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Continues to be completely

Posted on Mon, 22 Feb 2021

Continues to be completely fascinating and moving. Apart from anything, too, it is such a precious record of firsthand experience - it reminds you of what would be lost if you weren't keeping this record. I'm so glad you are. Rachel.

 

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Posted in My New Nemesis

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Gorgeous, Di. Love moss

Posted on Sun, 21 Feb 2021

Gorgeous, Di. Love moss swelling, lichen rigged and still deer. I think your nouns and verbs are beautifully threaded. :)

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Brilliant. Hints of Beckett,

Posted on Fri, 19 Feb 2021

Brilliant. Hints of Beckett, who is one of my favourite writers so I love your stories. This part is hilariously grim. :)

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Posted in There You Are

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These slices of personal

Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2021

These slices of personal history are mesmerising and moving. This is our Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter. 

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Posted in 276 Portobello Road

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The perils of living on an

Posted on Tue, 09 Feb 2021

The perils of living on an island, especially Neville's. This brilliantly written and deeply wry story is our Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter.

 

(Ross - I hope the image is ok. Feel free to change if not. It's from...

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Posted in Take it Back

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This has such a wistful

Posted on Tue, 09 Feb 2021

This has such a wistful sadness to it. 

'a brook bird song

hardly audible

beneath perpetual

flowing river'

Lovely lines. 
 

Rachel :)

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Posted in Silent Lament

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Ah well, you conjure it up

Posted on Mon, 08 Feb 2021

Ah well, you conjure it up very well. (And not to labour my point like a pedant...I should have explained myself better, I wondered if it should be gazed at, or gazed upon, rather than just gazed - but, as I said, could just be me!)

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Posted in Mehtab Bagh (Moonlight Garden)

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Lovely, Paul. Really

Posted on Mon, 08 Feb 2021

Lovely, Paul. Really evocative. (BTW - is 'gazed an ivory tomb' - could just be me.)

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Posted in Mehtab Bagh (Moonlight Garden)

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Yes, the promise of Spring

Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021

Yes, the promise of Spring just around the corner. A nice reminder.

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Posted in Drifting On The Muse

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This offers an enchanting

Posted on Thu, 28 Jan 2021

This offers an enchanting escape and leaves us a secret forest to imagine. Quite lovely, and is Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter. 

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Posted in A Secret Forest

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