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I have 218 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 510176 times and 294 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1369 of my 4,410 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1382 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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Poem of the week

Memento

I should delete these texts A permanence of darkness, where light no longer creeps, where memories fade, of bygone times. I can hardly see them now,...
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Gold cherry

Happy New Year

It’s 23:17 at least that’s what my phone says. People don’t wear watches these days, do they? It’s pretty busy in here tonight but what do you expect...
Cherry

Empire State (Part 7 of 7): Escape

I broke from the reverie, heart beating faster, pulse raising. Sam was in danger. I could try and rush the bodyguards left to keep me here but there...
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Cherry

Empire State (Part 6 of 7): Devil in the Attic

Wicca ritual practices are often staged with followers in a sacred circle. Spells are cast to bring about changes in the real world. “The Summerland...
Cherry

A Bridge of Lies

It was the year of our Lord 1850 when my first sentence was given. My poor Mina had been transported this twelve months past. It was at the quarter...

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1369 of my comments have received 1382 Great Feedback votes

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"Then I really couldn’t take

Posted on Sun, 27 Aug 2023

"Then I really couldn’t take no more, ‘cause I’d been spotted by the vicar.."
A timely, Heavenly intervention by the sounds of things. I had this image of you singing this with a guitar in hand. Might be one for the next reading! A very...

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Posted in Hot Cross Bun Blues

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Yes, beautiful photos and a

Posted on Sun, 27 Aug 2023

Yes, beautiful photos and a wonderful adaptation of a beloved hymn, Rhiannon. I could hear the tune in my head as I read along. The first four lines are gorgeous, in particular. Very nicely done. Paul

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Posted in Wow! and How?

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I don't think Alfred had much

Posted on Sun, 27 Aug 2023

I don't think Alfred had much option but to leave. Clearly no complaint resolution system as such so frustrated customers would just reappear on the line ever more angry making the call centre operator's job impossible. Onwards to better things,...

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Posted in Tuesday Morning (How To Leave Your Job!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 2

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A heart warming story for

Posted on Thu, 24 Aug 2023

A heart warming story for sure and highlights a genuine issue in society of loneliness. There are many people just looking for someone to talk to but it's something that is stigmatised to a large extent. Good on you for engaging with her. Ah......

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Posted in Nellie the Devilment

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"They too will face

Posted on Thu, 24 Aug 2023

"They too will face
in due course...."

 

Made me think of all the stuff going on with Donald Trump just now. You would like to think that there is no such thing as a "blank cheque" and that there is a reckoning to face for all...

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Posted in Mis(-chosen)chief

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"...and happy, happier than

Posted on Mon, 21 Aug 2023

"...and happy, happier than years ago.."

A reflective poem full of emotion, love and caring, Rhiannon. I agree that those pics are wonderful. That's a remarkable age. Definitely worth a family celebration. May her twilight years be filled...

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Posted in 104!

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That Michael Douglas movie is

Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2023

That Michael Douglas movie is "Falling Down". Perhaps just as well that Alfred didn't go off the rails quite like what happens in the movie! Good to see Alfred doing the right thing for him and still thinking of others (giving lifts) even when he...

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Posted in Tuesday Morning (How To Leave Your Job!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 1

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"..where

Posted on Mon, 21 Aug 2023

"..where

in copse symbol is blessed by

meandering stream..."

 

Another beautiful reverie and accompanying pic. Delightfully done, Jenny. Paul :)

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Posted in Swathed In Nature's Beauty

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Yikes....that is a grim

Posted on Sat, 19 Aug 2023

Yikes....that is a grim finale. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder even when it's inflatable. Nicely done, Jane! 

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Posted in His Bit of Fluff

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"...by net of muslin mizzle..

Posted on Thu, 17 Aug 2023

"...by net of muslin mizzle.."

Gorgeous, vignette. Nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul :)

 

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Posted in Drizzle

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