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I have 186 stories published in 23 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 279989 times and 240 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1085 of my 3,697 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1097 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton. I love to write but get distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought. My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

I think that everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have short stories published in a horror anthology by @thealienbuddha, anthology Vol.IV by @LoftPublishing and flash fiction at @paragraphplanet.

Poems of mine have been published by @thealienbuddha (The Alien Buddha Gets Rejected) and @blackboughpoems (Winter-Christmas Anthology 2023).

I have new stories published in 2023 by @darkwinterlit and @thealienbuddha (Halloween anthology and ABZ55 at ABP) along with appearing in an anthology by @LoftPublishing (Anthology Vol V).

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Empire State (Part 7 of 7): Escape

I broke from the reverie, heart beating faster, pulse raising. Sam was in danger. I could try and rush the bodyguards left to keep me here but there...
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Empire State (Part 6 of 7): Devil in the Attic

Wicca ritual practices are often staged with followers in a sacred circle. Spells are cast to bring about changes in the real world. “The Summerland...
Cherry

A Bridge of Lies

It was the year of our Lord 1850 when my first sentence was given. My poor Mina had been transported this twelve months past. It was at the quarter...
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The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 1 of 3)

The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 1 of 3) In Norse mythology, it is said that the Norns spin the threads of fate at the foot of the tree of the world...
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Christmas Time

Silent reflections of latter day Saints, Kings and martyrs in Christian lore. Magi bearing gifts, led by a star, instructed by Herod, malevolence...

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1085 of my comments have received 1097 Great Feedback votes

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Enjoying the role swap.

Posted on Thu, 09 Mar 2023

Enjoying the role swap. Looking forward to see what they both get up to! :) 

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Posted in The Courtier From The 21st Century Who Would Be King : The King Behind The Throne : King Henry VIII (Alfred the Great II) : Ch.2 by Alfred Muggins (himself)

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"...dreamy raindrops like

Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023

"...dreamy raindrops like pearls

of wisdom trickling down

her pane,"

 

A dreamy meditation full of beautiful imagery. Is the name "Rosa" significant? It feels like a reference to a book or a film. Anyway, enjoyed :)

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Posted in Every Moment Counts

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Appropriately named Butch. I

Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023

Appropriately named Butch. I thing a lot changed with the Lionesses in the Euros. You are right, the football was joyous to watch. Things have moved on such a great deal with equality across the sexes but, as with many other things, there is...

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Posted in Women's Day

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So many stories in your

Posted on Tue, 07 Mar 2023

So many stories in your cabinet/cupboard, Rhiannon. Mementos and memories. I like the way every item has special meaning. Enjoyed. Paul 

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Posted in Memory Medley

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Great story, Jane. Not sure I

Posted on Mon, 06 Mar 2023

Great story, Jane. Not sure I can improve on the feedback above but I didn't see the twist coming which is always a hallmark of a tale well told. You have some poetic phrases in here that take the story to another level. I really liked "....A...

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Posted in The Right to Sparkle

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Yes, I was going to say that

Posted on Sun, 05 Mar 2023

Yes, I was going to say that this happens in real life. Adroitly done, dear Luigi. Paul 

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Posted in The Tall Bookcase

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Enjoyed, Mark. Yes,

Posted on Sun, 05 Mar 2023

Enjoyed, Mark. Yes, feathering the coffin nest for the rich and privileged. I like the way the story reads as a metaphor for the working class being oppressed and desperate enough to be exploited in this way. Of course, nobody in their right mind...

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Posted in 37 Degrees Celsius (part II)

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Wow Alfred swapping with

Posted on Wed, 01 Mar 2023

Wow Alfred swapping with Henry VIII - looking forward to reading more! 

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Posted in The Courtier From The 21st Century Who Would Be King : The King Behind The Throne : King Henry VIII (Alfred the Great II) : Ch.1 by Alfred Muggins (himself)

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I enjoyed your soothing

Posted on Wed, 01 Mar 2023

I enjoyed your soothing euphony of nature's music. And that's a great diary reminder. We should all make the same one :) 

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Posted in Summer's Creation

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Black gold. Mmmmm....anything

Posted on Mon, 27 Feb 2023

Black gold. Mmmmm....anything that goes with salty bacon. It all sounds so delicious. And who knew there was a Welshman's caviar?! :)

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Posted in Welshman’s caviar (bara lawr)

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