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Thanks Drew! x Insect week,

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2020

Thanks Drew! x Insect week, who knew, I could have written about a number of ex-boyfriends, but opted for bluebottles. 

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Posted in Bluebottle

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This is a very dreamy, misty,

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2020

This is a very dreamy, misty, floaty one, like a Monet painting indeed. Enjoyed the moony wistfulness of it. :)

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Posted in Not yet the hissing of summer lawns

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Every line is beautiful. Love

Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2020

Every line is beautiful. Love this, Di. :)

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Posted in june 25th, woods after a hot day

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Very lovely Di, you have

Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2020

Very lovely Di, you have captured all the different moments of a walk so well: wonder, excitement, sadness, light and shade. Rachel :)

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Posted in june 20th

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Oh yes, they do like a frog

Posted on Fri, 19 Jun 2020

Oh yes, they do like a frog dinner too, don't they. Which would make sense because I think the name heron comes from a French word. I could just be making that up though...I hope your frogs escaped largely unscathed. Thanks ever so much for Pick...

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Posted in Grey Heron

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Ha. Yes, I have read that

Posted on Fri, 19 Jun 2020

Ha. Yes, I have read that about herons. They stab something repeatedly, fish floats dead, down the hatch. They also swallow small mammals head first so that they swallow with the direction that the fur lies. There's a name for it, but I can't...

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Posted in Grey Heron

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A lot to take in, as

Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2020

A lot to take in, as airyfairy said, but things that stand out straight away - the outsider does not yearn to be tolerated and inclusion is not the same as belonging. Rachel :)

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Posted in Outsiders, and the clubhouse door

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I love the bombardment of

Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2020

I love the bombardment of this. Quite a walk. I enjoyed it very much. Has some great lines too, 'the sweat of labour, the sweat of love' just for one. Rachel :)

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Posted in This year's walk...(08)

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Love this one, Luigi. So sad

Posted on Thu, 11 Jun 2020

Love this one, Luigi. So sad that he's not here anymore. Like the reflection on mortality. Rachel x

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Posted in Independence

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'But forget to grab my heart

Posted on Sat, 13 Jun 2020

'But forget to grab my heart

Leaving it in the living room
Where it fibrillates weakly'

Some wonderful lines in this, I really felt them. Particularly these. Made me sigh. You must go back in and retrieve it. Rachel :)

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Posted in Unpicking knots

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