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I have 239 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 894861 times and 321 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1539 of my 4,833 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1557 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

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and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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Poem of the week

Samhain and Beyond

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/samhain-and-beyond-revised-mp3 Samhain and Beyond We stand in hallowed doorways, hand in hand,...
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Strangers on a Street

A fleeting acquaintance can be memorable but will it be remembered? Strangers on a Street Rain cascades in near horizontal sheets, neon light dances...
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Cherry

Giant Redwoods

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/giant-redwoods-mp3 Shafts of silver light cascade at twilight, a canopy bordering an evening...
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Cherry

Autumn

Autumn The Harvest Moon will reach peak illumination on Monday, September 20 The Autumn Equinox is on Wednesday 22 nd September 2021 Moonlight lunar...
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Story of the week

With or Without You

We promise ourselves to remember…always. Sometimes memories can eventually be washed away like sandcastles on a beach… Dan Foley had waited for this...
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1539 of my comments have received 1557 Great Feedback votes

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"The girl with the softest

Posted on Mon, 27 May 2024

"The girl with the softest edges

Who summons the stars.."

The personification of "dusk".

So many inspired, beautiful lines in this like:

"Her sermon is always of endings"

Just gorgeous.

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"Sea mist over the sea and

Posted on Fri, 24 May 2024

"Sea mist over the sea and distant cliffs,
walk the cliff path awhile.
Down into a cove, see a couple of oyster catchers with their red legs
near the surf.."

That sounds like an amazing walk full of wonderful sights. I...

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Posted in East from Cwm-yr-Eglwys

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I coiuld hear you reading

Posted on Fri, 24 May 2024

I could hear you reading this in my head, Ewan. Definitely one for audio. Seems so extraordinary and ridiculous calling an election in July when there's such a gulf in the polls. It's almost like giving up. Who knows? Count Binface is running...

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"Let each pretty leafy glade

Posted on Wed, 22 May 2024

"Let each pretty leafy glade and

flowing brook give sparkling

eyes a sense of genuine wonder.."

Lovely photo, wonderful sentiments.

I was right there with you on that path, Jenny :)

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Posted in State Of Bliss

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"For fourteen years I endured

Posted on Sun, 19 May 2024

"For fourteen years I endured schools, but not nuns." Just finished watching Bodkin on Netflix set in Ireland. As ever, nuns gets a strange portrayal. They rarely get a good write-up taken even further by the likes of Father Ted.

Living in...

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Posted in This Sort of Thing - The Childhood Stage

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That's a clever premise. It

Posted on Tue, 21 May 2024

That's a clever premise. It works standalone and can be continued. Nicely done, Penny :)

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Posted in "Book of All Answers"

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"He won’t like it, he might

Posted on Fri, 17 May 2024

"He won’t like it, he might pee on Spencer.’" Well, yes...that could happen. That made me laugh.

The drama continues and you work conflicting emotions well.

That's a controversial ending. Hmmm....a slave.

Looking forward to...

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Posted in Parcel for you..Part 26

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"..the tiniest size

Posted on Tue, 21 May 2024

"..the tiniest size
and wonky,
misshapen.."

So much drama in so few words, Rhiannon. And a positive finale in let's plant something else instead. The rollercoaster emotions of gardening. Enjoyed :)

 

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Posted in The tentative gardener

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Wonderful storytelling.

Posted on Sat, 11 May 2024

Wonderful storytelling.

This is our Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

Congratulations!

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Posted in How inscrutable his ways

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“This is my spot

Posted on Wed, 15 May 2024

“This is my spot
the place I’ve got
a space that is not
for the doing
and the toing and froing.."

A special spot is a wondrous thing.

You capture one so evocatively, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Time-out Spot

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