, I'd...

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Posted in Three is a Crowd

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Hi Rhiannon, thank you for

Posted on Thu, 26 Mar 2020

Hi Rhiannon, thank you for reading it. I'm glad you liked my wooded description which I take as a compliment as you write very lovely poems about the natural world. I see what you mean from your perspective about God, but of course, that is your...

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Posted in Pool in the Woods

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Mmmmm. Yeah, I'd stick to

Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2020

Mmmmm. Yeah, I'd stick to writing if I was you, I don't think you're going to be headhunted for advertising the armed forces any time soon, unless you significantly change your ways. :)

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Posted in Sven Goes to War. Part 7. Pictures of You.

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