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I have 267 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1281278 times and 359 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1678 of my 5,213 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1715 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Happy New Year

It’s 23:17 at least that’s what my phone says. People don’t wear watches these days, do they? It’s pretty busy in here tonight but what do you expect...
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Empire State (Part 7 of 7): Escape

I broke from the reverie, heart beating faster, pulse raising. Sam was in danger. I could try and rush the bodyguards left to keep me here but there...
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Cherry

Empire State (Part 6 of 7): Devil in the Attic

Wicca ritual practices are often staged with followers in a sacred circle. Spells are cast to bring about changes in the real world. “The Summerland...
Cherry

A Bridge of Lies

It was the year of our Lord 1850 when my first sentence was given. My poor Mina had been transported this twelve months past. It was at the quarter...
Cherry

The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 1 of 3)

The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 1 of 3) In Norse mythology, it is said that the Norns spin the threads of fate at the foot of the tree of the world...

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1678 of my comments have received 1715 Great Feedback votes

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"Along to the incongruous

Posted on Tue, 28 May 2024

"Along to the incongruous
plantation of nine monkey puzzle trees.."

Another sumptuous hike. Enjoyed as always, Rhiannon. Beautiful photos too.

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Posted in On top of the world again!

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"The girl with the softest

Posted on Mon, 27 May 2024

"The girl with the softest edges

Who summons the stars.."

The personification of "dusk".

So many inspired, beautiful lines in this like:

"Her sermon is always of endings"

Just gorgeous.

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Posted in Dusk

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"Sea mist over the sea and

Posted on Fri, 24 May 2024

"Sea mist over the sea and distant cliffs,
walk the cliff path awhile.
Down into a cove, see a couple of oyster catchers with their red legs
near the surf.."

That sounds like an amazing walk full of wonderful sights. I...

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Posted in East from Cwm-yr-Eglwys

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I coiuld hear you reading

Posted on Fri, 24 May 2024

I could hear you reading this in my head, Ewan. Definitely one for audio. Seems so extraordinary and ridiculous calling an election in July when there's such a gulf in the polls. It's almost like giving up. Who knows? Count Binface is running...

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Posted in Empty M_______o

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"Let each pretty leafy glade

Posted on Wed, 22 May 2024

"Let each pretty leafy glade and

flowing brook give sparkling

eyes a sense of genuine wonder.."

Lovely photo, wonderful sentiments.

I was right there with you on that path, Jenny :)

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Posted in State Of Bliss

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"For fourteen years I endured

Posted on Sun, 19 May 2024

"For fourteen years I endured schools, but not nuns." Just finished watching Bodkin on Netflix set in Ireland. As ever, nuns gets a strange portrayal. They rarely get a good write-up taken even further by the likes of Father Ted.

Living in...

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Posted in This Sort of Thing - The Childhood Stage

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That's a clever premise. It

Posted on Tue, 21 May 2024

That's a clever premise. It works standalone and can be continued. Nicely done, Penny :)

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Posted in "Book of All Answers"

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"He won’t like it, he might

Posted on Fri, 17 May 2024

"He won’t like it, he might pee on Spencer.’" Well, yes...that could happen. That made me laugh.

The drama continues and you work conflicting emotions well.

That's a controversial ending. Hmmm....a slave.

Looking forward to...

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Posted in Parcel for you..Part 26

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"..the tiniest size

Posted on Tue, 21 May 2024

"..the tiniest size
and wonky,
misshapen.."

So much drama in so few words, Rhiannon. And a positive finale in let's plant something else instead. The rollercoaster emotions of gardening. Enjoyed :)

 

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Posted in The tentative gardener

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Wonderful storytelling.

Posted on Sat, 11 May 2024

Wonderful storytelling.

This is our Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

Congratulations!

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Posted in How inscrutable his ways

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