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I have 240 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 966960 times and 323 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1548 of my 4,865 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1567 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

Forgotten Souls

I see you late at night, as daylight’s candle flickers out, empyrean canvas painted black, stars of alabaster speak in hushed tones. Moonlight beams...
Cherry

Corinne of the School Disco

Steve “Stevo” Mason looked at his watch. He was always checking the time like it might go faster through the power of his gaze. He knew the bell was...

The Banquet (Competition entry max 1,000 words)

I live in a mansion in the country. This is no ordinary mansion; it’s an M&S mansion. Well, it’s not actually but it does house a library of...

Happy Valentines

I always did love Sadie. We were your typical childhood sweethearts who grew up and eventually got married. It was aged 12 when we shared a naive...
Gold cherry

Mehtab Bagh (Moonlight Garden)

We met on the mezzanine, lobby of splendour and gold, our bearded, mystic Hindu guide, spirited tourists into seats. Passed meandering, sacred cows,...

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1548 of my comments have received 1567 Great Feedback votes

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"But with hush intent,

Posted on Mon, 04 Mar 2024

"But with hush intent,

Stirring drowsy winter's soil."

 

That's an evocative vignette, Jenny.

 

So happy to see you writing regularly again. Paul :)

 

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Posted in Rousing Spring

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"We board the ship of fools,

Posted on Wed, 06 Mar 2024

"We board the ship of fools,
two-by-two, in borrowed shoes,
cross Gulliver’s wide uncharted seas
and miss Atlantis by 20000 leagues."

So many cultural references. A poem of great skill.

I hope you eventually find...

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Posted in The Road to Erehwon

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"...soon swards that need

Posted on Wed, 06 Mar 2024

"...soon swards that need mowing
and flowers galore.."

A lovely tribute to the changing seasons, Rhiannon. Nicely done, of course.

I can't wait for lighter and warmer nights :)

 

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Posted in Gentle march of the seasons

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A concise, poetical

Posted on Fri, 01 Mar 2024

A concise, poetical explanation for leap years. There's something magical about a 29th February isn't there? Nicely done, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Fixing the calendar

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"...is it wisps of mist or

Posted on Thu, 29 Feb 2024

"...is it wisps of mist or smoke rising in the valley below them?
and Madley large satellite-tracking dishes visible."

Another evocative ramble with you, Rhiannon. And what a way to finish. Enjoyed, of course :)

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Posted in Clehonger to Ruckhall Circular

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That's a unique way of

Posted on Mon, 26 Feb 2024

That's a unique way of painting a pen picture of a snake using the image of it being stalked by a cat. Your empathy and admiration of the serpent comes through.

"Friendly, pampered python" never thought I'd see those words in the same...

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Posted in Ophidian at Four O’Clock

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That's a wonderful story and

Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2024

That's a wonderful story and so well told through your poem, Jenny. A lovely read, for sure.

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Posted in The Fish Hawker

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Nicely done, Luigi. Gripping

Posted on Thu, 22 Feb 2024

Nicely done, Luigi. Gripping and compelling. Keep going!

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Posted in A Devil of a Man (7) - In Vino Veritas

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Such a sad story well told.

Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2024

Such a sad story well told.

[Small typo: Should be "raindrops"?]

 

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Posted in The moon is all bluish tonight

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It's ironic that Stalin was

Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2024

It's ironic that Stalin was airbrushed from Russian history and yet, as alluded to here, the ignomy of his deeds is being repeated. Perhaps in time and probably after his death, Plutin will suffer the same fate.

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Posted in Pearly Gates : A Tour of Russia’s Hell by Alfred N.Muggins Part 2

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