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I have 260 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1229403 times and 351 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1638 of my 5,101 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1675 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Florida (1987)

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/florida-1987-mp3?si=2c3f333ebb2a4a0... Florida (1987) Rays of sunlight glint through blinds,...
Cherry

The Enchantress of Avalon (Part Two of Two)

Draft for a two-part story An homage to HP Lovecraft Part One at https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/enchantress-avalon-part-one-two The...
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Cherry

The Enchantress of Avalon (Part One of Two)

Draft for a two-part story An homage to HP Lovecraft The Enchantress of Avalon (Part One of Two) It’s only now that I can remember things clearly...
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Cherry

The Wishing Tree (of Glastonbury Tor)

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/the-wishing-tree-mp3 The Wishing Tree (of Glastonbury Tor) Thoughts float like Cumulus clouds,...
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Cherry

Fading of Legends

An imagist poem Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/fading-of-legends-mp3 Fading of Legends Cassiopeia in robes of silver, night...
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1638 of my comments have received 1675 Great Feedback votes

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That's an interesting analogy

Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024

That's an interesting analogy - slaying the far-right dragon. Maybe although we tend to over simplify with labels and terms. Social unrest only really goes away when the root cause for the issues are resolved or at least seen to be given time and...

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Posted in The New King Arthur Slays His First Dragon! By Alfred N.Muggins

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"..when trees flecked with

Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024

"..when trees flecked with fireflies in magical lightshow,

flickering rhythm encountered as lightening flashes.."

That's a highly visual, magical sequence of images. Just gorgeous, Jenny.

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Posted in Enchanted insects

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This wonderfully evocative

Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024

This wonderfully evocative poem drawn from another time and place is a joy to read. That's why it's today's Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

I have added a picture to promote your work on social media. Please let me know if you...

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Posted in Before Maps Were Made

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It's another irrestible mix

Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024

It's another irrestible mix of magic and intrigue. Looking forward to reading more :)

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 17

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There's a sense of euphoria

Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024

There's a sense of euphoria at the story's climax. Yet still the frailties of the human condition shine through. As ever, you lead the reader through a tale that reads like a modern fable. Enjoyed as always.

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Posted in How much is still left

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"I’m learning how to shear

Posted on Fri, 13 Sep 2024

"I’m learning how to shear alpacas.." That's exactly the kind of thing my daughter would do!

The family dynamics are done so well, Jane. Vanessa's relationship with her quirky offspring and the nuances of how this contrasts with the...

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Posted in Parcel for You.. - Part 34

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That's a big twist and the

Posted on Tue, 10 Sep 2024

That's a big twist for the Muggins time-travel saga. Waves of immigration from the past! I can't wait to read what happens next. Can Henry VIII re-take his kingdom in another time? Read on. And I will!

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Posted in The Courtier From The 21st Century Who Would Be King : The King Behind The Throne : King Henry VIII (Alfred the Great II) : Ch.7 by Alfred Muggins (himself) The Real Henry VIII Finds His Feet In 21st Century England! Ch.7 Part 1

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"..bring peace in some

Posted on Thu, 12 Sep 2024

"..bring peace in some measure where there’s fighting now.." Wise words, Rhiannon. And more relevant than ever with the conflicts currently ongoing.

I so hope that "..love will flow earthwide.."

Beautifully expressed words.

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Posted in All related

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That's an evocative poem,

Posted on Thu, 12 Sep 2024

That's an evocative poem, Jenny. A pen-picture beautifully drawn as always. Just lovely.

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Posted in Escape To Ridgeway

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Another wonderfully unique

Posted on Sat, 07 Sep 2024

Another wonderfully unique tale.

That's why this is our Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

Congratulations, Itane.

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Posted in No escape from reality

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