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I have 242 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1088079 times and 327 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1574 of my 4,935 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1598 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Existential Fate of Original Thought

Every day had been the same for so long now. Epicurus sat in his leather backed chair, cradling a glass of scotch, ruminating about life and the arts...
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The Haunted Fort of Bhangarh

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/the-haunted-fort-of-bhangahr The Haunted Fort of Bhangahr I stare out of the tinted window for...
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Cherry

The Dead Cat

Steve “Stevo” Mason never did like school. At 14 years of age, the rest of his life looked a very long way away. Particularly bright at junior level...

Eleanor Cross

Eleanor, highborn of Castile, favoured daughter of Ferdinand, beloved, revered Queen to Albion’s powerhouse: The Longshanks. Noble monarch, woman of...
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Poem of the week

Memento

I should delete these texts A permanence of darkness, where light no longer creeps, where memories fade, of bygone times. I can hardly see them now,...
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1574 of my comments have received 1598 Great Feedback votes

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"He drove her to a quiet

Posted on Fri, 15 Mar 2024

"He drove her to a quiet place.

And in the land of guns of course he had one too.

He took it out and in the seamlessness of time.."

 

That is a tragic tale, Jane. An elegiac tribute that is sad to read but so...

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Posted in Sparkly Little Paula

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Thanks for reading, T. Yes,

Posted on Fri, 15 Mar 2024

Thanks for reading, T. Yes, that was the factory I was thinking of when I read your poem a while back. It was a bit weird that so many people commented on strange smells from factories in the past in your comments thread (including me). The...

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Posted in Falling

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"..deep caves beneath

Posted on Mon, 11 Mar 2024

"..deep caves beneath capacious

gorges pensively wait to be

explored.."

Such rich and evocative imagery. A lovely tribute to Mother nature, Jenny. Paul

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Posted in Inspired By Mother Nature

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"...some sort of cyber spouse

Posted on Mon, 11 Mar 2024

"...some sort of cyber spouse kennel.." Made me laugh.

You have captured today's post-university generation in that sharply drawn profile of Annie. As always, lots of understated and clever humour that works so well.

Part 21. Wow!...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 21

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Nicely done. Very credible

Posted on Sat, 09 Mar 2024

Nicely done. Very credible interaction and, as always, you get inside the thoughts and feelings of your characters so deftly.

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Posted in Keep the perspective

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"...random twinkles

Posted on Sun, 10 Mar 2024

"...random twinkles

imitating firefly's magic.."

I hear that orchestra of nature laughing. A charming, liliting, beguiling poem for the season.

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Posted in "Good Morning"

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"...they will continue to

Posted on Tue, 05 Mar 2024

"...they will continue to grow and march

across raped surfaces until all signs of

humanity’s absurdity are masked forever."

Made me think of the apocalypic series like "The Last of Us" and "Alice in Borderland". Both have...

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Posted in Blind Faith

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"But with hush intent,

Posted on Mon, 04 Mar 2024

"But with hush intent,

Stirring drowsy winter's soil."

 

That's an evocative vignette, Jenny.

 

So happy to see you writing regularly again. Paul :)

 

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Posted in Rousing Spring

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"We board the ship of fools,

Posted on Wed, 06 Mar 2024

"We board the ship of fools,
two-by-two, in borrowed shoes,
cross Gulliver’s wide uncharted seas
and miss Atlantis by 20000 leagues."

So many cultural references. A poem of great skill.

I hope you eventually find...

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Posted in The Road to Erehwon

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"...soon swards that need

Posted on Wed, 06 Mar 2024

"...soon swards that need mowing
and flowers galore.."

A lovely tribute to the changing seasons, Rhiannon. Nicely done, of course.

I can't wait for lighter and warmer nights :)

 

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Posted in Gentle march of the seasons

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