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I have 202 stories published in 25 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 351280 times and 263 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1221 of my 4,052 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1235 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

1221 of my comments have received 1235 Great Feedback votes

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"I watched her stretching

Posted on Mon, 23 Jan 2023

"I watched her stretching shadows.." Beautiful metaphors and images. Just wonderful, Jane 

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Posted in She said her name was Winter

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I like the nods to Poe, as

Posted on Sat, 21 Jan 2023

I like the nods to Poe, as well. Great stuff, Penny! Paul 

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Posted in Welkin Spirit

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A story within a poem with a

Posted on Sun, 15 Jan 2023

A story within a poem with a horizon that's tantalisingly out of reach and remains unsaid. Very nicely done. Paul 

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Posted in The bridge of Sante Fe

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A wonderful story that made

Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023

A wonderful story that made me smile...as did Kurt's comment above! :)

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Posted in Extraordinary Experience On The Bus

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"a quiet, cheerful giver

Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023

"a quiet, cheerful giver
not looking for thanks and honour
is truly blest
far more than the receiver,
or the ostentatious giver."

 

Those last few lines capture the moral for me. I find it easier to give than...

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Posted in For whose benefit …?

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"...to sit and fish for

Posted on Wed, 11 Jan 2023

"...to sit and fish for inspiration;

yet no ideas catch my hook." Another meditative journey. Enjoyed, of course. Paul :)

 

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Posted in Unexpected Birth Of A Poem

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"...where the wild are

Posted on Thu, 12 Jan 2023

"...where the wild are without bias,

erasing fears; for the magic of

strangeness glows...and so I let go."

 

Love that last stanza. Letting go....yes.....it pays to do that if you can. Lovely stuff, Paul

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Posted in Allowing Letting Go

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Those pesky Russians get

Posted on Thu, 12 Jan 2023

Those pesky Russians get everywhere! A highly visual, evocative piece which I enjoyed reading. Paul :)

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Posted in Mudbath! (The Ultimate Day Trip Of All Possible Day Trips!) by Alfred N. Muggins (from his recent holiday in Marmaris, Turkey!) Part 4 : (Journey Upriver To The Tombs From Turtle Beach)

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Lovely and loving memories.

Posted on Mon, 09 Jan 2023

Lovely and loving memories. Yes, a wonderful picture too. Enjoyed, of course. Paul 

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Posted in 1949

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The pot boiling nicely. And

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

The pot boiling nicely. And all that intrigue. Looking forward to the next part. Paul :) 

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 7

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