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Forever

Forever, we met one childhood...
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Trees

Some trees stand like they just know their roots run through them (Wikimedia image copyright)
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The mayfly

You are anything but transient...
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Hope

A three line poem
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mountains

A four line poem
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12 of my comments have received 12 Great Feedback votes

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Just sublime. I can reach out

Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2022

Just sublime. I can reach out and feel the delicacy of every word, fragile yet strong. 

'soft as forgetting' - wonderful! 

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Posted in butterfly moment

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I enjoyed this poem. I liked

Posted on Mon, 06 Sep 2021

I enjoyed this poem. I liked the way it got more frenzied as it went on, unfortunately a bit like the addiction itself.

If the money each week is saved, after ten years you've got yourself over a grand. That's not a bad win!

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Posted in Being Careful What You Wish For

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Really captured the scene

Posted on Wed, 02 Sep 2020

Really captured the scene well, like some niftily produced video footage.

I particularly enjoyed verse 3.

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Posted in Peace In The Forest

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This is wonderful. So

Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020

This is wonderful. So evocative, with some lovely details - too many to pick and highlight.

A real transporter. I completely felt like I was there waiting for the saveloys to arrive, the smell driving me insane after a hard day's graft. I...

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Posted in The Pub

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I enjoyed how this overflowed

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2019

I enjoyed how this overflowed with content despite its brevity. A hard feat to pull off. Well done.

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Posted in The End of a Brighter November Day

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Very well written. You have

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

Very well written. You have captured the moment perfectly. Dialogue and narration has a good balance.

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Posted in La Femme d'argent

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Some parts of us are sacred

Posted on Sat, 21 Apr 2018

Some parts of us are sacred and remain safe and untouched; they can be seen by us in nature. A lovely read.

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Posted in My Dreams are Safe (IP)

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I'll be honest with you. My

Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017

I'll be honest with you. My concentration is poor at the best of times and it takes a lot for me to be able to read a story here all in one go, but this one just kept me reading. You have a really great style of writing. I loved the first person...

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Posted in The agony and the ecstacy

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Thanks for the pick, that's

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017

Thanks for the pick, that's great. I hope I have added the contribution correctly?

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Posted in Traces

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Well deserved. A really

Posted on Tue, 30 May 2017

Well deserved. A really strong voice threads through this, with great integrity. 

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Posted in My Mother and I aren't Talking and Other Tales.

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