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I have 259 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1205723 times and 349 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1622 of my 5,056 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1658 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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Samhain and Beyond

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/samhain-and-beyond-revised-mp3 Samhain and Beyond We stand in hallowed doorways, hand in hand,...
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Strangers on a Street

A fleeting acquaintance can be memorable but will it be remembered? Strangers on a Street Rain cascades in near horizontal sheets, neon light dances...
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Giant Redwoods

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/giant-redwoods-mp3 Shafts of silver light cascade at twilight, a canopy bordering an evening...
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Cherry

Autumn

Autumn The Harvest Moon will reach peak illumination on Monday, September 20 The Autumn Equinox is on Wednesday 22 nd September 2021 Moonlight lunar...
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Story of the week

With or Without You

We promise ourselves to remember…always. Sometimes memories can eventually be washed away like sandcastles on a beach… Dan Foley had waited for this...
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1622 of my comments have received 1658 Great Feedback votes

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Nicely done and you should

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

Nicely done and you should definitely carry on with this. It reads like ideal fiction for children/young adults with its lilting narrative. Looking forward to the next part

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"A causeway of slimy stones

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

"A causeway of slimy stones

As green as beer bottles

Shattered and scattered.."
 

That an evocative poem with pen pictures drawn so distinctly.

Took me to another time and place.

Fine work indeed.

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Posted in Tang Hall Beck

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"A family of bears had a nice

Posted on Sat, 20 Jul 2024

"A family of bears had a nice little cottage,
Mother Bear made them their breakfast porridge.."

That's an inventive take on the classic story.

Very enjoyable, Rhiannon.

And a lovely picture :)

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I always though mum went to

Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024

I always thought mum went to Iceland. Hmmm....maybe that was an ad...

That's a very creative poem about Eric/Iceland. It's actually very clever the way you have interwoven the theme of country and store, blending humour with dry...

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Posted in Eric’s War

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Was talking about Putin only

Posted on Thu, 18 Jul 2024

Was talking about Putin only yesterday. History has a habit of repeating itself so I wondered whether he would be airbrushed from history in the same way Stalin was in Russia after his death. I'm sure they would make good soul brothers if they...

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Posted in Pearly Gates : A Tour of Russia’s Hell by Alfred N.Muggins Part 3

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"Vanessa suddenly remembered

Posted on Tue, 16 Jul 2024

"Vanessa suddenly remembered what Cher sounded like with autotune.." Made me laugh...I think I know the song you are referring to.

You have built up to this latest set-piece so well. I can only imagine how Spencer will get on at a festival...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 29

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Well at least Masoud

Posted on Tue, 16 Jul 2024

Well at least Masoud Pezeshkian won the run-off to become the President in Iran. A relative moderate, he now needs to dial down the influence of the Theocrats. Let's hope it leads to better relations with the West and other countries in that...

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Posted in An Easter Message Of Confusion from Alfred N.Muggins Part 3

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"..don’t bring your sister

Posted on Mon, 15 Jul 2024

"..don’t bring your sister

she’s too Jung to go."

Ah yes, cleverly done and very entertaining to read.

 

I imagine this is intended below in the way the words merge together? You are so creative with your poetry so...

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Posted in An Anarchist Evening at the Magic Theatre

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Nicely paced as always and a

Posted on Sat, 13 Jul 2024

Nicely paced as always and a meaningful finale. A pleasure to read.

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Posted in The things we do for love

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Thanks for those links, Di.

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

Thanks for those links, Di.

I guess the shopping list of issues to be resolved will always be weighty. Human beings are a deeply flawed species. On the upside, young people seem to be more aware and in touch with things like environmental...

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Posted in "For, being green, there is great hope" (quote from Shakespeare's HENRY VI PART 2, ACT 3 SCENE 1)

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