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My stories have been read 9583 times and 63 of my stories have been cherry picked.
37 of my 580 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes

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37 of my comments have received 37 Great Feedback votes

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Beautiful, Di, full of

Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2019

Beautiful, Di, full of richness and colour. :)

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Posted in appeal

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This is unsettling to me and

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019

This is unsettling to me and comforting at the same time. So well captured. 

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Posted in Strange Light

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Amazing poem. :)

Posted on Thu, 03 Oct 2019

Amazing poem. :)

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Posted in American Diaspora

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So beautiful. I love this. '

Posted on Tue, 24 Sep 2019

So beautiful. I love this. ' swollen seconds full of sun.' and ' joined dots, clotting to a mass of dark.' Inspired lines. Very clever idea too of them as full stops. 

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Posted in recipe

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Breath-taking imagery. Quite

Posted on Sun, 15 Sep 2019

Breath-taking imagery. Quite stunning. :)

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Posted in wings, late summer

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Lovely, really like the

Posted on Thu, 29 Aug 2019

Lovely, really like the cyclical element to this. Owls are magnificent. :)

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Posted in With Obsidian Eyes

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It is very beautiful indeed.

Posted on Mon, 26 Aug 2019

It is very beautiful indeed. :)

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Posted in Harpocrates

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Jenny, I love your jellyfish

Posted on Thu, 22 Aug 2019

Jenny, I love your jellyfish - terrifying! Your description of it is beautifully done ‘ghostly, Seraph angel’ and works well with the story. They are such alien creatures. I guess we can both thank the jellyfish for being such weird and wonderful...

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Posted in Strange Happenings

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This is a great poem, so many

Posted on Wed, 21 Aug 2019

This is a great poem, so many brilliant lines, loved, ‘vertigo gives fear to stumble’ amongst pretty much all the rest. :)

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Posted in Sweet Thing

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This is really good. I think

Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019

This is really good. I think it encapsulates the issues / dilemmas of antidepressants really well for those who take them. I like how you’ve managed to include the routine submission to taking them too. It’s a sad poem, but an experience that is...

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Posted in anti depressants

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