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Beautiful, Di. Lovely imagery

Posted on Fri, 10 Jul 2020

Beautiful, Di. Lovely imagery and loved the ant punctuation and lovelorn grasshoppers too. 

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Posted in 10th july grasshopper

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Oh, it already does. Botres,

Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2020

Oh, it already does. Botres, son of Eumelus tastes some of a ram's brain that was intended as part of an offering to Apollo. Father is enraged, kills son, Apollo, merciful, brings him back to life, but as a bee eater. Just too minor a tale for...

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Thank you for making me laugh

Posted on Mon, 29 Jun 2020

Thank you for making me laugh on a Monday, not an easy feat. Rhymes are so nicely done too. Rachel x

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Posted in The Cherry Orchard

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Thanks Drew! x Insect week,

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2020

Thanks Drew! x Insect week, who knew, I could have written about a number of ex-boyfriends, but opted for bluebottles. 

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This is a very dreamy, misty,

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2020

This is a very dreamy, misty, floaty one, like a Monet painting indeed. Enjoyed the moony wistfulness of it. :)

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Posted in Not yet the hissing of summer lawns

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Every line is beautiful. Love

Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2020

Every line is beautiful. Love this, Di. :)

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Posted in june 25th, woods after a hot day

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Very lovely Di, you have

Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2020

Very lovely Di, you have captured all the different moments of a walk so well: wonder, excitement, sadness, light and shade. Rachel :)

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Oh yes, they do like a frog

Posted on Fri, 19 Jun 2020

Oh yes, they do like a frog dinner too, don't they. Which would make sense because I think the name heron comes from a French word. I could just be making that up though...I hope your frogs escaped largely unscathed. Thanks ever so much for Pick...

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Posted in Grey Heron

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Ha. Yes, I have read that

Posted on Fri, 19 Jun 2020

Ha. Yes, I have read that about herons. They stab something repeatedly, fish floats dead, down the hatch. They also swallow small mammals head first so that they swallow with the direction that the fur lies. There's a name for it, but I can't...

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Posted in Grey Heron

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A lot to take in, as

Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2020

A lot to take in, as airyfairy said, but things that stand out straight away - the outsider does not yearn to be tolerated and inclusion is not the same as belonging. Rachel :)

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Posted in Outsiders, and the clubhouse door

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