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I have 268 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1285597 times and 361 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1682 of my 5,225 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1719 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3)

You can read part one here: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/horses-wooldale-road-part-1-3 The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3) The...
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The Raven Returned

An homage to my favourite poem “The Raven” by Edgar Allan Poe Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/the-raven-returned-mp3 The Raven...
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Anniversary

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/anniversary-mp3 When we promise to remember Anniversary Time slipping away like sands, ground...
Gold cherry

Back In Kansas

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/back-in-kansas-mp3 Back in Kansas Lightening zags across a cobalt horizon, splintered,...
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Cherry

In a Land of Magicians

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/in-a-land-of-magicians-mp3 If you believe in something enough, can it become real? In a Land...

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1682 of my comments have received 1719 Great Feedback votes

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That's an interesting,

Posted on Tue, 31 Dec 2024

That's an interesting, philosophical discussion about the merits of a robot partner.

The story has layers which keeps the reader on their toes.

Looking forward to the next part..

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 45

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That's a sage-like tale right

Posted on Tue, 31 Dec 2024

That's a sage-like tale right there. Just two people from different generations putting the world to rights. Nicely done and a Happy New Year to you.

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Posted in All The World Before Us

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Cheers, T.

Posted on Fri, 27 Dec 2024

Cheers, T.

May 2025 bring us promotion to the Premier League or further qualification for the CL.

As Shankly said "Some people believe football is a matter of life and death, I am very disappointed with that attitude. I can assure...

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Posted in Carols at Midnight

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"What a surprise to see

Posted on Fri, 27 Dec 2024

"What a surprise to see
a chameleon on a little Christmas tree!"

An unexpected and intriguing story captured so poetically, Rhiannon.

Can't recall a Christmas tale involving a chameleon before.

Yes, blending in, of...

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Posted in How did the chameleon get on the Christmas Tree?

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"..saw

Posted on Fri, 27 Dec 2024

"..saw
two bright round eyes
beady brown – Shriek! surprise!"

That's a highly visual tale told with dramatic effect. Skilfully done, Rhiannon.

Unexpected visitors, for sure. Enjoyed this.

Happy New Year to you....

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Posted in Rustle!

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The uninhibited voice that

Posted on Mon, 23 Dec 2024

The uninhibited voice that blurts out inner thoughts is such fertile ground for comedy and drama. Much more to come from this story, I'm sure.

The dialogue is credible and the pacing works well.

Keep going!

Merry Christmas...

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 44

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A happy ending and a right

Posted on Sat, 21 Dec 2024

A happy ending and a right palava by the sounds of it. It's as though fate intervened to help when you noticed those plane tickets going. [Lullaby by the Cure is about a nightmare involving a spider trying to eat Robert Smith. Hmmmmm]

I...

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Posted in The Day of the Drone - Luton to the Rescue

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Reading this made me think of

Posted on Fri, 20 Dec 2024

Reading this made me think of "Planes, Trains and Automobiles" - a movie I adore. I have you down as the Bulgarian Steve Martin. There are many wonderful, altruistic people in the world and some appear in your story. Coming to the rescue of a...

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Posted in The Day of the Drone - Gatwick Misery

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That's a joyful update, Jenny

Posted on Sun, 22 Dec 2024

That's a joyful update, Jenny.

So glad you have made it out of that tunnel.

Bright times ahead for you.

Keep smiling and hoping you are having a wonderful Yuletide :)

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Posted in Bright Side Of Life

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Three Wise Men....hard to

Posted on Tue, 24 Dec 2024

Three Wise Men....hard to come by, these days. Clever adaptation paralleling events of today. Nicely done, Alfred.

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Posted in Sojourn In Palestine (Welcome To Palestine!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 1

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