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I have 239 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 893997 times and 321 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1539 of my 4,833 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1557 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Last Elephant

Forged in bucolic harmonies, an interdependence born of millennia, a symbiosis of flora and fauna, when humanity lived as one, in a world of...
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Footsteps on Mars

In the dead of an iridescent moonlit night, in an amphitheatre of curious crickets, chirping in the rattling reed bush, I am camped under a haven of...
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Most Vial

This is a sequel to “Invisible” at https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/invisible The walls looked as dull today as they had yesterday. Paint...
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Poem of the week

Setting Sons

I have seen the spectral darkness, quiescent corridors where emotions quietly dissipate. I have been in the unlit, silent void, a vale of tears where...
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The Riot of Spring (Pictures of Pagan Russia 1913)

This week marks the 50 th anniversary of the death of Igor Stravinsky (17 th June 1882 – 6 th April 1971) Audio version at Soundcloud https://...

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1539 of my comments have received 1557 Great Feedback votes

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‘I’m not sure it is but I’ll

Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2024

‘I’m not sure it is but I’ll reserve full judgement until I see you two together and evaluate the dynamics of your relationship and if I think you’re taking advantage of him, I’ll intervene.’

Annie is a force of nature - marriage...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 22

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"All I see are double

Posted on Tue, 19 Mar 2024

"All I see are double standards, some animals are more

equal than others..."

Always good to see Orwell quoted.

Yep, the online world can really get inside your head if you let it. You have painted a picture of chaos adriotly...

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Posted in Too Many Tabs Open

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"...grape hyacinth’s blue

Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2024

"...grape hyacinth’s blue bubbles
burst up from their sleep..."

Such a sweep of colours and celebration. I think it's spring equinox today. Finally...surely....warmer days and lighter nights. I think we are due after all the rain....

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Posted in Colourful Chorus!

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Reading out loud is a big

Posted on Fri, 15 Mar 2024

Reading out loud is a big deal so well done for navigating the adrenaline-fuelled terror and euphoria that goes with events like that. Yeah...I'd love to listen if you do a recording. I haven't put anything onto SoundCloud for a while but it is a...

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Posted in More n'24

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"He drove her to a quiet

Posted on Fri, 15 Mar 2024

"He drove her to a quiet place.

And in the land of guns of course he had one too.

He took it out and in the seamlessness of time.."

 

That is a tragic tale, Jane. An elegiac tribute that is sad to read but so...

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Posted in Sparkly Little Paula

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Thanks for reading, T. Yes,

Posted on Fri, 15 Mar 2024

Thanks for reading, T. Yes, that was the factory I was thinking of when I read your poem a while back. It was a bit weird that so many people commented on strange smells from factories in the past in your comments thread (including me). The...

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Posted in Falling

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"..deep caves beneath

Posted on Mon, 11 Mar 2024

"..deep caves beneath capacious

gorges pensively wait to be

explored.."

Such rich and evocative imagery. A lovely tribute to Mother nature, Jenny. Paul

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Posted in Inspired By Mother Nature

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"...some sort of cyber spouse

Posted on Mon, 11 Mar 2024

"...some sort of cyber spouse kennel.." Made me laugh.

You have captured today's post-university generation in that sharply drawn profile of Annie. As always, lots of understated and clever humour that works so well.

Part 21. Wow!...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 21

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Nicely done. Very credible

Posted on Sat, 09 Mar 2024

Nicely done. Very credible interaction and, as always, you get inside the thoughts and feelings of your characters so deftly.

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Posted in Keep the perspective

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"...random twinkles

Posted on Sun, 10 Mar 2024

"...random twinkles

imitating firefly's magic.."

I hear that orchestra of nature laughing. A charming, liliting, beguiling poem for the season.

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Posted in "Good Morning"

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