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I have 278 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1526276 times and 377 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1763 of my 5,432 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1819 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3)

You can read part one here: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/horses-wooldale-road-part-1-3 The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3) The...
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The Raven Returned

An homage to my favourite poem “The Raven” by Edgar Allan Poe Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/the-raven-returned-mp3 The Raven...
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Anniversary

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/anniversary-mp3 When we promise to remember Anniversary Time slipping away like sands, ground...
Gold cherry

Back In Kansas

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/back-in-kansas-mp3 Back in Kansas Lightening zags across a cobalt horizon, splintered,...
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Cherry

In a Land of Magicians

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/in-a-land-of-magicians-mp3 If you believe in something enough, can it become real? In a Land...

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1763 of my comments have received 1819 Great Feedback votes

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Who knew there was such an

Posted on Thu, 01 May 2025

Who knew there was such an intricate etiquette to picking flowers? 

I really like the way the story turns upside down then rights itself again with an underlying message. Respect. 

Lots of craft, guile and skill in this tale, of...

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Posted in Semper Augustus

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A lovely vignette of April

Posted on Thu, 01 May 2025

A lovely vignette of April woods. 

Lovely pics too, Rhiannon. 

What a glorious time of year, this is!

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Posted in Wild Garlic, Ramsons

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That's a captivating story,

Posted on Mon, 28 Apr 2025

That's a captivating story, Ed. Deftly crafted and I like the 'true irony' link.

[Maybe a couple of typos. Should the below read:

'..just lots of cars and lorries."

"..when she chose a bedspread.."

I think that font...

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Posted in Dobe Island; My Place in the Sun

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A powerful short story, Jenny

Posted on Fri, 25 Apr 2025

A powerful short story, Jenny. Memories can haunt; this tale lingers and makes its point.

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Posted in More Than We Bargained For

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Beguiling and beautiful. 

Posted on Thu, 24 Apr 2025

Beguiling and beautiful. 

That's why this wonderful poem is today's Facebook, X/Twitter & BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations :)

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Posted in The Heronning

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'...violet helps us be wise..

Posted on Mon, 21 Apr 2025

'...violet helps us be wise...'

Seen quite a few violets in bloom just recently including some in my garden.

Such a beautiful time of year just now.

You have captured the joy in this poem, Rhiannon :)

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Posted in Peeping through …

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That's a heartwarming story.

Posted on Sat, 19 Apr 2025

That's a heartwarming story. I can imagine that becoming a screenplay. 

There's a raw honesty to it and a sliding doors pen picture of conflicting worlds. 

I guess we are lucky to be born into the one we are in. For the most part....

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Posted in When Life Gives You Flags

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"...probably whack him with

Posted on Fri, 18 Apr 2025

"...probably whack him with an umbrella to get him to move out of the way. " That line made me laugh :o)

Robot Wars - I *knew* it.

That's a helluva an ending.

You've set the next sequence up so well!

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 58

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More conflict to drive the

Posted on Fri, 11 Apr 2025

More conflict to drive the plot. And not where you might expect to find it. 

Scandal. Robotic scandal.

Looking forward to reading more.

Keep going!

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 57

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"..stay silent – watchful

Posted on Sat, 12 Apr 2025

"..stay silent – watchful through seasons,

pride in your senescent:: Worthy Majesty."

That's a big finish, Jenny. Trees are the best of us.

A wonderful poem, right there!

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Posted in Mighty Ancient Oak

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