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Ash Trees

I did post this last Saturday for the Inspiration Point, but then took it down after about ten minutes as I felt uncomfortable with some of it. So I have chopped some parts and extended others.

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89 of my comments have received 91 Great Feedback votes

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I like how sparse this is, it

Posted on Sun, 23 Feb 2020

I like how sparse this is, it gives the feeling of nightmare and fear well and benefits from a little freedom from rhyme. :)

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Posted in Nightmares

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This is excellent. A perfect

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

This is excellent. A perfect poem for the picture. Love the use of rot and rancid and putrid, really conjured up the stink of it all. And the picture is amazing too. :)

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Posted in September 15th 2008

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Oh yes, I think it's a good

Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020

Oh yes, I think it's a good thing though. You are exploring some interesting themes. You definitely have successfully roused sympathy for Lottie. Rachel x

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Posted in Repentance and Redemption

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I like the idea of this. I

Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020

I like the idea of this. I like the repetition and I like the stark lines. :) 

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Posted in I've forgotten

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Oh god. Imagine the

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

Oh god. Imagine the disappointment. Just a poem. Not a boob in sight. 

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Posted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven

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So sad, sorry for you and

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

So sad, sorry for you and Frankie. It's a very precious thing, the love between us and our pets. 

 

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Posted in To my Best Friend...(Frankie)

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You're right, now I'm

Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2020

You're right, now I'm imagining Boris trying to explain Pluto and Charon to Trump through role play:
 

'But it's my turn to be Pluto, Boris.' 

'Just ferry the dead souls to me, Donald',

Just goes to show too how...

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Posted in Pluto’s ode to Charon

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Ha. Oh dear. I feel like I

Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2020

Ha. Oh dear. I feel like I made you work for it. Pluto is pretty special in its own icy way, isn't it, poor unplaneted thing that it is. I think we should definitely send T and B - Team TB as explorers in a Wallace and Gromit style rocket. Who...

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Posted in Pluto’s ode to Charon

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Thank goodness for miracles

Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2020

Thank goodness for miracles and despite the infinity of pain, the surprise of goodness - such loveliness to discover. Loved the eel queue and Octo-Steve and all the fishy friends. And it has made my day that there are mudskippers eying up the...

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Posted in The Aquarium. Part 5. I Can’t Make You Love Me.

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I'd like to say I'd had none,

Posted on Mon, 17 Feb 2020

I'd like to say I'd had none, being a lady, just a vivid imagination, so that's all I will say. :) In a way, mudskippers are so charming that it seems insulting to have cast them in a poem about one night stands, but they're not very romantic,...

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Posted in One Night Stand

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