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I have 239 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 885622 times and 321 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1538 of my 4,833 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1556 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Corinne of the School Disco

Steve “Stevo” Mason looked at his watch. He was always checking the time like it might go faster through the power of his gaze. He knew the bell was...

The Banquet (Competition entry max 1,000 words)

I live in a mansion in the country. This is no ordinary mansion; it’s an M&S mansion. Well, it’s not actually but it does house a library of...

Happy Valentines

I always did love Sadie. We were your typical childhood sweethearts who grew up and eventually got married. It was aged 12 when we shared a naive...
Gold cherry

Mehtab Bagh (Moonlight Garden)

We met on the mezzanine, lobby of splendour and gold, our bearded, mystic Hindu guide, spirited tourists into seats. Passed meandering, sacred cows,...

The Theory of Everything (take 2)

I originally posted this piece a few days ago. I had this half-arsed notion that I needed to put something up on my birthday and a rare foray to...
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1538 of my comments have received 1556 Great Feedback votes

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Not sure I ever had to endure

Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2024

Not sure I ever had to endure an appraisal by Zoom (thankfully). I imagine they are de rigeur these days. Made me shudder hearing/reading the corporate stuff, though. I imagine you are drawing from first hand experience to get it so accurate/...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 19

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Plutin, Putinpot and Putin -

Posted on Sat, 17 Feb 2024

Plutin, Putinpot and Putin - all names for the Russian horned devil. Always good to read another Muggins take on Mother Russia. I am sure that, when the time comes, Saint Peter will turn the despot away and have him duly arrested. The whole...

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Posted in Pearly Gates : A Tour of Russia’s Hell by Alfred N.Muggins Part 1

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Catharsis is a common reason

Posted on Sat, 17 Feb 2024

Catharsis is a common reason for writing. It's what brought me back to creative writing a few years ago. Maybe the gun is a metaphor, maybe it's real. Some pain never goes away and it becomes a question of finding an outlet for it along with...

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Posted in Killing the killers

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"..rivulets flowed down from

Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2024

"..rivulets flowed down from high,
thrill of an early primrose,
daffodil leaves
and seas of snowdrops on banks.."

I love the way you take everything in when on your walks, Rhiannon. You have an eye for nature and beauty...

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Posted in Up on the Mortimer Trail

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Oh yes - nicely done. The

Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2024

Oh yes - nicely done. The note disappearing works really well. 

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Posted in "Life is but a Dream"

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Well written and conceived,

Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2024

Well written and conceived, Penny. Just a thought but how would a hologram leave a handwritten note? I'm sure there's a coherent explanation in this twilight world of sci fi you have conjured.

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Posted in "Life is but a Dream"

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We use plastic heat pads that

Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2024

We use plastic heat pads that get warmed in the microwave. When they fall out of bed they make a banging noise as they hit the floor. There's nothing more comfy than taking a hot water bottle or something similar with you at night. I could relate...

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Posted in Feeling to find it

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Thanks a nice thing to say,

Posted on Mon, 12 Feb 2024

Thanks a nice thing to say, Di. I am very proud of both of my kids. James has a wandering soul. I can picture him living abroad again soon. 

Yes, my Russian and Italian are both shocking. Then again so is my English. Well... I am a Brummie...

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Posted in After Russian Rain (A Postscript from Moscow)

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"Her ring was old, her

Posted on Tue, 06 Feb 2024

"Her ring was old, her grandma's gold;

her love, commitment new and true;"

 

A thoughtful reflection of tradition and practicalities when it comes to marriage. Still a valued institution but costs need to be considered...

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Posted in Joyful, frugal celebration!

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My best mate who lives in

Posted on Mon, 05 Feb 2024

My best mate who lives in Essex these days is a Bruce Springsteen superfan. He travels the world going to his gigs. I like a lot of his music but I hear his concerts go on for ages. It's good to see Alfred Muggins diversifying in his written work...

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Posted in Jungleland (by Bruce Springsteen) : A (Belated) Review by Alfred Muggins

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