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My stories have been read 7273 times and 54 of my stories have been cherry picked.
27 of my 504 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 27 votes

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Crematorium

Not for the easily offended.
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Ice Age

With some articles inserted.
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27 of my comments have received 27 Great Feedback votes

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So lovely. Some very

Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019

So lovely. Some very beautiful lines. 

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Posted in grass/july

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Thanks David. Just the

Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019

Thanks David. Just the thought of Boris Johnson gives me a shudder. It would be nice to think though, wouldn’t it, that we could all embrace more of our humanity. Thanks for reading my poem and leaving such a thoughtful comment. 

 

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Posted in I am not a statistic

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This has so many sublime

Posted on Wed, 03 Jul 2019

This has so many sublime lines, imagery and metaphor. Such an excellent piece of writing. 

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Posted in A Man Riding the Tube Train

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Clever and very well done. 

Posted on Tue, 02 Jul 2019

Clever and very well done. 

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Posted in The Waits Land

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It is a stunning poem. Have

Posted on Sat, 29 Jun 2019

It is a stunning poem. Have come back to read it several times. 

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Posted in Everyone remembers everything eventually

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Which is why I say

Posted on Wed, 28 May 2008

Which is why I say personally. I am reluctant at times to make criticisms as it seems so subjective. I'm not very good at criticising anyway as I have no idea about the technical side of things or the language to use to articulate what I want to...Read full comment

Posted in Abstract

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