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I have 277 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1418326 times and 375 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1751 of my 5,403 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1802 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Black Crow of Purgatory (Part 2 of 3)

Draft for a 3 part short story Part one at https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/black-crow-purgatory-part-1-3 The Black Crow of Purgatory Part 2...
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The Black Crow of Purgatory (Part 1 of 3)

Draft for a 3 part short story The Black Crow of Purgatory It is said that a crow can transport souls from the next realm back to the land of the...
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Dreams of Halloween

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/dreams-of-halloween-mp3 Dreams of Halloween In celluloid dreams I walk in graveyards of the...
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Poem of the week

Samhain and Beyond

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/samhain-and-beyond-revised-mp3 Samhain and Beyond We stand in hallowed doorways, hand in hand,...
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Strangers on a Street

A fleeting acquaintance can be memorable but will it be remembered? Strangers on a Street Rain cascades in near horizontal sheets, neon light dances...
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1751 of my comments have received 1802 Great Feedback votes

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Loved the ending, Jenny.

Posted on Tue, 03 Dec 2024

Loved the ending, Jenny.

A message for our time. Environment over greed.

If everyone followed this mantra, the world would be a much better place!

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Posted in John's Conscience

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"What a gift to the country,

Posted on Tue, 26 Nov 2024

"What a gift to the country,
what a gift to our world
the little beetle’s waste management
cleaning up our environment!"

I enjoyed the pulsing rhythm and rhyme of this.

It really is an interesting story and very...

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Posted in Pasture-Cleaners

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It's a curious one isn't it?

Posted on Mon, 25 Nov 2024

It's a curious one isn't it? Back to the old rhetoric of trade tariffs and deporting migrants. The world gets ever stranger.

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Posted in Liberal Disaster! by Alfred N.Muggins

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"...robin flaunts red breast

Posted on Sat, 23 Nov 2024

"...robin flaunts red breast in

display, showing authority

this chilly day...."

 

That's a beautiful seasonal poem full of vivid imagery.

Love the pen picture of possibly my favourite bird of all. I adore robins...

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Posted in Winter Dreams

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"..That’s a Charlie Manson

Posted on Fri, 15 Nov 2024

"..That’s a Charlie Manson quote,’ said Spencer.

‘Oh wow!’ Carol said, her voice loud and grating..."

Strong character building makes for an absorbing read.

The family interactions are so well done.

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Posted in Parcel for You..Part 41

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Extended metaphor to

Posted on Mon, 18 Nov 2024

Extended metaphor to complement a real life conflict in the protagonist's story. That's advanced stuff. I particularly like the supernatural aspect - right down my street. High quality, Jane. Really well done.

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Posted in Cricks Crocodile

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Something I have come to

Posted on Tue, 19 Nov 2024

Something I have come to realise as I get older is that all that's left in the end are memories. As long as we remember someone they live on.

Trying to make sense of it all probably does boil down to trying to enjoy every moment. Easier...

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Posted in Endings

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Oh completely wonderful. I'm

Posted on Tue, 19 Nov 2024

Oh completely wonderful. I'm a fan of Winnie the Pooh and absolutely loved reading that. This poem could appear in a collection for children. One of your best, Rhiannon!

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Posted in The Bears Discuss

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Reads like a folk tale and

Posted on Wed, 13 Nov 2024

Reads like a folk tale and skilfully done, for sure. Much enjoyed.

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Posted in The Cinnabar Moth

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[CM has servants? Who knew]

Posted on Tue, 12 Nov 2024

[CM has servants? Who knew]

It's reassuring to read about another election in Bulgaria. It didn't feature on the News at Ten here so I would have missed it completely if you hadn't mentioned it.

'Long days of tilling land'. It...

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Posted in The Tale of the Housemaid’s Knee

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