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I have 239 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 890170 times and 321 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1539 of my 4,833 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1557 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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A Secret Forest

We landed at Marco Polo, Azzurri gateway to the North, clutching passports we passed bleary-eyed through mundane border checks, as luggage rolled...
Cherry

Wootton Village

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/wootton-village-mp3 Slate-coloured, sombre skies cast vacuous, apocryphal runes. Carrion crows...
Cherry

The Existential Fate of Original Thought

Every day had been the same for so long now. Epicurus sat in his leather backed chair, cradling a glass of scotch, ruminating about life and the arts...
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The Haunted Fort of Bhangarh

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/the-haunted-fort-of-bhangahr The Haunted Fort of Bhangahr I stare out of the tinted window for...
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The Dead Cat

Steve “Stevo” Mason never did like school. At 14 years of age, the rest of his life looked a very long way away. Particularly bright at junior level...

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1539 of my comments have received 1557 Great Feedback votes

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My best mate who lives in

Posted on Mon, 05 Feb 2024

My best mate who lives in Essex these days is a Bruce Springsteen superfan. He travels the world going to his gigs. I like a lot of his music but I hear his concerts go on for ages. It's good to see Alfred Muggins diversifying in his written work...

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Posted in Jungleland (by Bruce Springsteen) : A (Belated) Review by Alfred Muggins

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A nice twist with zip-tied

Posted on Sat, 03 Feb 2024

A nice twist with zip-tied guy being a freelancer. I think Di mentioned before but just wow at writing not, not two but THREE ongoing stories at the same time. I can see a published catalogue of books coming up before too long. Good luck with it...

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Posted in "The Coffee House Spy" 14

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What an extraordinary finale

Posted on Sun, 04 Feb 2024

What an extraordinary finale - the passage about the hugs and it all being done covertly was so sad yet poignant. The patriarchal nonsense that the authorities pedal is from the Stone Age. I was talking to my OH about your Iranian travelogue and...

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Posted in Cherries and Dahlia Petals

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"‘Hey, I did get the red

Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024

"‘Hey, I did get the red flags though, despite all my fatigue. I’m interested in what you meant by a couple of words.’

 

‘Dick, wanker, knob…’"

The naivity of Spencer is so well done and creates the canvass for the fish-out-...

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Posted in Parcel for you..Part 17

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"Haggling over the price of

Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024

"Haggling over the price of the vase.." Made me think of that scene from Monty Python's "Life of Brian" where Brian haggles over a gourd (my favourite comedy movie of all time).

My lad lived in Luton for 3 years where he attended...

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Posted in Tea with the Coppersmith

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"...beautiful tracery

Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024

"...beautiful tracery
of skeletal branches on clear skies.."

A lovely vigneette with gorgeous photos, Rhiannon. Paul

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Posted in January Skies

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I don't know the answer to

Posted on Mon, 29 Jan 2024

I don't know the answer to those questions other than that number 3 is a resounding 'no'. Good to see rogue reporter Alfred Muggins back and asking the questions where others fear to tread.

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Posted in The Big Questions of the early 21st Century (or 2023/24 to be more exact!) by Alfred N.Muggins, Reporter, Distant Observer, and Civilian Adjudicator!

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Another dramatic episode.

Posted on Sun, 28 Jan 2024

Another dramatic episode. Looking forward to reading the next chapter already :)

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 12

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Up to date again with this

Posted on Mon, 29 Jan 2024

Up to date again with this ongoing travelogue.

Seven words of Farsi. Well, that's seven more words than I know.

"Kaseef Leeds" = "Dirty Leeds" I *knew it*

Yes, tours are great but time on your own is equally valuable. Another...

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Posted in The Man in the Iran Mosque

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"...not very high above the

Posted on Sat, 27 Jan 2024

"...not very high above the village but see far
and the steeple peeps to keep our orientation."

A very visual and pleasurable virtual ramble with you, Rhiannon. Lovely pics too :)

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Posted in Above Weobley

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