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This is a lovely, delicate
Posted on Thu, 15 Aug 2019
This is a lovely, delicate poem. Like a leaf of a poem actually with its hint of darkness too. I loved, ‘breathe leaf breath’ and the threatening wind.
Read full commentPosted in airmail from the amazon (august 2018)
This is very lovely. I like
Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2019
This is very lovely. I like your use of emphasis, but all wonderful.
Read full commentPosted in prairie river flowing
Rhiannon, these are so good.
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
Rhiannon, these are so good. I have been popping back to read them in turn. Though I enjoyed hearing your Welsh accent too - which is poetic in itself, I think. April and December are my favourites - perhaps for what they describe as much as your...
Read full commentPosted in Through the year month by month
Such an interesting piece of
Posted on Tue, 13 Aug 2019
Such an interesting piece of writing about memory. Enjoyed it very much. Made me think of synapses as light or stars. Lovely.
Read full commentPosted in Remembering
So beautiful. I enjoyed every
Posted on Fri, 02 Aug 2019
So beautiful. I enjoyed every bit of this poem, but the opening lines alone are wonderful. And you know what’s so lasting about poems like this, for me, is the next time I come across kelp I will remember this.
Read full commentPosted in Kelp
Aha, so this is the lost ID
Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2019
Aha, so this is the lost ID poem! It's very good indeed and as Rhiannon says above, neatly done. Also I missed passports on my long list of things that would have my name on! (I might edit to see if I can squeeze passports in!) I remember this...
Read full commentPosted in Stateless in New York
Love the metaphors. Love the
Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2019
Love the metaphors. Love the words as water and petals. So good.
Read full commentPosted in Promise
Thanks David. Just the
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019
Thanks David. Just the thought of Boris Johnson gives me a shudder. It would be nice to think though, wouldn’t it, that we could all embrace more of our humanity. Thanks for reading my poem and leaving such a thoughtful comment.
Read full commentPosted in I am not a statistic
This has so many sublime
Posted on Wed, 03 Jul 2019
This has so many sublime lines, imagery and metaphor. Such an excellent piece of writing.
Read full commentPosted in A Man Riding the Tube Train
Clever and very well done.
Posted on Tue, 02 Jul 2019
Clever and very well done.
Read full commentPosted in The Waits Land
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