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Yes, congratulations on
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022
Yes, congratulations on completing a novel-length story. Beautifully crafted throughout. Whimsy and drama. You could definitely edit and publish this if you chose to. Paul
All caught up again. You have my full admiration for the length of the story so far and the consistently high standard you achieve with each episode. You are on course to have a fully fledged novel. Keep going!
Yes, congratulations on
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022
Yes, congratulations on completing a novel-length story. Beautifully crafted throughout. Whimsy and drama. You could definitely edit and publish this if you chose to. Paul
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 32 ( Conclusions Part 2-- the ending)
Chains of daisies as an
Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022
Chains of daisies as an analogy of unity, strength yet peace. The world needs more of this thinking. Nicely done and enjoyed your poem. Paul :)
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It's a difficult one. When
Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2022
It's a difficult one. When and how to intervene on a military level. Maybe the Russians will finally get the message. Soon, I hope.
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A beautiful view and a
Posted on Wed, 16 Feb 2022
A beautiful view and a wonderful photo. I do enjoy being taken with you on these walks of yours, Rhiannon. Paul :)
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All caught up again. You have
Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021
All caught up again. You have my full admiration for the length of the story so far and the consistently high standard you achieve with each episode. You are on course to have a fully fledged novel. Keep going!
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Your poetic reminiscences are
Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021
Your poetic reminiscences are like no other, Jenny. Another gorgeous poem remembering times gone by. Paul :)
Read full commentPosted in Before We Kissed Goodnight
Wonderfully surreal and with
Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025
Wonderfully surreal and with your trademark humour, Drew.
Hopefully, life isn't enough and you keep going!
This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.
Congratulations.
Read full commentPosted in You are surprised as a published writer…
Convincing dialogue and
Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025
Convincing dialogue and engaging characters. There's your trademark philosophical musings made vicariously throughout the storyline.
A great read, Jane.
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Part 3
Poor old Meleager - done in
Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025
Poor old Meleager - done in not once but twice!
From the depths of tragedy arise wonderful flowers.
There is something magical about a mythical legend and everyday life.
Nicely done, Jenny.
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A killer finale, Hilary. A
Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2025
A killer finale, Hilary. A den of vice at the centre of a covert operation.
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