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Ash Trees

By onemorething on Sun, 15 Mar 2020

I did post this last Saturday for the Inspiration Point, but then took it down after about ten minutes as I felt uncomfortable with some of it. So I have chopped some parts and extended others.

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Meditation

By onemorething on Sat, 14 Mar 2020

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Worm Moon

By onemorething on Sat, 07 Mar 2020

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A Broken Pot’s Lament

By onemorething on Sat, 07 Mar 2020

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If Delicious Gifts existed I

Posted on Sun, 15 Mar 2020

If Delicious Gifts existed I would be a regular customer. I would also call 0800-GUMSHOE. I am also planning a holiday in Saltburn on Sea and it better be like visiting one of your stories. I have some serious worries about his future too. :)

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Thank you. Am very happy that

Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2020

Thank you. Am very happy that you liked it. No, you haven't, but you appear to be giving that a try now and I have buckled, so here you go. I find this mildly terrifying so I might hastily delete and retreat, and am not sure my dulcet tones are...

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I think you should get on

Posted on Thu, 12 Mar 2020

I think you should get on with it then seeing as there are members of the paying public waiting. Ok. We're not paying, but we are waiting and I'm sure that counts for something. :)

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I absolutely love this, the

Posted on Fri, 13 Mar 2020

I absolutely love this, the mix of medical and myth is beautiful and evocative. I guess also topical which makes it clever too. Anyhow. I loved it. :)

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I think this is wonderful. :)

Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2020

I think this is wonderful. :)

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I like the fact that it's

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020

I like the fact that it's clear that it is you doing all the watching by the end of the poem.

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I like the vulnerability that

Posted on Mon, 02 Mar 2020

I like the vulnerability that weaves through this. It's a really neatly written piece of nostalgia because it works its way back from a present trigger. A good reminder of why we should all #be kind. Is it wrong too that I especially like the...

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I like how sparse this is, it

Posted on Sun, 23 Feb 2020

I like how sparse this is, it gives the feeling of nightmare and fear well and benefits from a little freedom from rhyme. :)

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This is excellent. A perfect

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

This is excellent. A perfect poem for the picture. Love the use of rot and rancid and putrid, really conjured up the stink of it all. And the picture is amazing too. :)

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Oh yes, I think it's a good

Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020

Oh yes, I think it's a good thing though. You are exploring some interesting themes. You definitely have successfully roused sympathy for Lottie. Rachel x