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I have 226 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 695955 times and 303 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1457 of my 4,612 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1471 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

1457 of my comments have received 1471 Great Feedback votes

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Ah so nicely done, Penny. I

Posted on Sun, 13 Aug 2023

Ah so nicely done, Penny. I do love a good ghost story and you certainly have one here. Really enjoyed. Paul 

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Posted in "Hug-a-lass"

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Lovely to hear from you, Jean

Posted on Sun, 13 Aug 2023

Lovely to hear from you, Jean. It sounds like you are still in there, fighting this thing. So sorry to hear that about your friend. Your quality of writing defies the physical challenges you are encountering. These updates will be invaluable for...

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Posted in Dozey Bella and Cippy

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 "See I have my visa

Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2023

 "See I have my visa

in the form of white skin."

 

A searing poem, Turlough. You paint such a graphic picture with a story that, I imagine, is hard to re-tell.. Issues like this need constant profile until we finally get to...

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Posted in Trip of a Lifetime

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Nicely done with a subtle

Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2023

Nicely done with a subtle twist at the end. The dialogue is great blended in with the observations. Another deft tale that's so readable

[Should that say "Last week I took all my courage..."?] 

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Posted in A confession

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"... that stand madonna

Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2023

"... that stand madonna serene in the muddy mess.."

 

Holy cows, for sure. Revered in India and allowed to roam where ever and whenever they want. You are right, we owe them so much. Really enjoyed your poem :) 

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Posted in Holy Cows

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"... weedkiller smell hangs

Posted on Thu, 10 Aug 2023

"... weedkiller smell hangs in humid air

a shroud..."

 

The desecration of nature. Beautifully articulated, of course. And moving. The bumblebee sums up so much about what's fragile in the natural world. Paul 

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Posted in begone

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I agree that decaf wine is a

Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023

I agree that decaf wine is a crime against humanity. Coffee is an interesting one. My son adores his coffee and makes the proper stuff every day with his special machine that makes all those whirring noises as it does its thing in the kitchen. Me...

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Posted in Scorn Not His Djezve

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"Because I'm eighty-eight

Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023

"Because I'm eighty-eight
they call me an old geezer
but I'm not as ancient
as the Tower of Pisa..."

 

What a wonderful, opening stanza Luigi. Adroitly done with your customary humour and talent for poetry. Enjoy...

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Posted in A Precarious Situation

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"...a place where the

Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023

"...a place where the elemental 

is welcome, willing familiars

that bring so many blessings;"

 

Another dreamy, journey into nature with Jenny. Very lovely, of course. And an adorable pic. Paul :)

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Posted in Shelter For The Weary

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Juggling so many characters

Posted on Tue, 08 Aug 2023

Juggling so many characters with believable dialogue is no mean feat. You do that really well which makes this so readable. I know it's a story that's been going for a while. Keep going. Paul 

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Posted in Ain't Nobody (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 29)

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