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Brilliant rant. I think next

Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020

Brilliant rant. I think next time anyone has something to rant about, we should send you bullet points of the general issues and you can form it into a witty and biting rant for us. I'd pay. :)

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Posted in Just Put Me In The Fridge

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A chipolata between two

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2020

A chipolata between two Bratwursts. Fabulous. I loved the dog too. I liked the story enough to type my comment twice as I am on a train, made great train reading though. Now concerned about what's going to happen to the rest of those gloves...

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Posted in The Aquarium. Part 1. I’m Confessin’

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Beautiful, Paul. 'Carrion

Posted on Wed, 24 Feb 2021

Beautiful, Paul. 'Carrion crows blink milk-lid eyes' - I love the contrast of the beauty of night and its shadows of crows. The 'ocean of our making'  - a line to swoon over. The last stanza and line is so powerful set against the description of...

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Posted in Forgotten Souls

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Continues to be completely

Posted on Mon, 22 Feb 2021

Continues to be completely fascinating and moving. Apart from anything, too, it is such a precious record of firsthand experience - it reminds you of what would be lost if you weren't keeping this record. I'm so glad you are. Rachel.

 

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Posted in My New Nemesis

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Gorgeous, Di. Love moss

Posted on Sun, 21 Feb 2021

Gorgeous, Di. Love moss swelling, lichen rigged and still deer. I think your nouns and verbs are beautifully threaded. :)

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Posted in deer

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Brilliant. Hints of Beckett,

Posted on Fri, 19 Feb 2021

Brilliant. Hints of Beckett, who is one of my favourite writers so I love your stories. This part is hilariously grim. :)

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Posted in There You Are

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These slices of personal

Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2021

These slices of personal history are mesmerising and moving. This is our Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter. 

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Posted in 276 Portobello Road

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The perils of living on an

Posted on Tue, 09 Feb 2021

The perils of living on an island, especially Neville's. This brilliantly written and deeply wry story is our Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter.

 

(Ross - I hope the image is ok. Feel free to change if not. It's from...

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Posted in Take it Back

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This has such a wistful

Posted on Tue, 09 Feb 2021

This has such a wistful sadness to it. 

'a brook bird song

hardly audible

beneath perpetual

flowing river'

Lovely lines. 
 

Rachel :)

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Posted in Silent Lament

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Ah well, you conjure it up

Posted on Mon, 08 Feb 2021

Ah well, you conjure it up very well. (And not to labour my point like a pedant...I should have explained myself better, I wondered if it should be gazed at, or gazed upon, rather than just gazed - but, as I said, could just be me!)

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Posted in Mehtab Bagh (Moonlight Garden)

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