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Waka for Murasaki Shikibu
Since it is the start of Women's History Month I've attempted a waka (5,7,5,7,7) though I might have taken a bit of a liberty with the form.
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The Fox Hunt
This painting is by Wilmslow Homer (1893), fox frightening crows, crows frightening fox. I especially like that it's a coastal scene and the red berries, and the dark glower of crows.
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Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven
First attempt at ekphrastic poetry.
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Pluto’s ode to Charon
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I like that you have included
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019
I like that you have included that we don't require them to have permits and welcome them. If only we could apply this to all migrants. I love birds so enjoyed your visiting geese. :)
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Great observations and
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019
Great observations and cleverly written with humour and pathos. Black leather waistcoat, oof, no. Enjoyed reading. :)
Read full commentPosted in With a Blue Jug in Her Hand
Another lovely
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019
Another lovely autobiographical piece to read. I love how you sequentially share all the important details that gently reveal the twists and turns of what happened both in terms of events and how you felt, it makes these so interesting and...
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This is brilliant.
Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019
This is brilliant.
Read full commentPosted in Birthday Song
I'm having such a bad day
Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019
I'm having such a bad day hence my maudlin offering (which has reminded me of the perils of impulsive posting on the internet), however, it has made me smile that you have posted a much more succinct poem about uncertainty which cleverly leaves a...
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This was so good, I went back
Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019
This was so good, I went back to read all the preceding ones. Completely riveting. I think it's the detail and honesty in them. Thank you for sharing them, they make great reading. :)
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This is unsettling to me and
Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019
This is unsettling to me and comforting at the same time. So well captured.
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Amazing poem. :)
Posted on Thu, 03 Oct 2019
Amazing poem. :)
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Lovely, really like the
Posted on Thu, 29 Aug 2019
Lovely, really like the cyclical element to this. Owls are magnificent. :)
Read full commentPosted in With Obsidian Eyes
It is very beautiful indeed.
Posted on Mon, 26 Aug 2019
It is very beautiful indeed. :)
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