Fifty Shades of Death



By loquaciousicity
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When nights are dark you’ll never see
the depths of our humanity,
but in the light of desert days
the shades of death will quite amaze.
So if you’ve time to take the trouble
sift just once through wreck and rubble -
ashen bones of tots will rile,
though eyes of rampant killers smile.
While starving at their mama’s breast,
one wonders whom those babes transgressed.
But as the bombs boom, split and splatter,
does it even really matter?
Yes, mothers often pay the price
with holy wartime sacrifice:
in flight, miscarried embryos!
Quite slow as ethnic cleansing goes,
but nonetheless, one must confess,
infanticide’s a great success.
The Chiefs disdain the Rule of Law -
their conscience never seems to gnaw
when dealing peace its last hurrah;
though charged with crime, they never rue it,
persevere and still pursue it,
smile and claim “they made me do it”.
They smoke their own, like cannibals,
with dictates, such as Hannibal's,
erasing also hostages
in so-called rescue carnages.
With bullets flying back and forth
the hungry hordes are driven north,
since promised aid (that’s long gone south)
was empty words from furtive mouth.
Instead of plates of pita bread
the meals are served with plated lead,
and those expiring at their hands
will sleep neath sheets of silent sands.
On fallow fields where kids once played
you’ll find a random hand grenade,
the only one that didn’t explode
the last time that the lawn was mowed.
As prancing children cross the roads
sometimes a tampered phone explodes.
One wonders what the future bodes -
perhaps some elegiac odes!
Where are those boys that threw a stone?
Well, some were shot; and some were not,
but whisked away to place unknown
and in the meantime... left to rot.
Within dark tunnels, bad guys hide,
beneath the clinics, far and wide,
so missiles raze them to the ground -
no bodies of the bad guys found,
but upstairs in debris, instead,
lie doctors in the ER... dead.
Twelve bombers flattened Ah-tross City
showing no remorse or pity;
now survivors hide in tents
in fear of further ‘accidents’.
But where are those with screams that gags?
Brought often back in body bags!
No need for sorrow for the slain,
since after death they feel no pain.
Today are waged uncivil wars
which burst the dams and breach the shores
to empty vital reservoirs;
with water less than hitherto,
(and lacking coke from Timbuktu),
they’re left to lap the sewage brew.
This glance at barren battlefields
reveals the peace that killing yields,
evoking shadows time transcends
when man’s existence finally ends.
EPILOGUE
While Jungle Jim the Jingoist
embroils the world, and wars persist,
pale Peter Pan the Pacifist
pleads “Can’t we somehow coexist?”
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Comments
Can’t we somehow coexist?
Excellent words to describe the most inhumane circumstances.
infanticide’s a great success
It is indeed. I don't know how Israel's butchers can get through a minute, let alone life, with that on their conscience. Oh hang on... they have no conscience.
Turlough
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I will never understand how
I will never understand how the selfish, cruel attacks and barbaric way some humans treat others, can be allowed to happen. It's such a savage and wicked waste of life.
We live on this beautiful planet earth, and should feel so lucky to be alive...yet those poor civillians that are trying to survive in their land, have to cope with this sickening evil every day and have no choice in their future,
Your poem is candid, sincere and well put.
Many thanks for sharing your words. I hope many get to read them.
Jenny.
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This part struck me most
This part struck me most strongly, as not talked about on the news etc
"Yes, mothers often pay the price
with holy wartime sacrifice:
in flight, miscarried embryos!
Quite slow as ethnic cleansing goes,
but nonetheless, one must confess,
infanticide’s a great success."
The best anyone can hope for, is when they say they will investigate whichever atrocity for which there is too much evidence do deny, as there are never any acceptances of wrong doing.
I found your jaunty rhyme and rhythm worked very well as a contrast to the horror and injustice you describe
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Have just heard on the news
A few days after you posted this, have just heard on the news about mothers, pregnant women and children queueing for supplements to help with the malnutrition caused by Netanyahu's blockade. Bombed. One of the 8 children killed is a little one year old boy, who spoke his first words to his mother hours before.
According to Google "Terrorism is the use or threat of violence, often against civilians, to instill fear and coerce governments or populations into achieving political, religious, or ideological goals"
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The style of the poem made me
The style of the poem made me think of Kipling [Echoes of "If" even with the serious subject explored here].
A very skilfully executed piece of work.
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This hard-hitting piece is
This hard-hitting piece is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.
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Congratulations.
[I would move that rating up from U to at least maybe 12. There are some brutal images in there]
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Well done and well said!
I'm very pleased that this was the pick of the day. Congratulations on your golden cherries and well done for speaking your mind.
Turlough
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Poem of the Week
This is our Poem of the Week! Congratulations!
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