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I have 280 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1551465 times and 379 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1767 of my 5,455 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1823 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Florida (1987)

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/florida-1987-mp3?si=2c3f333ebb2a4a0... Florida (1987) Rays of sunlight glint through blinds,...
Cherry

The Enchantress of Avalon (Part Two of Two)

Draft for a two-part story An homage to HP Lovecraft Part One at https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/enchantress-avalon-part-one-two The...
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Cherry

The Enchantress of Avalon (Part One of Two)

Draft for a two-part story An homage to HP Lovecraft The Enchantress of Avalon (Part One of Two) It’s only now that I can remember things clearly...
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Cherry

The Wishing Tree (of Glastonbury Tor)

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/the-wishing-tree-mp3 The Wishing Tree (of Glastonbury Tor) Thoughts float like Cumulus clouds,...
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Cherry

Fading of Legends

An imagist poem Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/fading-of-legends-mp3 Fading of Legends Cassiopeia in robes of silver, night...
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1767 of my comments have received 1823 Great Feedback votes

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Ha..I haven't thought about

Posted on Sun, 09 Feb 2025

Ha..I haven't thought about it in years but I burned all my school books too. In my back garden after the final day. 

School days were bittersweet for most of us with good times and bad. I'm glad you were candid in your account as it makes...

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Posted in School Reunion

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That's a poignant vignette

Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2025

That's a poignant vignette and, I imagine, of particular significance just now. Yes, hope springs eternal and in places you least expect :)

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Posted in "Fragile"

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You can sense the tension

Posted on Fri, 31 Jan 2025

You can sense the tension which is a testimony to how this is written. The combination of racing thoughts and constant seeking. 

Spencer's wandered off without his tablets....like we all do sometimes. Well I do, anyway :)

Looking...

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 50

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I can feel the gusts of fresh

Posted on Tue, 04 Feb 2025

I can feel the gusts of fresh breeze in my lungs. 

Another wonderful ramble with you, Rhiannon. More gorgeous pics, too!

[Think there's a typo in that final line? "...as drawr back to the carpark.]

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Posted in Bringsty Common, again

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Another high octane piece. 

Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2025

Another high octane piece. 

You write at such a breathless pace. If that's how you work then you must be exhauasted after a tour of duty. 

Definitely an urban poetry feel to it and I can absolutely picture this as performance poetry...

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Posted in Alive N‘ 25*

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"...yet still I'm

Posted on Sun, 02 Feb 2025

"...yet still I'm
haunted by past voices that
consume.."

That's a reflective piece, Jenny. I sometimes think it's easier to look forward than backwards. There's no ghosts to deal with when you look ahead. Of course, they are...

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Posted in Like Autumn Leaves Scatter In The Breeze

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It's a busy agenda isn't it?

Posted on Mon, 03 Feb 2025

It's a busy agenda isn't it? So many lands to conquer. MAGA MEGA etc 

Alfred asks the questions and we ponder the answers. Thought provoking, of course.

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Posted in Trump’s Inauguration Hot Air Balloon! By Alfred N.Muggins

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The strange thing about Trump

Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025

The strange thing about Trump's reelection (at least for me) is him surviving assassination attemps. I honestly think that lots of people genuinely believe that it was divine intervention and crystalised his gains following the woeful display of...

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Posted in The Great Pretender! By Alfred N Muggins

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That's an absorbing poem,

Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2025

That's an absorbing poem, Rhiannon.

I am off to do some research as this is just my kind of thing.

Nicely done :)

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Posted in Pluto, small, far – very old?

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'It says here that they are

Posted on Fri, 24 Jan 2025

'It says here that they are plugging themselves into electric car chargers to get high.’

That's quite an image to finish with! Ooh...feral robots. This is an interesting turn of events.

Looking forward to the road trip to find...

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 49

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