Sun - Shines
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By Richard L. Provencher
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The sun is probing
morning’s
shabby looking grey-mist
a movement of
sunshine emerges here & there
provides enough colour
brings gladness
to the scene
highlights sea-gull activity
on busy shorelines
where massive walls of
roiling water
shudder noisily
against salty beaches.
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Lovely, Richard. (Shudder not
Lovely, Richard. (Shudder not shudders in last lines?)
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I found the sensory
I found the sensory simplicity of this hopeful and very pleasing. It's our Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter.
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Yes, very evocative and
Yes, very evocative and drawing to the bright light penetrating through the dull mist. Rhiannon
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so many wonderful lines,
so many wonderful lines, really enjoyed your poem, Thankyou! Particularly like the idea of mist being shabby
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A wonderful little glimpse of
A wonderful little glimpse of warmth on these grey days - thank you Richard and very big congratulations on those golden cherries!
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I could see those gulls and
I could see those gulls and massive walls of rolling water. Such a visual, evocative poem. Just lovely, Richard. I hope you are keeping well. Paul
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A worthy double cherry
A worthy double cherry Richard. I'm all for direct simplicity - show not tell, which here puts me just there on the shoreline.
Dougie Moody
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