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I have 249 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1140423 times and 337 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1597 of my 4,990 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1623 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Gold cherry

A Secret Forest

We landed at Marco Polo, Azzurri gateway to the North, clutching passports we passed bleary-eyed through mundane border checks, as luggage rolled...
Cherry

Wootton Village

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/wootton-village-mp3 Slate-coloured, sombre skies cast vacuous, apocryphal runes. Carrion crows...
Cherry

The Existential Fate of Original Thought

Every day had been the same for so long now. Epicurus sat in his leather backed chair, cradling a glass of scotch, ruminating about life and the arts...
Gold cherry

The Haunted Fort of Bhangarh

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/the-haunted-fort-of-bhangahr The Haunted Fort of Bhangahr I stare out of the tinted window for...
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Cherry

The Dead Cat

Steve “Stevo” Mason never did like school. At 14 years of age, the rest of his life looked a very long way away. Particularly bright at junior level...

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1597 of my comments have received 1623 Great Feedback votes

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I like the ambiguity of the

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2024

I like the ambiguity of the finale. So who DID write the poem? Very nicely done, of course.

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Posted in Dad's poet society

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“Am I never to turn heads?”

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2024

“Am I never to turn heads?” She

flashes her father with a grieving

glance..."

 

There's an enigmatic quality that fits an ekphrastic piece very nicely. Enjoyed, Jenny :)

 

[Should that say "..to lose...

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Posted in In A Troubled Land

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A ramble in bucolic

Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2024

A ramble in bucolic countryside in sight of the Black Mountains is just what we need at this time of year. A wonderful evocation of springtime makes this our Facebook and X Pick of the Day! Please do share it round.

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Posted in Above Peterchurch, east of the Black Mountains

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Another wonderful ramble

Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2024

Another wonderful ramble through bucolic scenery. You have a keen eye for appreciating the beauty of nature, Rhiannon.

I was out walking in Braunston on Monday and it was lovely to see spring lambs in the fields.

A lovely poem,...

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Posted in Above Peterchurch, east of the Black Mountains

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That's a clever story, Jane.

Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2024

That's a clever story, Jane.

Funnily enough, I was reading a story somewhere the other day about the existence of avatars that can be trained to mimic people when they are alive then shown to future generations after their death. A kind of...

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Posted in Erazofuge

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"...those intoxicated weary

Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2024

"...those intoxicated weary

hearing drumming, moon

kisses them goodnight."

That's an evocative, poetic cacophony of the sounds of nature, Jenny. Lovely use of metaphor. Adriotly done, for sure :)

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Posted in Passion Of The Drums

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Another beautifully observed

Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2024

Another beautifully observed slice of life. You do the small details well. Really enjoyed this. 

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Posted in Is this the real life?

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Really well written - drew me

Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024

Really well written - drew me in as the story unfolded. Credible plot, for sure. Adroitly done.

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Posted in The Spa

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"..when lapse of memory

Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024

"..when lapse of memory

chases days and nights.."

Nothing worse than losing a dream you want to remember. You have done a fine creative job in producing a poem based on something so elusive. Nicely done, Jenny :)

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Posted in What's Not Written

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‘I’m not sure it is but I’ll

Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2024

‘I’m not sure it is but I’ll reserve full judgement until I see you two together and evaluate the dynamics of your relationship and if I think you’re taking advantage of him, I’ll intervene.’

Annie is a force of nature - marriage...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 22

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