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Crematorium

By onemorething on Thu, 15 Aug 2019

Not for the easily offended.

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Ice Age

By onemorething on Wed, 14 Aug 2019

With some articles inserted.

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Distance of the Moon

By onemorething on Tue, 13 Aug 2019

With some articles inserted.

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Cathedrals

By onemorething on Mon, 12 Aug 2019

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21 of my comments have received 21 Great Feedback votes

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Love these, incredibly well

Posted on Fri, 02 Aug 2019

Love these, incredibly well written, hilarious and clever - a perfect combination.

Posted in Put That In Your Pipe

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Aha, so this is the lost ID

Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2019

Aha, so this is the lost ID poem! It's very good indeed and as Rhiannon says above, neatly done. Also I missed passports on my long list of things that would have my name on! (I might edit to see if I can squeeze passports in!) I remember this...

Posted in Stateless in New York

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Love the metaphors. Love the

Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2019

Love the metaphors. Love the words as water and petals. So good.

Posted in Promise

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Ha! I had not thought of that

Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2019

Ha! I had not thought of that! Though even if rich I don’t think I would want to perpetually migrate to stay in spring and summer endlessly. And yes, I have a name, of course, but am choosing to avoid it for innocuous and kind reasons to myself...

Posted in Swifts

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Thanks for your lovely

Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2019

Thanks for your lovely comment. Glad it makes sense! I couldn’t decide whether it was buffetting or buffeting as it seemed to be spelled both ways and then I left it as buffeting for my own amusement (easily pleased) as they eat on the go (a...

Posted in Swifts

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So lovely. Some very

Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019

So lovely. Some very beautiful lines.

Posted in grass/july

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Thanks David. Just the

Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019

Thanks David. Just the thought of Boris Johnson gives me a shudder. It would be nice to think though, wouldn’t it, that we could all embrace more of our humanity. Thanks for reading my poem and leaving such a thoughtful comment.