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I have 218 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 510342 times and 294 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1369 of my 4,410 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1382 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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Punters

This is the fourth entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co It had been a long, old Pandemic...
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Another Night On a Bare Mountain

Night on a Bare Mountain (aka Night on Bald Mountain) is a series of compositions written by composer Modest Mussorgsky (1839 – 1881). It was only...
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Penalties

On 11 th July 2021 the England Football team lost on penalties to Italy after a 1-1 draw having played extra time in the Final of the Euro2020...
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Steve Mason and the Music Nazi

This is the third entry in the Steve Mason’s School Days at https://www.abctales.com/collection/steve-masons-school-days Steve “Stevo” Mason just...
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Where The Streets Have No Blame

I pass you on the desolate streets, huddled under weather-worn blankets, in dimly lit, dank shop doorways, the smell of wandering urine is acidic,...

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1369 of my comments have received 1382 Great Feedback votes

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"....no ‘door to Grandap’s’

Posted on Tue, 14 Nov 2023

"....no ‘door to Grandap’s’ to knock
when they want to share!"

An important event captured in verse. Family moments are what life is all about. Yes, that is so lovely that you are all so close geographically.

[My daughter...

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Posted in 13/11/23

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"I am all the tales you told

Posted on Tue, 14 Nov 2023

"I am all the tales you told about me.."

Wonderfully evocative. I like the format. It adds an enigmatic feel :)

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Posted in Blackthorn

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"Like Leeds United thrashing

Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2023

"Like Leeds United thrashing Villa.."

I can't recall this event. Just how far are we going back?!

I thought this was going to be your diary entry from your blog post for some reason. Anyway, I enjoyed this too (13 league wins at...

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Posted in My Verbal Diary Here

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"...swollen storage-leaves in

Posted on Thu, 09 Nov 2023

"...swollen storage-leaves in cosy house
hibernating like the tiny dormouse..."

Adriotly done with some lovely pics to boot, Rhiannon. That's an interesting analogy as well - winter refugees. Well, yes. Just lovely :)

 

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Posted in Winter Refuges

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Ah...next time I'm in the

Posted on Tue, 07 Nov 2023

Ah...next time I'm in the cereal aisle emitting heavy sighs I will know I am in "depressed man setting." You have created a wonderful character in Spencer, Jane. Looking forward to reading more :)

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 7

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A beguiling story. Nicely

Posted on Sun, 05 Nov 2023

A beguiling story. Nicely constructed with an eco message and a sinister finale. I could visualise the settings which added so much depth to the tale, figuratively and literally. Great stuff, Sim. Paul

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Posted in The Fisherwoman and the Sea

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Netanyahu is hinting at

Posted on Mon, 06 Nov 2023

Netanyahu is hinting at indefinite control over Gaza now moving away from the stance of cutting all ties once Hamas is defeated. This does not bode well for any kind of peace in this region. I'm afraid this instability and violence could go on...

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Posted in The Book of Alfred the Great II (Muggins!), as written by that famous prophet of Past Present and Future!

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Hi Jean. The journey

Posted on Mon, 06 Nov 2023

Hi Jean. The journey continues and you take us with you in your writing. It's a rollercoaster for sure and we are all rooting for you. You are one of the bravest people I know. Keep smiling and stay positive. Yes, definitely an inspiration. As...

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Posted in chemo 2 - session 2

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"Fizzy fireworks, sparkling

Posted on Thu, 02 Nov 2023

"Fizzy fireworks, sparkling lights:
no fear here
of ghosts or bombs.."

 

The joy just jumps out of this poem. Perfect for this time of year. Just lovely, Rhiannon :)

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Posted in Firework party, a little early

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Some interesting historical

Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023

Some interesting historical comparisons and interesting that these may be your own thoughts rather than rogue reporter - Alfred Muggins. Civilians are inevitably the innocent victims of war. We continue to hope for common sense to prevail.

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Posted in Civilians In War

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