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I have 202 stories published in 25 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 344799 times and 263 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1217 of my 4,044 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1231 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

1217 of my comments have received 1231 Great Feedback votes

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Thanks for reading, CM.

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

Thanks for reading, CM. Always appreciated and, yes, right on both counts. (Good win in the cup today for the Bhoys. Treble on. Hail hail) 

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Posted in Spring Skies (After the Dogs of Winter)

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I have a cherry tree in my

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

I have a cherry tree in my front garden. I wrote a poem about it a while back. It's a wonder to see the cherry blossom every year. Enjoyed your poem. Paul 

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Posted in Cherry Tree

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Great last line, Hilary! Yes

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

Great last line, Hilary! Yes those pesky birds. Enjoyed the story. Paul :)

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Posted in The Garden of Songbird Charm Part Two

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What a beautiful world you

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

What a beautiful world you have conjured, Hilary. Off to read part 2!

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Posted in The Garden of Songbird Charm

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Enjoying the role swap.

Posted on Thu, 09 Mar 2023

Enjoying the role swap. Looking forward to see what they both get up to! :) 

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Posted in The Courtier From The 21st Century Who Would Be King : The King Behind The Throne : King Henry VIII (Alfred the Great II) : Ch.2 by Alfred Muggins (himself)

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"...dreamy raindrops like

Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023

"...dreamy raindrops like pearls

of wisdom trickling down

her pane,"

 

A dreamy meditation full of beautiful imagery. Is the name "Rosa" significant? It feels like a reference to a book or a film. Anyway, enjoyed :)

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Posted in Every Moment Counts

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Appropriately named Butch. I

Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023

Appropriately named Butch. I thing a lot changed with the Lionesses in the Euros. You are right, the football was joyous to watch. Things have moved on such a great deal with equality across the sexes but, as with many other things, there is...

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Posted in Women's Day

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So many stories in your

Posted on Tue, 07 Mar 2023

So many stories in your cabinet/cupboard, Rhiannon. Mementos and memories. I like the way every item has special meaning. Enjoyed. Paul 

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Posted in Memory Medley

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Great story, Jane. Not sure I

Posted on Mon, 06 Mar 2023

Great story, Jane. Not sure I can improve on the feedback above but I didn't see the twist coming which is always a hallmark of a tale well told. You have some poetic phrases in here that take the story to another level. I really liked "....A...

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Posted in The Right to Sparkle

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Yes, I was going to say that

Posted on Sun, 05 Mar 2023

Yes, I was going to say that this happens in real life. Adroitly done, dear Luigi. Paul 

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Posted in The Tall Bookcase

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