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I have 268 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1287061 times and 361 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1683 of my 5,235 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1720 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Strangers on a Street

A fleeting acquaintance can be memorable but will it be remembered? Strangers on a Street Rain cascades in near horizontal sheets, neon light dances...
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Giant Redwoods

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/giant-redwoods-mp3 Shafts of silver light cascade at twilight, a canopy bordering an evening...
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Autumn

Autumn The Harvest Moon will reach peak illumination on Monday, September 20 The Autumn Equinox is on Wednesday 22 nd September 2021 Moonlight lunar...
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With or Without You

We promise ourselves to remember…always. Sometimes memories can eventually be washed away like sandcastles on a beach… Dan Foley had waited for this...
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Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

This is the story I read live at the ABC Reading on 26 th August 2021. I understand not everyone could hear it due to technical issues so here is an...
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1683 of my comments have received 1720 Great Feedback votes

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"The summer imperceptibly is

Posted on Mon, 02 Sep 2024

"The summer imperceptibly is ending,
our path towards an end is wending..."

That's a thoughtful sweep through the seasons, Rhiannon.

Let's hope the last stanza comes true.

Very nicely done, as always.

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Posted in The Seasonal Years …

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"Beneath this canopy of

Posted on Fri, 30 Aug 2024

"Beneath this canopy of oppression

Suppression, her self-hating cousin"

You have a penchant for using metaphor within nature, Jane. And you do it very well.

Layers within the lines and leaving the reader to arrive at their...

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Posted in Forest in the Brain

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I am one of those who listen

Posted on Sun, 01 Sep 2024

I am one of those who listen to Alfred N.Muggins. He makes a lot of sense.

I see there's a General Strike in Israel now with more calls for a ceasefire with Hamas. I guess there's only so much pain people will endure.

Keep up the...

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Posted in The Man Who Almost Saved The World by Alfred N.Muggins

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It's nice to be re-united

Posted on Sun, 25 Aug 2024

It's nice to be re-united with a similar texture and feeling to "Willow's Tail".

Coming along nicely.

Keep going! :)

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 16

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The meek shall inherit the

Posted on Sat, 24 Aug 2024

The meek shall inherit the earth via the lens of mobile phone cameras.

Adriotly done, as always. Great story, great ending. 

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Posted in The meek shall inherit the earth

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Some interesting thoughts

Posted on Thu, 22 Aug 2024

Some interesting thoughts from Alfred.

Yes, challenges aplenty for the new government.

I think I saw that Starmer is giving a speech next week talking about a 'societal black hole' to be sorted - another legacy inherited from the...

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Posted in Is Britain About To Have Its Own Revolution? Asks Alfred N.Muggins

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"Look into the flames, and

Posted on Wed, 21 Aug 2024

"Look into the flames, and what do you see?
    Horses and dragons flash in and flee.."

There's a lovely rhythm to this, the words bounced along inside my head.

So many images contained and imagined. A lovely creative piece is...

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Posted in Pareidolia

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"This heat could make Prince

Posted on Sat, 17 Aug 2024

"This heat could make Prince Andrew sweat.." Yikes...that IS hot!

We are about to get the remnants of Hurricane Ernesto here. Temp is 20Cish. That's what you get for living on a wet and windy island.

"Bulgaria’s hot like a half-time...

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Posted in No Country for Cold Men

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"..family of swans, eight

Posted on Sun, 18 Aug 2024

"..family of swans, eight

fluffy infants must be cared for.."

This reminds me of West Hunsbury Country Park near me.

That's a bucolic poem and a lovely pic, Jenny. Just lovely :)

 

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Posted in Caught In Charm Of What I See

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"..he should try to persuade

Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2024

"..he should try to persuade Mrs Muggins to opt for a holiday in France soon, perhaps even next year..." Let us know if Mrs Muggins goes along with it.

"..Unfortunately Alfred has run out of croissants.." and I hope Alfred found more...

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Posted in Alfred N.Muggins Becomes An Honourary Frenchman After Watching The Opening Ceremony Of The Olympics! : Part 2

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